Sunshine and Sugar[electronic]

[Ocean Melody 116]

I'm back with another song. Hope you enjoy, and as always, feedback welcomed.

Edited July 15, 2018 by Ocean Melody

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Can't seem to play the track...says it's still processing. 

[Ocean Melody 116]

2 hours ago, C. Thunder Dash said:

Can't seem to play the track...says it's still processing. 

pony.fm seems to be having a problem right now. I changed the link to my youtube.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Ok. 

It's an ok listen. However, as I said in the past, you gotta vary your ideas more, and they have to transition smoothly from one to the next. Like when that phasing vox wave comes in, there needs to be something before that. It's all about connecting your ideas to produce great flow. 

All in all, this song has potential but it's variance and transitions are its weakest links.