Morager 149 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 I had some spare time and i kept think about rainbow dash gala dress so i decided to make it my 2nd sketch. i probably should of shades the hair in different shades for the color but i thought it came out good with out and i looks a little better in person(not best camera). I'm still learning so any feed back on how to improve my skill will be much appreciated. If anypony has any ideas for a drawing they want me to try let me know. Hope you all enjoy 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusty Soul 2,611 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 That is really really good. The only real thing I see wrong is her body is too long and thin... Other then that it looks pretty amazing... Great job. 1 Soundcloud-------------------Facebook---------------------------Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 As was stated by DS, her body is too hotdog-like, also her muzzle is a bit too pointed. Other than that it's pretty good. On a side note, we have the same initials 2 Thanks goes to ~Lugia~ for the sigMy OC: Vinyl BladeVinyl Blade's filly, Violet Minx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirbyboi 588 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 I love the shading and detail of her! However, yes, the body needs to be a bit more thick. Not fat, but thick. Other than that, it looks awesome! Wish I could draw like that. I also love how you did the wings. Looks very much like the show's and I would like to see you draw other ponies in their gala dress! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazardus_Havard. 479 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 If there was anything I had to point out on for improvement, it would have to be to take her body and round it out a bit more to make it more full looking instead of like a flat loaf of bread. Maybe for her top hair lengthen that bottom bang out to fill her head out a bit more as well. I think the wings turned out pretty darn nice though, I like how they're illustrated. 1 Practice makes perfect; but if nobody's perfect, why practice? http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/ Art http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us Story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Planty 1,053 September 3, 2012 Share September 3, 2012 Hey this looks really cool nice job, for improvements i would say the nose, front let and body are a bit to angular and have to many straight lines, to improve this you just need to make them a bit more rounded, the body is a tiny bit to long, making the absence of back leg's look a bit odd. Apart from that you've done a great job Especially the eye, it's so realistic! 1 Have ANY questions about Christianity? INBOX ME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morager 149 September 3, 2012 Author Share September 3, 2012 That is really really good. The only real thing I see wrong is her body is too long and thin... Other then that it looks pretty amazing... Great job. thanx i kinda notice the body when i was a little to far into it and didnt wanna start over. I love the shading and detail of her! However, yes, the body needs to be a bit more thick. Not fat, but thick. Other than that, it looks awesome! Wish I could draw like that. I also love how you did the wings. Looks very much like the show's and I would like to see you draw other ponies in their gala dress! thank you, since i dont have to many ideas yet for the next drawing ill might do a gala dress drawing for all of them If there was anything I had to point out on for improvement, it would have to be to take her body and round it out a bit more to make it more full looking instead of like a flat loaf of bread. Maybe for her top hair lengthen that bottom bang out to fill her head out a bit more as well. I think the wings turned out pretty darn nice though, I like how they're illustrated. thank you i appreciate the notes itll help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modphase 1,271 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 (edited) It looks great. The only thing that needs improvement is to shorten down her body and give her more......mass...and de-sharpen her nose a bit, but overall it looks fine. Edited September 4, 2012 by Lil' Tokyo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma 200 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 I would have drawn some pointers on fabric, creases and frills but dang, that would take a while. If you want me to give you some links though, I will :3 1 "The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morager 149 September 4, 2012 Author Share September 4, 2012 I would have drawn some pointers on fabric, creases and frills but dang, that would take a while. If you want me to give you some links though, I will :3 Wow i never thought anyone would go that deep into it but thanx, thats alot of useful info, it will help alot. this is only my second sketch so far since i started drawing and im only teaching myself, but the pointers will really come in handy for my next one. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Musix 237 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 Wow, You're drawing skills are brilliant, My friend. Tell me, How long did it take you to finish this? It looks Awesome! I love it. You've got most of it pretty accurate. I hope to see you're art more often. If you do this sort of thing often, Maybe you should check out www.DeviantART.com. That's a site for art, of course, Alot of it Fan based on My Little Pony, But other stuff is on there too. It's a friendly community, Much like this one! Well, keep up the work. Ciao! Brony Guards - Apply now! -Musix Nos Castor Auferet - 155 Squadron's motto Contrary to popular belief by strange people, Rainbow Dash is the best pony in the entire universe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gone Airbourne 21,977 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 Picture is outstanding YOU are an outstanding artist keep up the beautiful artwork! Loved it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess_Molestia 1,460 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 well you know what they say about Rainbow Dash and fancy dresses... Rainbow Dash always dresses in style (that's a truism isn't it) Can't visit Ponyville? Show up and say you can't! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castoro Chiaro 181 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 I'm really impressed if this is only your second sketch! You're a quick study. I would have drawn some pointers on fabric, creases and frills but dang, that would take a while. If you want me to give you some links though, I will :3 Super useful tutorial here! I'll keep this in my back pocket for future reference. 1 -- I'm also of the opinion that deliberate lies and innuendos should never be allowed to go unopposed. At what point does tolerating the intolerable make you part of the problem? - John DeLancie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morager 149 September 4, 2012 Author Share September 4, 2012 Wow, You're drawing skills are brilliant, My friend. Tell me, How long did it take you to finish this? It looks Awesome! I love it. You've got most of it pretty accurate. I hope to see you're art more often. If you do this sort of thing often, Maybe you should check out www.DeviantART.com. That's a site for art, of course, Alot of it Fan based on My Little Pony, But other stuff is on there too. It's a friendly community, Much like this one! Well, keep up the work. Ciao! Thank you i hope to have another one done son I'm really impressed if this is only your second sketch! You're a quick study. Super useful tutorial here! I'll keep this in my back pocket for future reference. thanx and and yea the tutorial is great, it has been helping with my new drawing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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