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This is my first draft of a poem I'll be performing on my YouTube channel. It's about being proud to be a brony. I would love feedback; all constructive criticism and comments are welcome. Thank you, and have a lovely day.

 

Brony Pride

 

 

Dear Princess Celestia,

 

Commend their persistence in the face of resistance;

It takes a beautiful heart,

Faithful and strong,

To stay true to yourself

Beneath a list of enemies that long.

Now I won’t lie

I haven’t always been an MLP guy,

But I think my experience

From mild hate to curious

has made me delirious

so get yourself ready

for a serious confession;

I am a brony.

I am bona fide ponified;

No one can stop me

And my earth pony side.

I may not be confident enough to show it yet

But when I am, they’ll all know; I bet

I’ll run into criticism, but I won’t retreat

For sharing kindness is an easy feat

And with my bronies beside me,

No one can beat the magic of friendship.

We’ll trot into battle on proud hooves

Manes billowing in the air

And we’ll tolerate the trolls,

Patrol the parasprites,

Heal the hate and convert it to pure love.

Like Ponyta, our hooves are harder than diamonds

So let’s get our shine on

Like a unicorn’s horn, like an equine dawn.

We’ll laugh in their faces

Because, no matter what the place is,

We don’t need to be afraid.

Expect many “Dear Princess Celestia” letters in the future

For we’ll teach the neigh-sayers a lesson in friendship

They won’t soon forget.

I am,

we are the personal army of Tara Strong

And with a leader like that, you can never be wrong.

In short,

I am a brony,

and not only that

I am also very proud.

 

 

Your faithful student,

 

Book Worm


Half of what I say is meaningless, but I say it so that the other half may reach you.

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