writing Chikorita's Wonderful World of Writing

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I decided to archive all my writing in this thread. I'll start by showing my original work.

 

I'm writing episodes for my idea for a cartoon. It's called Magic Tricks. It's a bout three magicians who share a rivalry and them and their kids get into many misadventures and situations.

 

It's mostly a comedy with some seriousness thrown in. People have compared the comedy to shows like MLP or Phineas and Ferb. I will post what I have written now and will post more as I write more:

 

Pilot

 

Parents Night

 

Danger Mark

 

Magic Cards

 

It's All in the Rubber Nose

 

A Little Pigeon Told Me

 

My Dinner with the Walkers

 

Here are the episodes I have written. Enjoy. Please posts thoughts and constructive criticism.

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Note: I really do wanna get some thoughts on my writing to figure out my strengths and some constructive criticism to figure out my weaknesses. 

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And the next episode is posted on my blog and here. Be sure to post your thoughts.