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I drew: Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie & Derpy (NEW IMAGE 7/25), (Critique please)


Alaxandir

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Hi everyone, just wrapped up a livestream session and finished this here Pinkie Pie RAINBOW DASH, FLUTTERSHY& PINKIE PIE (also derpy)! What does everypony think?

Here is today's image! (took me 3 days to complete totaling 7 hours of work)

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http://zergling2010.deviantart.com/#/d58q0ve

Fullsize original

 

 

In the spoiler are previous images.

 

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Please don't hesitate to say anything you see that is wrong, I'm trying to improve as much as possilbe and only have a couple of weeks experience.Thanks,- Alax

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Really cute! I really see nothing wrong except for the fact that the lines are slightly squiggly, but I can't expect a person (or pony) to draw completely straight lines. It's good. You did great justice to my second favorite earth pony.

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Thanks for all the feedback guys; I hope to get even faster at drawing of this quality b/c this piece was 2.5 hours to complete.

 

It was easy to do, I just had to focus on doing it

PINKIE PIE STYLE!

 

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The way I see things, Pinkie's head shape is a little squished, flank area is too round, and the size of her mane and tail appears a little big, and the ear should be more elongated. Heck... I wonder what happens if we put a transparent layer of pinkie in this exact pose over this drawing? :blink: (Something I've done as a last ditch effort trying to figure out why my drawing doesn't look right)

 

On top of that, you can always have smoother outlines.

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This is a nice piece indeed. But I'd say that her head is a tad too small... And ofc, the squiggly lines were mentioned.

 

But otherwise, I don't see any flaws in it ^^ Keep upthe good work!

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I like it (:


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"Why, am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?"

Ooh! Ooh! More guessing games! Um... Pokey Smokes! How about Queen Meanie? No! Black Snooty, Black Snooty!

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This is great if you are going for individuality (which is the best!) :D But if you are going show acurate then just a few minor touch ups are needed all of which have already been pointed out above so i would be wasting my time hehe But seriously i think its pretty awesome.

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Great Job! It kinda looks like u copied the whole thing but still! Oh and ear is too far left-up :]

 

I did use two or three reference images to get her features and hair close to original.

 

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Can't see anything wrong with this one either. Keep up the good work. That's, uh, pretty good for a couple weeks of experience...

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I saw part of the livestream. Learn a bit about what goes into these things. As for the picture, I can't bring my self to say there is anything wrong with it. I don't SEE anything wrong with it, so I'll assume it's ok.


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i think that drawing of rainbow dash is very nice. Hair is very hard to draw on pinkie pie. i've tried a few methods though they all have not worked out. i think on the last drawing of pinkie pie, the hair needs a little work. B)

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I like the Rainbow Dash one. The face is alright. But the rainbowy shockwave makes the drawing a lot better than if it wasn't there! I like this drawing ;3


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Rainbow Dash is awesome, only the wing looks weird, and something else I can't figure out. Pinkie's face also has something wrong with it but other then that, this is great. And Pinkie's mane is really good!!

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