writing To love, to see, to feel...

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Got nothing to do, and things on my mind... so im gonna write.

 

 

To be, when the end is over.

Love is, without an answer.

In life, can one be another?

To feel, what goes unsaid.

A face, expressions to read.

My intolerance, to what end?

Can I see?

No,

not unless shown.

Can I feel?

Maybe,

if felt also.

Can I love?

Yes,

and never stop.

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

Ahhh, have you written poems in the past before? I really like this one. Though it's short, it's good.

[techno915 408]

Ooh. I like it! Here's a song I wrote awhile back:

 

Livin' A life that nobody wants to

Everyone turning away

Then comes that someone whom you've been waiting for

Now is the time to say

 

"Why weren't you there for me?

Where have you been all my life?"

Trials and torture

No bricks or mortar

Can shield me from the world

 

Innocent humans

Aren't we all?

And yet society makes us our biggest flaw

To help us redeem our honor and name

We look for the ones who share in the pain

But be on the lookout for true imitations

Or you'll soon find yourself wondering

 

"Why weren't you there for me?

Where have you been all my life?"

Trials and torture

No bricks or mortar

Can shield me from the world

 

Sometimes you ask yourself, “Why am I here?”

That’s when I tell you “Never Fear.”

People of worse lives have conquered despair

And you, my friend, can too.

As long as you live life up to its fullest,

You will never have to say

 

"Why weren't you there for me?

Where have you been all my life?"

Trials and torture

No bricks or mortar

Can shield me from the world.

 

It's about two minutes long or so. Maybe 2 and a half. I just need background music for it. Here's the video:

 

 

If anypony can help with music, PM me!

 

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techno915

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Ahhh, have you written poems in the past before? I really like this one. Though it's short, it's good.

 

I have been writing poems for years, its a great output for emotional buildup... Im sure you could find more of my work here if you check out all of the topics I have started

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

That is really really cool. I might have to check out your other ones, because this is really good.