critique wanted Critique for my OC

[Sporemane 546]

Hello, I'm looking for advice/critiques for my ponified Dean Martin OC. I'm a huge fan of the Rat Pact and I was inspired to make a OC based off my favorite member of the group Dean Martin. I'm unsure about making a OC based off of a celebrity, any advice would be appreciated.

 

Age: 30

 

Gender: Male

 

Species: Pegasus

 

Appearance: A dark brown Pegasus with a black curly mane and tail wearing a tux. Cutie Mark: A glass of Whisky and a Microphone

 

Personality: Classy, Honest, Charming, Easygoing, Stoned, Talented, Tuff, Dependable, Stubborn

 

Backstory: Crooner Trotcetti is a struggling talented singer born in Manehatten. He's always looking for a way to make a few extra bits. Whether it's singing in a saloon, working behind a bar, dealing cards in one of the cities speakeasies, Or boxing for bits. Crooners goal is to make it big in Manehatten by becoming a famous singer then move to Las Pegasus to become a Movie Star.

Edited May 11, 2016 by Sporemane

[LordSwinton 759]

Could use with some more info. Like where's he from? what made him start singing? cutie mark story?

[Sporemane 546]

Could use with some more info. Like where's he from? what made him start singing? cutie mark story?

Thanks for the suggestions