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Neu Violet Spiral (En-vi-ous) Essentially a revised OC: Updated


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So , as my art is getting better, and progressing in developing/drawing other members OCs, I've come to realize many flaws on my previous renditions of my OC and thought it'd be nice for an update on my OC.

 

 

Plus, I realized that I haven't been very helpful to Tag Team Cast with his summer art exchange art, and seeing as I'm pratically finished with my art for him, I agreed to provide him with as many of my colored OC as possible (Which there isn't many, as I tend to draw up concept art for other members very often.)

 

I call this Neu Violet Spiral (N.V.S: En-Vi-Ous)

 

Tell me which you think is still better?

 

Old VIolet or Neu Violet?

 

Concept sketch:

 

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Finished picture with color.

 

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This has been (for the most part) the simplified version I plan to stay with for my Violet Spiral OC

 

Same info as before,

Unique wing design featuring a pair of elongated feathers.

Heterochromia of the eyes, red right eye, and purple left eye.

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Secondary tail feathers growing from the croup, covering the dock

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I gave my OC a mane cut as I recently got one, closely related, and also based off my hunter OC for the Capcom Monster Hunter series.

 

 

 

All paint and color done via basic Microsoft Paint

 

After a little consideration, I made a two version eye NVS

 

Thicker

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None

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My taste is evidently weird, which is okay, after all, new concepts aren't always seen the same. :lol: Plus I do have a weird and unorthodox way of eating mini oreos. Lol

 

 

In the end, I think I'll just settle with this one.

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Ohh just through regular microsoft paint, I'll edit the main post to let members know, Thanks a bunch! :D

 

Are there any Youtube tutorials or anything out there I can use? Cause I kinda suck at digital painting :P

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That's amazing O_O I'd give anything to draw like you!

 

*jealous*

 

Please don't be jealous, :(

 

Are there any Youtube tutorials or anything out there I can use? Cause I kinda suck at digital painting :P

 

I'm sure you wouldn't want my tutorial advice as it was rather slow and time consuming, I suggest going the route of a high end photoshop program.

 

 

 

 

I like to draw OCs for other members, and I kind of feel a little selfish for finishing this up, before other members OCs, but it's imperative that I do my best to help my partner Tag Team Cast finish his art work for the summer art exchange, (which in chronical order on a time chart, was an activity I chose to accept before most of my other projects, including the Pony Pile project)

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I'm sure you wouldn't want my tutorial advice as it was rather slow and time consuming, I suggest going the route of a high end photoshop program.

 

 

Drawing with a mouse, then. I'm gonna have a bad time XL

 

Thanks anyway. :P

 

I like to draw OCs for other members, and I kind of feel a little selfish for finishing this up, before other members OCs, but it's imperative that I do my best to help my partner Tag Team Cast finish his art work for the summer art exchange, (which in chronical order on a time chart, was an activity I chose to accept before most of my other projects, including the Pony Pile project)

 

You consider yourself selfish for finishing up a little artwork before all the other artwork that you've volunteered to do? 0_o Especially considering all the OCs you're doing on the Pony Pile thread? I'd say you're one of the least selfish people here--Rarity better watch out. :P

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Drawing with a mouse, then. I'm gonna have a bad time XL

 

Thanks anyway. :P

 

 

 

You consider yourself selfish for finishing up a little artwork before all the other artwork that you've volunteered to do? 0_o Especially considering all the OCs you're doing on the Pony Pile thread? I'd say you're one of the least selfish people here--Rarity better watch out. :P

 

I'm sorry I couldn't be much more help, I feel I go about my art rather sloppy these days lol :lol:

 

I'm very, Very grateful for your kind words, I sincerely bow my head to you in respect. I'm going to finish what I started, and hold my word for every member here. I promise!

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Your OC is beautiful, I love the fact that each eye is a different color, adds a unique factor into your OC, the mane style is really cool, and the added tail feathers are a nice touch!

 

Really great :)

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I like to draw OCs for other members, and I kind of feel a little selfish for finishing this up

 

Personally, it's a great thing you managed to get this drawing done. Now I guess you can say my OC is even more fond of yours :lol:

 

Neu Violet looks better than your old one; no offense to your old one, of course!

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...*cries out of jealousy*

She's soooo cute. Dizzy, as per usual, this is awesome <3

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MS Paint? :blink: Just wow. Simply gorgeous.

right hindleg is a tiny bit to straight (needs thigh), the eye-outline connected to the upper 3 wimpers should be a bit thicker and second wing should be visible between frontwing and neck.

 

Also, if you ever get tired of Paint, consider Gimp

http://www.gimp.org/

 

It does almost everything Photoshop does and is free.

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I really need this! Thank You! i cant tell you how much easier this will be now

 

I'll be getting more posted asap, I'm working on another 2 atm, how many more do you think you'll need? :P

 

Your OC is beautiful, I love the fact that each eye is a different color, adds a unique factor into your OC, the mane style is really cool, and the added tail feathers are a nice touch!

 

Really great :)

 

Thank you so much Chaos! It was funny, I know I had these concepts already introduced to my OC, but only a few members have noticed them in the past. Now, members are just beginning to notice again...I must have done something wrong. I really almost forgot these concepts sometime ago, but I'm really glad I could implement them into my Ponysona! I can't wait to get finished with the Summer Art Exchange, that way I can finish up on the Pony Pile asap.

 

Ohh but I'm sure who ever you got (in the Exchange) will be very pleased with your work. I long to be able to produce artwork like yours. :wub:

 

 

As i said before! Great job Dizzy!!

She has a really pretty face :blush:

Love it!! :)

 

Aweh thank you! Now that I went and enrolled myself into that Pony Sauce video collab (Not knowing what all I would need)

 

I'm working on a montage and multiple facial+posed Violet Spiral, so...stay tuned, you might not see a pretty face among the many Violet Spirals Lol (All this ofcourse will be done after some more work on the Pony Pile project)

 

Personally, it's a great thing you managed to get this drawing done. Now I guess you can say my OC is even more fond of yours :lol:

 

Neu Violet looks better than your old one; no offense to your old one, of course!

 

No, no offense taken, lol Thank you, that's why I produced this rendition, because I noticed some flaws on my old one. Thank you kindly ;3

 

...*cries out of jealousy*

She's soooo cute. Dizzy, as per usual, this is awesome <3

 

I thank you very much! I poured alot of work into this OC form, to keep up with the growing pony gens

 

MS Paint? :blink: Just wow. Simply gorgeous.

right hindleg is a tiny bit to straight (needs thigh), the eye-outline connected to the upper 3 wimpers should be a bit thicker and second wing should be visible between frontwing and neck.

 

Also, if you ever get tired of Paint, consider Gimp

http://www.gimp.org/

 

It does almost everything Photoshop does and is free.

 

I noticed this too with the thighs, but I tried to keep this near canon form with most of the other ponies here. All of the 4g ponies now utilize this exaggerated leg style in alot of case from side profile shots. I will also admit to using a reference for the hind leg portions. Normally I would agree with you, but this one was made to be near canon as possible.

 

As for the Eyes, I feel the the thickness of the lashes is a matter of personal preferences. I like them just as they are.

 

I'll concur with the second wing though, perhaps I'll revise it a bit to show the second wing.

 

I thank you for your valuable insight. I have Gimp, but find it a little challenging to use as I'm relatively new to it.

 

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I see what you mean about the eye, for awhile now, I've been at conflict with staying with a design similar to Rarity except less elaborate on the upper lid. If you observe Raritys eyes, you'll see there is nothing connecting the lashes. This I found to be exceptional, as in my opinion, she isn't primped out with alot of eye makeup at all in her common found form.

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I thank you for your valuable insight. I have Gimp, but find it a little challenging to use as I'm relatively new to it.

 

There is a learning curve, but the payback is huge (layers for one thing), plus there are tons of tutorials online.

I see what you mean about the eye, for awhile now, I've been at conflict with staying with a design similar to Rarity except less elaborate on the upper lid. If you observe Raritys eyes, you'll see there is nothing connecting the lashes. This I found to be exceptional, as in my opinion, she isn't primped out with alot of eye makeup at all in her common found form.

 

I'd say, either make it a little thicker (like in your sketch), or leave it out cmpletely; too thin just looks weird.


 

 

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I'd say, either make it a little thicker (like in your sketch), or leave it out cmpletely; too thin just looks weird.

 

Wait...you said...

 

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Nevermind, I'm confused by your new outlook, and well, a little hurt by this, but I'll experiment, thanks again.

 

Updated: New images, see which you like more please.

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Thank you so much Chaos! It was funny, I know I had these concepts already introduced to my OC, but only a few members have noticed them in the past. Now, members are just beginning to notice again...I must have done something wrong. I really almost forgot these concepts sometime ago, but I'm really glad I could implement them into my Ponysona! I can't wait to get finished with the Summer Art Exchange, that way I can finish up on the Pony Pile asap.

 

Ohh but I'm sure who ever you got (in the Exchange) will be very pleased with your work. I long to be able to produce artwork like yours. :wub:

 

Your welcome Dizzy :) You know, it's amazing what you do for the forums, projects like the pony pile and drawing others OC's, I admire that you work so hard for all of us, your one amazing artist!

 

Aw, well thanks a bunch for that compliment, your partner will definitely be pleased with your work as well! :3

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Updated: New images, see which you like more please.

 

Imo, both are a great improvement. Gun to my head, I'd say the one with the eyeliner (makes it look a bit more unique/less like Rarity)

 

 

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Your welcome Dizzy :) You know, it's amazing what you do for the forums, projects like the pony pile and drawing others OC's, I admire that you work so hard for all of us, your one amazing artist!

 

Aw, well thanks a bunch for that compliment, your partner will definitely be pleased with your work as well! :3

 

I can't wait to show TagTeamCast his, I'm dying to show him infact my rendition of him and Pinkie Pie, it's killing me just not to post it up for him! arrrrg XD

 

 

Imo, both are a great improvement. Gun to my head, I'd say the one with the eyeliner (makes it look a bit more unique/less like Rarity)

 

I wouldn't really call them improvements...just revisions, as I really can't settle or don't like either of them. However I'm aware there are other members which would want artists like myself to appeal to other members preferences and tastes, despite the fact there is a vast majority of preferences and taste that will never be appealed. :blush:

 

I feel very much like Rarity in this case, after producing those wonderful dresses for my friends, yet had them turned down, just because of their personal preferences.

 

I do still appreciate you for your critique (However quick changing it may seem) for you don't have to many whom will critique on peoples work.

 

Not that I was requesting it, as this piece was in actuality, being provided for Tag Team Cast for him to use in the Summer Art Exchange.

 

I thank you still ^.^ *

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Don't hate me, but I see no differences between the colored pictures D:

Lol but I do like your OC. You're very talented; I still don't understand how you can color them with MS Paint.

 

Oh yeah

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