My First EVER Attempt At A MLP Drawing: WIP

[ShieldMaiden 16]

Like the title says... this is my first ever attempt at drawing a MLP. It is going to be my OC Storm Dapple once I get around to finishing her. I do not draw much, this was probably the first thing I'd drawn in years. I think she turned out alright so far lol, although looking at her here she seems too long in the body. Sorry for the crappy pic but all I have as a camera right now sucks http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

Edited June 22, 2012 by Storm Dapple

[MincedMassacre 14]

This is awesome! Especially for your first drawing. Nice job. It's just the right size, and everything is proportioned right. I honestly have no complaints. None. Not even the slightest. Well, aside from it having no face xD.

[ShieldMaiden 16]

Wow thank you!!

 

I really am rather pleased with how she looks so far. Don't worry, I'll give her a face soon!

[Finesthour 7,286]

You're awesome den mother x3

[agigantorllama 258]

Great job! This needs more views!

[ShieldMaiden 16]

LOL Crona!!!

 

But thank you!

[Raiyny Day 71]

The wing seems to be a bit large, but pretty dang amazing for a first try

[ShieldMaiden 16]

Thanks everypony!! I mainly stick to crafting and only draw the occasional outline for patterns so it means a lot to hear that you all like my drawing

[FortyShadows 217]

To me, the wing seems good, but the body seems a little long.

I guess everyone sees pics differently.

Great first attempt btw!

[ShieldMaiden 16]

Thanks XraYZPony! I agree she seems a little too long and needs to be compacted a little bit. But thanks for all the great replies!

[~Chaos~ 3,966]

This is amazing for your first! great job so far

[Xievie 498]

This is 20,000% better than when I try to draw! My only suggestion, you could take a look at a character's wings and fix yours. Other that that, keep it upp!

 

Suskie approves!

 

-Suskie

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Very good for a first try.

the body is indeed a little bit too long, but imo not a dealbreaker

The forehead needs some bulging out, the right hindleg nneds some tweeking

You might want to think of anothr cutiemark though, what's your OC's talent?

 

Make sure to post progress.

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

This is really good for a first try, the only thing I see is that the body should be a little shorter. Other than that it looks great!

[Neelix 4]

Oooohhh!! Pretty! Way better than I could ahve done!

[PegasisterTaco 318]

Very well done I'd say. Perfect size, perfect everything. Your drawing reminds me of the perfect, unresistable muffin that sat quietly on my plate the other day. So perfect and neat. Keep at it my friend and you'll be the next "Hot Topic!"

[Speedy Transition 788]

This is great!!

Well done for your first try

Cant wait to see what else you can do

[Gentleman Kitten 5]

I agree with the others. Truly amazing. Have a brohoof my good sir.

[Rainbow- 33]

Make a 3d sculpture of your drawing ;o