Daring Do and the Land of the Alicorns

[Lord Valtasar 12,691]

even with the expanded map there is very little information about the original alicorns lands so i thought it would be an awesome Daring Do adventure to find their lost city
I find it very intresting that Twilight's cutie mark apears to exist even before she does,on the tree of harmony so i thought it would make an awesome symbol of powerfull magic for the alicorn temples
i just got into this series/fandom so if there's official information about this stuff and i have it different don't read too much into it
p.s. I only made the picture i don't have a story or anything
you are free to use the image in any way (non-profit)

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

This is some fine work, great setting and fantastic work with the architectural aspect. Some nice aesthetics indeed, props ^^

[Lord Valtasar 12,691]

6 minutes ago, Shadow Beam said:

This is some fine work, great setting and fantastic work with the architectural aspect. Some nice aesthetics indeed, props ^^

thanks,to tell you the truth i just wanted somewhere to put more statues so that i can practice the pony anatomy so i added more buildings

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

16 minutes ago, lordvaltasar said:

thanks,to tell you the truth i just wanted somewhere to put more statues so that i can practice the pony anatomy so i added more buildings

It does add some flavour to the piece so it was a good idea overall.

[emma_22 30]

I think than turning this into a picture story. then it would be fantastic.

[Lord Valtasar 12,691]

1 hour ago, emma_22 said:

I think than turning this into a picture story. then it would be fantastic.

maybe someday,for now i like to experiment with different concepts in each piece

[RaphLuna 307]

On 6/18/2018 at 6:00 PM, lordvaltasar said:

even with the expanded map there is very little information about the original alicorns lands so i thought it would be an awesome Daring Do adventure to find their lost city
I find it very intresting that Twilight's cutie mark apears to exist even before she does,on the tree of harmony so i thought it would make an awesome symbol of powerfull magic for the alicorn temples
i just got into this series/fandom so if there's official information about this stuff and i have it different don't read too much into it
p.s. I only made the picture i don't have a story or anything
you are free to use the image in any way (non-profit)

Omg looks like Daring came across an Ancient Civilization that once thrived with Alicorns however something must have happened to wipe them out from this time in history. As she ventures deep within the ruins comes across an old temple, going inside seeing such decay and rot, walking in further seeing an old door trying to push it open. Struggling to get the doors to move, with her strength, manages to push them loose, and the door swings wide open, landing with  a thud. Daring scrambles up brushing the dirt from her, uniform looking inside the room,  Notices an old book case with some scrolls  still on the shelf. Picking one up in her hoof, unravels the scroll and continues to read.....

[Cl0udChaser 3,006]

That looks awesome. Daring Do on her adventure.

[Lord Valtasar 12,691]

6 hours ago, RaphLuna said:

Omg looks like Daring came across an Ancient Civilization that once thrived with Alicorns however something must have happened to wipe them out from this time in history. As she ventures deep within the ruins comes across an old temple, going inside seeing such decay and rot, walking in further seeing an old door trying to push it open. Struggling to get the doors to move, with her strength, manages to push them loose, and the door swings wide open, landing with  a thud. Daring scrambles up brushing the dirt from her, uniform looking inside the room,  Notices an old book case with some scrolls  still on the shelf. Picking one up in her hoof, unravels the scroll and continues to read.....

thank you this was very inspiring,it made me want to write what the scroll contained so i ended up making my first fan-fiction, can i tweek your part a bit and use it aswel when i post it ?

as she reads the first scroll she frowns,its an alicorn poem it seems,but also a prophecy

we are immortal or so we think
but our race faces certain doom
for with this arrogance we'll sink
to endless time's depths in a loop

a wizard with great promise in this very room
will come forth and we'll make him king
but his intentions differ from what they look
and he'll imprison us and horrors bring

this fate shivers up my mane
for its much worse than timely death
we'll suffer in this cycle anew again
and never draw our final breath

so hear me now and listen well
for we must put trust in two foals
sent them away far from this hell
and hope they don't forget their goals

one will be born under sun's sign
and will inherit all its power
the other is her sister and don't sigh
for the moon she will raise and lower

their quest will be to find the six spoked star
and raise it delicately with care
for she's the one to heal time's own scar
doing so freeing every colt and mare

to know her look for the birth of a dragon
under a rainbow blazing in the sky
a unicorn she'll be and i can not fathom
how she'll achieve it so i won't even try

the star that gleams is her adversary
but she will teach her in time's ways
in finding friends she needs some comentary
and a student thus she gains

but on her own she'll never find us
so she must find the sacred tree
to gain the map to where he binds us
and come to finaly set us free

Edited June 22, 2018 by lordvaltasar

[RaphLuna 307]

14 hours ago, lordvaltasar said:

thank you this was very inspiring,it made me want to write what the scroll contained so i ended up making my first fan-fiction, can i use your part aswel when i post it?

as she reads the first scroll she frowns,its an alicorn poem it seems,but also a prophecy

we are immortal or so we think
but our race faces certain doom
for with this arrogance we'll sink
to endless time's depths in a loop

a wizard with great promise in this very room
will come forth and we'll make him king
but his intentions differ from what they look
and he'll imprison us and horrors bring

this fate shivers up my mane
for its much worse than timely death
we'll suffer in this cycle anew again
and never draw our final breath

so hear me now and listen well
for we must put trust in two foals
sent them away far from this hell
and hope they don't forget their goals

one will be born under sun's sign
and will inherit all its power
the other is her sister and don't sigh
for the moon she will raise and lower

their quest will be to find the six spoked star
and raise it delicately with care
for she's the one to heal time's own scar
doing so freeing every colt and mare

to know her look for the birth of a dragon
under a rainbow blazing in the sky
a unicorn she'll be and i can not fathom
how she'll achieve it so i won't even try

the star that gleams is her adversary
but she will teach her in time's ways
and finding friends she needs some comentary
and a student thus she gains

but on her own she'll never find us
so she must find the sacred tree
to gain the map to where he binds us
and come to finaly set us free

Hugs Your Poem was Beautiful. I love your creative prophecy it was very Touching indeed...

Yes Feel Free to use my part of the story to help you in your journey should you consider a path on writing your own fan fiction stories that truly touch others to shine a spark within them to create new stories all on their own..

I"m not into Fan Fiction Writing. well at first i was, however, with the inspiration from the MLP Arena, Mlp TP, MLP Fourms members, and the Story Tellers Summit. I took their advice,  decided to Leave Hasbro's path and make a new path for my creations alone.

"'The Story of Crystal Frost The Kingdom of Long Heart Stone and Beyond'' have since then grew to 12 Beautiful Elegant Stories. The 12th book is so beautiful the ending will not make you cry once or twice but thrise. The final Tearful Part is Heartbreaking yet at the same time so beautiful.. I cried a lot, Fell to sleep eyes soaked in tears for the final book will make you cry throughout generations and years. Imagine content of all 12 books into one. That part is 10 pages long along. 

the only Hint i will Give Will Knight Wing Make his move, before Tiger Lilly Make her Move to Move on ?

There are 2 side books

''Diversity Divides us Unity Unites us All, The Story of the Clyonies.''

yes the word Clyony is one i made up.. Its not the only new word I Exclusivly Made for my Creation, there are many new words i created. one s 23 letters long.

Yes a Second book about twins born the brother can see his twin sister can not. This story is going to be epic. Been dreaming it in my head. I see it role play every day. Love this creative story a tribute to twins, however also a beautiful tribute to those who can see and those who can not.

Crystal Frost and Knight Wing are the core charecters, however I will give you only one hint she dies in book 5. Of course they have Children however Just Two, the second one is only 5 months when his mother dies.

Its a long Journey. Fan Fiction is nice however now that my content is Away from Hasbro's Im now free to write and publish. in time i plan to make my move to team up with the entertainment industry to bring my creation to life on the big screen in theaters and on the small screens around the world..

In other words When my Creation Is finally Published

First Move Coloring Books

Second Move Novel Books

third Move Team up With Entertainment Industry

Hasbro's MLP will have competition. Not a the Younger Crowd however the older crowd they will.

Already made move to Copyright my creations. Making My second move just created my trademark design. 

back on topic your illustration Art is Unique Creative and Beautiful. you youself have the added beautiful gift of poetry  and should you choose to go further and write fan fiction. You will be Epic in taking such a path.

I fists started out reciting poetry in my childhood. I also loved art. started in story telling random tales. It grew in a really long beautiful story. then i found a new Hidden talent Song Rewriter.

"'Getting Stronger'' Re written song ''Knight Wings Revenge.''

what im trying to say you have a gift. A beautiful Talent, creative in art, Uniqueness in Poetry, and i know you have a story to share with us all.

Can't wait to see and read more from your Creative, Skillful, Beautiful, Genius.

Hugs

RaphLuna

Laurie Doodle

Laurie Ann Garland

[Lord Valtasar 12,691]

On 6/22/2018 at 2:14 PM, RaphLuna said:

 

thank you very much,i hope you achieve your dreams and get published,after all isn't it the greatest thing when you get to share with the world something you made completely on your own?that said i'm already writing a non-mlp story for some years now,and the goal is to publish it in manga-ish style and format.but its not in poem-form so maybe i'll experiment with the poems here first before adding them to the mix.thank you again,amd the one with the twins sounds awesome(i wish you hadn't told me she dies though so i could read it unspoiled when its out)

p.s. and when you do get published,sent me a message maybe i'll be able to make you a nice cover art

Edited June 28, 2018 by Lord Valtasar