ooc Equestria Divided (Grimdark)

[Nightfall 3,950]

I never said that...

 

In all seriousness I should probably link in Scholars Help with Writing an OC topic. It is very useful when needed.

 

The way your post was worded, it could have had that effect. I'm not saying your a bad poster and I'm certainly not saying your post was wrong and doesn't make sense. It may just be me in the end, and if that is the case, I'm sorry.

[mane6 27]

oh okay i will wright away! (cheesy joke o.o)

Age:11

Family: Orphan

Home: Canterlot

Backstory: Saffy was a young playful filly and when she was older she joined the wonderbolts ( For this one i made a opposite story of my most used one) However she was not accepted. And through anger and sadness she killed all of the wonderbolts. She stole some wonderbolt suits and shes been wearing them eversince that day. Nobody knew who did it.

Personallity: Like rainbowdash but not braggy. Very freindly but when very mad she can lash out and hurt people pretty bad.

Edited January 18, 2013 by mane6

[TheImaginaryAlicorn 147]

oh okay i will wright away! (cheesy joke o.o)

Age:11

Family: Orphan

Home: Canterlot

Backstory: Saffy was a young playful filly and when she was older she joined the wonderbolts ( For this one i made a opposite story of my most used one) However she was not accepted. And through anger and sadness she killed all of the wonderbolts. She stole some wonderbolt suits and shes been wearing them eversince that day. Nobody knew who did it.

Personallity: Like rainbowdash but not braggy. Very freindly but when very mad she can lash out and hurt people pretty bad.

 

Not exactly what was meant. If you go to the OC page (under the roleplay section of the site), you can make one - there's a, erm, chart? Rubric? I have no idea what it's called, but that's how you make your OC. Also, two of the Wonderbolts hold a position of office in House Stormwing and are not dead. And you need a little more detail - did she have friends? How was she orphaned? Does she know? Are there any other traumatic or scarring events in her life? What was her usual life like before she killed a Wonderbolt (that's the most she can kill that this roleplay will allow to be technically correct)?

 

Sorry to be so picky. I could have overdone it though - you'll just have to wait for EquestrianScholar to approve or deny or improve your OC.

 

(P.S: Nice joke   ) 

[mane6 27]

ok and thanks:) lol i dont usually write cheesy jokes but sometimes i do it without realising so i post it anyways

[Senor Citizen 516]

There's nothing but hurt coming for you here, friend. This is going to get pretty funny pretty fast.

[MagicalStarRain 599]

oh okay i will wright away! (cheesy joke o.o)

Age:11

Family: Orphan

Home: Canterlot

Backstory: Saffy was a young playful filly and when she was older she joined the wonderbolts ( For this one i made a opposite story of my most used one) However she was not accepted. And through anger and sadness she killed all of the wonderbolts. She stole some wonderbolt suits and shes been wearing them eversince that day. Nobody knew who did it.

Personallity: Like rainbowdash but not braggy. Very freindly but when very mad she can lash out and hurt people pretty bad.

Did you check out the images on the first page of this thread? Not only was thre war, but Celestia and Luna have disappeared without a trace. Go back to the first page, read the images that Scholar posted, and choose your faction. And come up with a detailed bio that describes her life before the princesses disappeared, what her initial reaction to their disappearance was, how and why she joined whatever faction you choose, and her views on the other factions aside from her own. Also, Canterlot is the capital of House Moon and Star, a faction that despises all non-unicorns. And from what I can tell, your OC is a Pegasus.

 

For ideas and a little help, check out our OC pages. They're all on the first page of this thread.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

Also, Canterlot is the capital of House Moon and Star, a faction that despises all non-unicorns. And from what I can tell, your OC is a Pegasus.

Pegasus and earth ponies can be members of House Moon and Stars, and they can actually hold useful positions. Not leadership positions yes, but still important positions.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

... *Sees a bunch of notifications about Equestria Divided*

Uhhh... did i miss something?

 

Aparantly i missed something. Why does everything happen when I'm not around. <_<

[Nightfall 3,950]

... *Sees a bunch of notifications about Equestria Divided*

Uhhh... did i miss something?

 

Aparantly i missed something. Why does everything happen when I'm not around. <_<

 

'Cuz you're The Blitz.

 

Naw, I dunno... timezones and the havoc they wreak would be my best guess.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

'Cuz you're The Blitz.

 

Naw, I dunno... timezones and the havoc they wreak would be my best guess.

It was a rhetorical question but ok. But it does seem like you guys are all on at the same time though. Like 8 of those comments were made within about an hour.

[Spell Shock 56]

Okay, i have a sudden tingling feeling what house Everfree might be a huge PITA, just a feeling. Dunno why.

So yeah well... hm...

[The-Master 1,176]

Speaking of House Everfree, look what I have: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lady-sparrow-r2412

 

Yet another OC just to make life harder on everyone. I regret nothing.

[EldarSteve 119]

This is definitely something I could get into. Quick question though, what are the six gifted, no doubt you've written it somewhere in these 41 pages but I really would rather not have to read every single one.

IF I can be one, and assuming there are no major strings attached, I would like to be the composer.

Moving right along, here's my OC.
 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/azrael-r2427

And I suppose I'll join Moon and Star, If that's all right.

[Jeddaven 42]

Would it still be possible to sign up as the leader of a small mercenary company, perhaps currently working for House Whitegold?

[MagicalStarRain 599]

This is definitely something I could get into. Quick question though, what are the six gifted, no doubt you've written it somewhere in these 41 pages but I really would rather not have to read every single one.

 

IF I can be one, and assuming there are no major strings attached, I would like to be the composer.

 

Moving right along, here's my OC.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/azrael-r2427

 

And I suppose I'll join Moon and Star, If that's all right.

I love your OC, only one problem though. Lack. Of. Separate. Bio!   You need a separate bio for this RP only, can't use it in other RP. It needs to describe what life was like before the princesses' disappearance, what his initial reaction was, and how and why he joined whatever House you choose(which in your case is House Moon and Star). Add lots of detail! That's what Scholar loves most, lots of detail! And I mean LOTS.

Edited January 20, 2013 by MagicalStarRain

[EldarSteve 119]

I love your OC, only one problem though. Lack. Of. Separate. Bio!   You need a separate bio for this RP only, can't use it in other RP. It needs to describe what life was like before the princesses' disappearance, what his initial reaction was, and how and why he joined whatever House you choose(which in your case is House Moon and Star). Add lots of detail! That's what Scholar loves most, lots of detail! And I mean LOTS.

 

Okaly-dokely, done and done. I eagerly await to see if my application is accepted.

 

Don't mind this text, it's just filler text.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

Wow all of sudden we are actually getting more people. Hmm i think we have about ... 15 i think. Is that too many....

[GreyScholar 1,584]

This is definitely something I could get into. Quick question though, what are the six gifted, no doubt you've written it somewhere in these 41 pages but I really would rather not have to read every single one.

 

IF I can be one, and assuming there are no major strings attached, I would like to be the composer.

 

Moving right along, here's my OC.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/azrael-r2427

 

And I suppose I'll join Moon and Star, If that's all right.

From your picture, it looks like your character is not just a unicorn but a Half Zebra/Unicorn so either change that in Species or change your picture.

On the Six Gifted I will have to discuss such with you in PM. One thing I would suggest is read the character Mythos Gray as he is one of the Six Gifted, The Storyteller.

Edited January 20, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[The-Master 1,176]

I should probably repost this just incase no one noticed. This is an OC entry into House Everfree.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lady-sparrow-r2412

 

It would be helpful to point out anything that needs changing or alteration if you have the time and patience.

[EldarSteve 119]

From your picture, it looks like your character is not just a unicorn but a Half Zebra/Unicorn so either change that in Species or change your picture.

On the Six Gifted I will have to discuss such with you in PM. One thing I would suggest is read the character Mythos Gray as he is one of the Six Gifted, The Storyteller.

 

oh no no no no no, Azrael is full unicorn, his family tattooed themselves as a way to better integrate themselves into Zebra culture, I just realized I forgot to put that in his bio, this is now corrected. As for the six gifted, after getting an idea I still think it would be interesting. So either the dancer of the composer, which ever makes sense for my character to be I'm not fussy. They both sound cool to me.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

I should probably repost this just incase no one noticed. This is an OC entry into House Everfree.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lady-sparrow-r2412

 

It would be helpful to point out anything that needs changing or alteration if you have the time and patience.

I will look over it and get back with you

 

oh no no no no no, Azrael is full unicorn, his family tattooed themselves as a way to better integrate themselves into Zebra culture, I just realized I forgot to put that in his bio, this is now corrected. As for the six gifted, after getting an idea I still think it would be interesting. So either the dancer of the composer, which ever makes sense for my character to be I'm not fussy. They both sound cool to me.

Well tattoos and dye jobs most likely. The overall coat would be dyed, as well as mane and tail. The stripes and cutie mark would then be tattooed... you know what how would you tattoo fur anyway?

 

Well the big thing with The Composer is that she would, yes a mare, would be the leader of the group. The one that ties all the others together and decided just how best their talents can be used in their over all scheme. Not sure what her powers should be exactly though... also all the Six Gifted will be antagonists and actually be very powerful beyond that of normal ponies. They are actually just as much of a threat as the leaders of the six factions, the hope is that they will be defeated during the campaign and released from their cursed state of continuation.

Another thing is that The Composer is also the oldest of the Six Gifted, her home having originally being that of Japony/Neighpan (whatever it will be called). I could see her being very old indeed, and like all Gifted even a bit insane/in her case power hungry.

 

The Dancer you can decide for yourself, as well as their powers.

[EldarSteve 119]

I will look over it and get back with you

 

Well tattoos and dye jobs most likely. The overall coat would be dyed, as well as mane and tail. The stripes and cutie mark would then be tattooed... you know what how would you tattoo fur anyway?

 

Well the big thing with The Composer is that she would, yes a mare, would be the leader of the group. The one that ties all the others together and decided just how best their talents can be used in their over all scheme. Not sure what her powers should be exactly though... also all the Six Gifted will be antagonists and actually be very powerful beyond that of normal ponies. They are actually just as much of a threat as the leaders of the six factions, the hope is that they will be defeated during the campaign and released from their cursed state of continuation.

Another thing is that The Composer is also the oldest of the Six Gifted, her home having originally being that of Japony/Neighpan (whatever it will be called). I could see her being very old indeed, and like all Gifted even a bit insane/in her case power hungry.

 

The Dancer you can decide for yourself, as well as their powers.

 

 

Well, I'll be the dancer then :3 I was always a pro at doing the tango anyway.

 

as for how he permanently dyed his fur.....

 

 

 

[Descant 1,897]

I apologise for my relative inattentiveness to the thread. I've gotten rather swept up in other RPs, and college stuff. Needless to say, I'm here again. Don't worry. 

 

I'm considering revamping Descant's personality (The OC, not me) to not only suit this RP better, but also to better define his character. It's kinda too vague at the moment. The plan is to make him a little bigheaded, full of himself, overconfident in his abilities, which are admittedly not weak, and rather hot-headed. On a similar note, I'm probably going to rename him Encore, which would better suit this new personality type. 

 

I'm updating his page quite soon to reflect this. But I wouldn't mind hearing your thoughts on the matter.

 

Also, I have a third pony to submit. I notice there's some fuss over the Six Gifted, and I have a new OC who I can twist into fitting the role of the Dancer. My OC Cascade, sometimes Cascade Swirl... I've developed her character into a Naiad, or rather my own take on the mythological, ponified version. 

 

Nevermind, Eldar's got that covered, apparently.

[MagicalStarRain 599]

On a scale of 1-10 (10 being as evil as you can possibly get) how evil are the characters in this RP, including the OCs?

 

I would give my OC at least a 4 or a little bit higher because of her position as a weapon, her dislike of House Earthborn ponies, and she carries out orders from Twilight. All of that, with sympathy for the other Houses and her disapproval of unicorn supremacy added into the mix.

Edited January 21, 2013 by MagicalStarRain

[Archi the Atmomancer 564]

On a scale of 1-10 (10 being as evil as you can possibly get) how evil are the characters in this RP, including the OCs?

 

I would give my OC at least a 4 or a little bit higher because of her position and how she disagrees with beliefs of unicorn supremacy.

 

Hmm, for Fixit probably depends on the situation. Outside of combat he's probably a 4 too, in terms of morality I'd say he's somehwere between Lawful Neutral and Lawful Good. On the battlefield it's probably around 6, he certainly seems to enjoy watching people get flattened by canon balls a little too much. 

 

Oh, and if he ever meets Ember, or a unicorn or another faction leader face to face, that'll probably escalate to 8 out of sheer rage. Oh God my character is a monster by my standards.