critique wanted [Critique Wanted] Maple Berry; My Second Attempt at drawing an OC

[Vulcan 3,254]

I tried to study more on the pony anatomy like you guys said and I gotta say the doodles look a lot better!

So I made another OC, her name is Maple Berry,

I wanted to know what points I could improve to reach the next level of drawing ponies...^ ^ 

Edited December 5, 2015 by Vulcan

[Pinkiest Pie 405]

It looks great ,@, I absolutely love it! Great drawing my friend.

[Vulcan 3,254]

Thanks @,     That means I'm a step closer to being good enough to join the folks at the requests guild...maybe after I master the legs...they're just so hard T_T

Edited December 5, 2015 by Vulcan

[DuskRain 193]

Its great! I really love the style, it looks like a scratchy old painting.

[Vulcan 3,254]

Its great! I really love the style, it looks like a scratchy old painting.

 

Thank you :3 I never really thought of it that way ^ ^

[Kenshiro 13,493]

Hey Mapple , i am Kenshiro. Vulcan; You need to work on proportion details. Shh, don't say anything to Mapple, ok ? '''

[Vulcan 3,254]

@@Kenshiro,  

 

noted! thank you very much!

[Noonenew12 89]

She so cute! :3 really good job!