offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[Aurora Northglow]

*Door swings open and a unicorn head pokes inside*

 

"Ay guys, guess who's back?" *Grins*

[Shiny Silvermoon]

12 hours ago, Aurora Northglow said:

*Door swings open and a unicorn head pokes inside*

 

"Ay guys, guess who's back?" *Grins*

*Shiny Silvermoon tackled the unicorn to the ground with a tight hug.* Aurora!!! Where have you been?! 

[Aurora Northglow]

On 2023-11-20 at 9:18 PM, Shiny Silvermoon said:

*Shiny Silvermoon tackled the unicorn to the ground with a tight hug.* Aurora!!! Where have you been?! 

Hugging Shiny in return, he smiled and said

 

"Oh, here a little, there a little. Honestly, quite all over the place!" He laughed.

"But I'm glad I'm back for a bit. It's good to see you Shiny."

[Shiny Silvermoon]

On 2023-11-22 at 6:37 PM, Aurora Northglow said:

Hugging Shiny in return, he smiled and said

 

"Oh, here a little, there a little. Honestly, quite all over the place!" He laughed.

"But I'm glad I'm back for a bit. It's good to see you Shiny."

Good to see you too, Aurora! 

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

Okay... I'm not good at designing visual things. I don't know the first thing about art rules or color rules or anything like that. Graphic design isn't my passion. But I used a color palette generator and came up with this creature on the 3D pony maker website. They're a bat pony, no cutie mark, no name but I can come up with one. I'm obviously limited by the pony maker website and its options when it comes to hairstyles and the like. I'm open to any and all suggestions because I'm uncertain of what I'm doing lol. The only other OCs I've had were all straight up designed by artists and also had predefined character attributes which made things easier.

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[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

7 minutes ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Okay... I'm not good at designing visual things. I don't know the first thing about art rules or color rules or anything like that. Graphic design isn't my passion. But I used a color palette generator and came up with this creature on the 3D pony maker website. They're a bat pony, no cutie mark, no name but I can come up with one. I'm obviously limited by the pony maker website and its options when it comes to hairstyles and the like. I'm open to any and all suggestions because I'm uncertain of what I'm doing lol. The only other OCs I've had were all straight up designed by artists and also had predefined character attributes which made things easier.

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"oh, DAWLING another bat pony?! Have you met one of my good friends @Nitobit?? He's a charming batpony friend who is so kind and dedicated to the community!" sits you down, "So, let's see what we can do with that mane and style, shall we?!"

( Basically, I'll start with the sketch. But you can feel free to interact or add details, etc to help flesh out her personality a bit, etc)

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

19 minutes ago, Planeswalker Silky said:

"oh, DAWLING another bat pony?! Have you met one of my good friends @Nitobit?? He's a charming batpony friend who is so kind and dedicated to the community!" sits you down, "So, let's see what we can do with that mane and style, shall we?!"

( Basically, I'll start with the sketch. But you can feel free to interact or add details, etc to help flesh out her personality a bit, etc)

"Oh yes, I've seen him around here and there! Lurking in the shadows sometimes.. carefully observing the community..."

(I didn't expect you to do a whole sketch, just give advice, thank you so much! Personality wise I think she'd be adventurous, creative, night owl (she is a bat pony after all), an animal person kind of like Fluttershy, a bit dramatic. Thank you again!)

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,297]

46 minutes ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Okay... I'm not good at designing visual things. I don't know the first thing about art rules or color rules or anything like that. Graphic design isn't my passion. But I used a color palette generator and came up with this creature on the 3D pony maker website. They're a bat pony, no cutie mark, no name but I can come up with one. I'm obviously limited by the pony maker website and its options when it comes to hairstyles and the like. I'm open to any and all suggestions because I'm uncertain of what I'm doing lol. The only other OCs I've had were all straight up designed by artists and also had predefined character attributes which made things easier.

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Of course it had to be a batpony  

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

3 hours ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Okay... I'm not good at designing visual things. I don't know the first thing about art rules or color rules or anything like that. Graphic design isn't my passion. But I used a color palette generator and came up with this creature on the 3D pony maker website. They're a bat pony, no cutie mark, no name but I can come up with one. I'm obviously limited by the pony maker website and its options when it comes to hairstyles and the like. I'm open to any and all suggestions because I'm uncertain of what I'm doing lol. The only other OCs I've had were all straight up designed by artists and also had predefined character attributes which made things easier.

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"MOTHER OF LUNA!!! Did you just say that you need to figure a name for this batpony? Please, if you want of my help, I'd be truly pleased to come up with a few ideas! I'm very good at imaginating names!"

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

1 hour ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

"MOTHER OF LUNA!!! Did you just say that you need to figure a name for this batpony? Please, if you want of my help, I'd be truly pleased to come up with a few ideas! I'm very good at imaginating names!"

"Well like I said, I'm open to any and all suggestions so feel free to imagine up some names if you wish!"

(Also Happy Birthday)

Edited January 28 by Iforgotmybrain

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

20 hours ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

"Well like I said, I'm open to any and all suggestions so feel free to imagine up some names if you wish!"

(Also Happy Birthday)

(Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Thank you! )

"However, I first need to know more about this OC! What is her interests, her hobbies, her personnality traits, etc! Because this is what will determine what shall be a fitting name!"

[GeneralDirection 1,050]

@Iforgotmybrain

Silky wanted to post this here, but she's currently busy, being banished to the moon and all.  Here's the finished art of your OC that she did.

[Felis Amafeles 898]

16 minutes ago, GeneralDirection said:

Silky wanted to post this here, but she's currently busy, being banished to the moon and all.  Here's the finished art of your OC that she did.

Thank you. I was just about to do the same thing 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

She really worked hard on this art and she wasn't even able to show it to you bevause of her banishment! @Curious Ge0rge, what have you done? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?! 

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

1 hour ago, GeneralDirection said:

@Iforgotmybrain

Silky wanted to post this here, but she's currently busy, being banished to the moon and all.  Here's the finished art of your OC that she did.

Oh my gosh, thank you! I'll have to send my thanks to Silky on Discord as well!

On 2024-01-28 at 8:54 PM, Shiny Silvermoon said:

(Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Thank you! )

"However, I first need to know more about this OC! What is her interests, her hobbies, her personnality traits, etc! Because this is what will determine what shall be a fitting name!"

"My interests and hobbies? Well, naturally as a bat pony I have an affinity towards all kinds of juicy fruit, so I have a nice garden in my backyard with all kinds of fruit trees and fruit bushes! And I like making and fixing stuff! I've been trying to get into sewing recently but it's a bit hard with the hooves and all. I also have a telescope that I use to stargaze sometimes. Personality wise I've been called 'a bit dramatic".  I love learning and doing new things! I love animals as well, especially the nocturnal kind since I'm a night creature myself!"

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

22 hours ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Oh my gosh, thank you! I'll have to send my thanks to Silky on Discord as well!

"My interests and hobbies? Well, naturally as a bat pony I have an affinity towards all kinds of juicy fruit, so I have a nice garden in my backyard with all kinds of fruit trees and fruit bushes! And I like making and fixing stuff! I've been trying to get into sewing recently but it's a bit hard with the hooves and all. I also have a telescope that I use to stargaze sometimes. Personality wise I've been called 'a bit dramatic".  I love learning and doing new things! I love animals as well, especially the nocturnal kind since I'm a night creature myself!"

"Mmmmmmh! Give me time to think and I'll come back with a list of potential names! Okay?"

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

17 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

"Mmmmmmh! Give me time to think and I'll come back with a list of potential names! Okay?"

“Sounds good!”

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

@Iforgotmybrain

I made you a list of suggestions for your name! Feel free to take what you like in the names I found!

▪︎ Fruit Salad

▪︎ Fruitie Fixit

▪︎ Echo Drama

▪︎ Night Life

▪︎ Nocturna Berry

▪︎ Astra Fabric

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

20 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

@Iforgotmybrain

I made you a list of suggestions for your name! Feel free to take what you like in the names I found!

▪︎ Fruit Salad

▪︎ Fruitie Fixit

▪︎ Echo Drama

▪︎ Night Life

▪︎ Nocturna Berry

▪︎ Astra Fabric

Nocturna berry sounds so freakin cute!!!!

[Iforgotmybrain 5,676]

30 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

@Iforgotmybrain

I made you a list of suggestions for your name! Feel free to take what you like in the names I found!

▪︎ Fruit Salad

▪︎ Fruitie Fixit

▪︎ Echo Drama

▪︎ Night Life

▪︎ Nocturna Berry

▪︎ Astra Fabric

Fruit Salad and Nocturna Berry are my favorites from those! Omg I don't know how I'm going to choose between them

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

4 minutes ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Fruit Salad and Nocturna Berry are my favorites from those! Omg I don't know how I'm going to choose between them

I'm so so so happy to know that I came up with two name ideas that you'd like to take! If you ever need to find a name for somepony or something, I'll always be happy to give suggestions! 

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

35 minutes ago, Iforgotmybrain said:

Fruit Salad and Nocturna Berry are my favorites from those! Omg I don't know how I'm going to choose between them

Oooh that’s not a bad problem to have if you ask me! Maybe one can be a nickname she earned for something related to it! Good luck an I’m so happy to hear a new OC has been born! 

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,297]

I know I'm supposed to provide open communication about my OC, but I have such darn trouble with it.  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

20 hours ago, ZiggWheelsManning said:

I know I'm supposed to provide open communication about my OC, but I have such darn trouble with it.  

No worries, lovely! Just do your best, ok? I will try again 

[Sparkliersparks 127]

Alright, i think this is the place...
anypony here?