✤【Lullaby For A Princess】✳ 【Dramatic Orchestra】✤

[PlutonNT 5]

I made this version a while ago, I would like to share with everyone too

 

Edited February 9, 2016 by PlutonNT

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That piano...too loud and too bright! Gotta mellow it out. As a matter of fact, I think you need a high quality sampled piano with different velocities. It all sounds like it's running through the same velocities. Either find away to vary up the dynamics, or find a good piano sampler. I suggest looking into garritan, where you can find great quality samples, such as the Steinway Grand. As for the part itself, it sounds pretty good. The lack of dynamics just stale it out...

 

Your strings need a bit more expression. Although they have vibrato, there's somewhat of a cut at the end of each sample.

 

You're missing brass, woodwinds and percussion! Where are they? 

 

All in all, this arragement could use quite a bit of work. I am here if you need help. 

[PlutonNT 5]

That piano...too loud and too bright! Gotta mellow it out. As a matter of fact, I think you need a high quality sampled piano with different velocities. It all sounds like it's running through the same velocities. Either find away to vary up the dynamics, or find a good piano sampler. I suggest looking into garritan, where you can find great quality samples, such as the Steinway Grand. As for the part itself, it sounds pretty good. The lack of dynamics just stale it out...

 

Your strings need a bit more expression. Although they have vibrato, there's somewhat of a cut at the end of each sample.

 

You're missing brass, woodwinds and percussion! Where are they? 

 

All in all, this arragement could use quite a bit of work. I am here if you need help. 

 

 

as I said, this being one of the versions, this has only strings, and is focused between the piano and the violin, I chose not to use almost the vibrato, opting for a more fluid music so to speak, smooth, I appreciate the criticism, but I plan for a few different versions, including passing the melody to other instruments if you want you can check out some of the other versions, however I have not uploaded all ThankS!