First MLP Drawing (Hand Drawn)

[Metalshy 32]

I decided to try drawing a pony, for the first time, so here I drew Rarity. Please tell me how I did.. comments and constructive criticism are welcome. It took me 2 and a half hours.

 

 

EDIT: I don't know if this makes a difference, but I drew this imagining her sitting down. That may explain her rather thick neck.

Edited June 18, 2012 by EEYYYUP

[Dragonshy 2,305]

The colors are really well done! A few proportion problems, but other than that it's awesome!

[Raiyny Day 71]

Good for a first try. I'd say work on the muzzle/mouth/whatever it's called on ponies Other than that, it's pretty good

[Nah 3,182]

You did a fantastic job! Better than what I can do. Its also pretty impressive for your first attempt.

[Krystal 1,468]

Awesome Rarity The colors are really well done, but her neck is kinda fat and too long. Other than that it's great

[Adolf 12]

there are no words for me to describe how awesome it is.

[Metalshy 32]

Thanks everypony :]

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

I love how you Colored her, it is really a great piece of art, the only thing is the thickness of the neck but it's an awesome drawing! nice work!

[FortyShadows 217]

Some proportion issues, as mentioned, but the colouring's really cool! (I'm terrible at using pencil crayons)

[TimberStrum 11]

Wow thats really good!

[Rainbow Danger Dash 145]

that is amazing for a first!!! you are gifted!!! a brohoof for you!!! i love the coloring and the lines are nice an smooth! 100% prefect!!!

[Metalshy 32]

Thanks again :]

[Tdroid 234]

I like it, very good for a first attempt.

[Roi 100]

Eyes-Beautiful and full of detail!

Hair-Exactly like Rarity

Smile-Dont like it sorry

Neck-A bit too thick

Overall- 8 out of 10 GOOD JOB

[Croaks 251]

I like it.

Could use a sharper nose or a thinner neck, maybe, but it's still amazing.

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

A pretty good first try, Some proportion issues, but other than that very solid

[Flow 1,629]

This is really great for a first time, the only thing that needs improvement is the neck, as it needs to curve outward a bit, overall, it's a great piece for a first time. Keep it up!

[Metalshy 32]

I think the reason you guys think her neck is thick is because I drew her imagining she was sitting down. I don't know if that makes a difference.