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Okay... did it properly this time! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/redd-r2051 Okay, so that's Redd. He's a wanderer by the way. Just out of intrest, is there an exact number of other players yet?

Whoowee, there's a Red and a Redd? That's going to get confusing really quickly. Sorry about the long wait for my writer, he's a gimp...


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Whoowee, there's a Red and a Redd? That's going to get confusing really quickly. Sorry about the long wait for my writer, he's a gimp...

Yeah, I might change that.. Rust? Or Cast? Ooh, what about Signal? I'll find an alternative name for him, shouldn't be hard.

 

Edit: okay, done! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/rust-r2051

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I'd like to join, but a few questions:   1. How do I make an OC bio. I can give you a link for?   2. I know basically what it is, but what does OC stand for?   3. How much detail can I put into this? (I LOVE going into way too much detail sometimes)

 1) Go into Character Database in Roleplay World; create a new page; enter in your character info; copy paste link to page.

 2) OC= Original Character

3) As much as you want. Go crazy (but not too crazy).

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 1) Go into Character Database in Roleplay World; create a new page; enter in your character info; copy paste link to page.

 2) OC= Original Character

3) As much as you want. Go crazy (but not too crazy).

Thanks! Oh boy, I'm going to have fun with this. It will be a sad story, but interesting. Hmm. What shall I put in . . . ? TIME TO PONDER!

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I'd like to join, but a few questions:

 

1. How do I make an OC bio. I can give you a link for?

 

2. I know basically what it is, but what does OC stand for?

 

3. How much detail can I put into this? (I LOVE going into way too much detail sometimes)

 

You also have to have a balanced character in terms of both personality and abilities. You also need to include a backstory on how your character joined whatever House(or Cult) you choose to be apart of, what your character thinks of the other Houses(or the cult if you don't choose it), and anything that might've happened before the time the roleplay began. You may have to adjust your OC's personality to fit with the House or Cult. For example, if your OC is apart of the Cult of Laughter, you'll probaly have to make it so that your OC is insane or sadistic or anything along those lines. Another example could be House Whitegold. They're a House full of deception and spies, so you would then have to make your character a pony nopony could trust or one that is good at deceiving others to achieve their own ends.

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I'd like to join, but a few questions:

 

1. How do I make an OC bio. I can give you a link for?

 

2. I know basically what it is, but what does OC stand for?

 

3. How much detail can I put into this? (I LOVE going into way too much detail sometimes)

If I were you, I'd add a seperate bio for Eq Divided than for general. This is kinda Grimdark, and Scholar wants lots of details. If you make the altogether bio for Eq Divided, then this OC will not be usable in any other RP. Look at my OC Rose Petal if you want a good example of what I mean, I guess. In the sig.

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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jade-r2055

 

Okay, this is my pony. I could have added more, maybe, but I need to get to bed now. I hope you enjoy it!

 

You seem to have done a fairly good job but I wish to say when you get back to look through my bios in my original post  for correct formating and for what I am looking for in details (the first post of the thread, especially my OC Golden Dawn as he was created for Equestria Divided as an example bio) and I will say right now if you love detail please add as much as you want as I love a detailed and well thought out character. Posted Image

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I don't know why, but This Is War by 30 Seconds to Mars really fits this roleplay. Pretty much everypony along with Pinkie Pie would be the victim, not including the Mane 6. What do you think?


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I don't know why, but This Is War by 30 Seconds to Mars really fits this roleplay. Pretty much everypony along with Pinkie Pie would be the victim, not including the Mane 6. What do you think?

You mean like this?

 

 

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You seem to have done a fairly good job but I wish to say when you get back to look through my bios in my original post for correct formating and for what I am looking for in details (the first post of the thread, especially my OC Golden Dawn as he was created for Equestria Divided as an example bio) and I will say right now if you love detail please add as much as you want as I love a detailed and well thought out character. Posted Image

Is mine good, or do I need to work on a better backstory? Also, does the character actually suit this RP?
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You seem to have done a fairly good job but I wish to say when you get back to look through my bios in my original post  for correct formating and for what I am looking for in details (the first post of the thread, especially my OC Golden Dawn as he was created for Equestria Divided as an example bio) and I will say right now if you love detail please add as much as you want as I love a detailed and well thought out character. Posted Image

 

Yeah, I was kinda' tired when I made this. I've got more ideas that might help, and the end of the back story was very unspecific. I'll have to work on that a little more.

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Yeah, I was kinda' tired when I made this. I've got more ideas that might help, and the end of the back story was very unspecific. I'll have to work on that a little more.

What about in the roleplay you start off walking over to the Everfree forest before you find House Everfree? 


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Is mine good, or do I need to work on a better backstory? Also, does the character actually suit this RP?

Im helping Equestrian scholar review oc's and sorry to say: you do need to add more detail, maybe about his family or something, even if he dosnt know who they are you could write about them abandonning him or something, Equstrian scholar likes as much detail as possible and your oc looks like he could fit in the rolplay quite nicely Edited by discorded
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What about in the roleplay you start off walking over to the Everfree forest before you find House Everfree? 

 

Good idea! I'll need to make a few adjustments though, but it will be much better! I've already added a bit, and I'll see what I can do.

I finished my pony! I think it's good so far, and I most definitely have plans for her future. I hope you like it!

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jade-r2055

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Good idea! I'll need to make a few adjustments though, but it will be much better! I've already added a bit, and I'll see what I can do.

 

I finished my pony! I think it's good so far, and I most definitely have plans for her future. I hope you like it!

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jade-r2055

Oooh, you have one in House Everfree too? My pony Rose Petal is going to be in House Everfree, when she finally gets confirmed. Brohoof! Rose Petal isn't alone anymore!

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Oooh, you have one in House Everfree too? My pony Rose Petal is going to be in House Everfree, when she finally gets confirmed. Brohoof! Rose Petal isn't alone anymore!

 

Awesome! Ooh, idea! I need to make one adjustment! Nopony look at my pony yet!! Oh, this will make it VERY interesting indeed . . .

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I've been given permission to dual play, though, and as far as I know, my Descant is the only pony, approved or unapproved, to have chosen House Whitegold. He's pretty lonely. I wish I'd get some feedback on what I need to change, but I know that Scholar and Discorded are very busy, so I know I must be patient.

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I've been given permission to dual play, though, and as far as I know, my Descant is the only pony, approved or unapproved, to have chosen House Whitegold. He's pretty lonely. I wish I'd get some feedback on what I need to change, but I know that Scholar and Discorded are very busy, so I know I must be patient.

 

You have two ponies? Cool! I don't think I'd really manage that well, but a pony in House Whitegold would be fun to experiment with. And I just remembered that what my good idea was going to involve isn't allowed. Okay then, never mind about that. My pony is here: 

 

http://mlpforums.com...rs/_/jade-r2055

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You have two ponies? Cool! I don't think I'd really manage that well, but a pony in House Whitegold would be fun to experiment with. And I just remembered that what my good idea was going to involve isn't allowed. Okay then, never mind about that. My pony is here: 

 

http://mlpforums.com...rs/_/jade-r2055

That's a good story. Anti-Cult of Laughter? Ooh, I can't wait to see Jade in the RP. How does she get to the Everfree?

 

Both of mine are in my sig. Purple and Green. I mean, if you want to look. I need to go back and edit both their bios slightly to make them match, since there are portions that they tell one and the same story from different points of view.

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Jeez I don't go on the forums for a few days and this thread goes ka-boom! SInce when was there 240 sumthing replys on this!? Wow. I see a lot of people have been wantin' to join. So how many have you approved yet?

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Jeez I don't go on the forums for a few days and this thread goes ka-boom! SInce when was there 240 sumthing replys on this!? Wow. I see a lot of people have been wantin' to join. So how many have you approved yet?

I don't know how many have actually been approved, but I don't think they've added any to the list of approved ponies at the beginning of the thread since I followed it a few weeks ago.


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