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Exactly what the title says! if you have a tweaked version of any verse, or even the whole song, be creative and tell! It's my favorite song, true, but it's more than probable that it has the most tweakable lyrics out of all pony songs XD. Here's one I said for life, posted a few minutes ago in a topic, and could probably be applied for many, many occasions.

 

"This day has not been perfect

The kind of day I didn't dream when I was small

So instead of celebrating, I find myself just breaking

Why life can't be nice for once and stop being such a bitch~"

 

Yeah, I'm pretty sure this can be used and singed by many XD.

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this day suuuucks

the kind of day of which i'm very undproductiiiive

so instead of making tracks i just slack of to records

and in a strange way it feels gooooooooooooooooood

 

this day was supposed to be fucking awesoooome

the kind of day which i'm very productiiiiive

would make 5 tracks in about 10 hours and then would sit and do nothing bezcouse it feels good

but that did not happoen todaaaay

 

homework

I could care less

about the homewrok

i wont partake

in any homework

Vows? i'll do them when i get on the buss tommorow

or 5 mins before school starts

i'm so bored today it sucks

wont you please just kill me noooow

no i do not want to do the homework

in my heart there is no homework

but still i dont want to get notes becouse of not doing my homewoooork

 

i must it befor i get sleepy

or else im gonna wake up in the middle of the night cuz im hungry!

qhy is it a problem? cuz then i'd been lying if i'd say

i have slept a good amount tonight

and if i dont sleep

everything will look brighter and i will be very distant and freaky

and then people will look awkwardly at me and say

what the fuck is up with you today and i will say

deverything you do is a baloooon!

 

finally, my merzbox has finished downloading

i will now ruin my ears

 

oh i hope i dont die tommorow

that would be awfull

cuz then i would-

 

die

that would suck

 

edit: my little pony: liking eddsworld is still rather normal

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this day suuuucks

the kind of day of which i'm very undproductiiiive

so instead of making tracks i just slack of to records

and in a strange way it feels gooooooooooooooooood

 

this day was supposed to be fucking awesoooome

the kind of day which i'm very productiiiiive

would make 5 tracks in about 10 hours and then would sit and do nothing bezcouse it feels good

but that did not happoen todaaaay

 

homework

I could care less

about the homewrok

i wont partake

in any homework

Vows? i'll do them when i get on the buss tommorow

or 5 mins before school starts

i'm so bored today it sucks

wont you please just kill me noooow

no i do not want to do the homework

in my heart there is no homework

but still i dont want to get notes becouse of not doing my homewoooork

 

i must it befor i get sleepy

or else im gonna wake up in the middle of the night cuz im hungry!

qhy is it a problem? cuz then i'd been lying if i'd say

i have slept a good amount tonight

and if i dont sleep

everything will look brighter and i will be very distant and freaky

and then people will look awkwardly at me and say

what the fuck is up with you today and i will say

deverything you do is a baloooon!

 

finally, my merzbox has finished downloading

i will now ruin my ears

 

oh i hope i dont die tommorow

that would be awfull

cuz then i would-

 

die

that would suck

 

edit: my little pony: liking eddsworld is still rather normal

 

I would have liked it if it made sense with the rhythm...but that was too awesome and funny for me to even complain about it, whatever the hell I might have had in mind :lol: . Also, what's this eddsworld that people normally talk about? At least a small synopsis. Because if your thing was imagined from there...I want to see it ^_^ .
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I would have liked it if it made sense with the rhythm...but that was too awesome and funny for me to even complain about it, whatever the hell I might have had in mind :lol: . Also, what's this eddsworld that people normally talk about? At least a small synopsis. Because if your thing was imagined from there...I want to see it ^_^ .

 

it wasn't. eddswworld is just a shitty little flash animation that i saw a user was a fan of in a how weird is the user above you thread.

i just jammed it in there at the end to be random. i just told a story about how my day was and how it will turn out tommorrow if i do this and that. lol. my mind is deranged

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it wasn't. eddswworld is just a shitty little flash animation that i saw a user was a fan of in a how weird is the user above you thread.

i just jammed it in there at the end to be random. i just told a story about how my day was and how it will turn out tommorrow if i do this and that. lol. my mind is deranged

 

Well, that was the idea. You creative. Also, your mind is not deranged. Only thinks different. There's a difference. You ain't killing people outside with an AK-47 screaming "TERRORIST MOTHAFUCKA!" or something like that XD.
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Well, that was the idea. You creative. Also, your mind is not deranged. Only thinks different. There's a difference. You ain't killing people outside with an AK-47 screaming "TERRORIST MOTHAFUCKA!" or something like that XD.

 

http://soundcloud.com/zylomafoni/where-are-your-friends

will maybe this change your mind?

(i've made alot more horrendous tracks than this btw.)

but yeah i didn't excactly mean it like literally.


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I think this belong here;

 

 

Probably my fav version that ive seen :) (i'm not a very good song writer i hope this post fit's here seen as i didn't make it :) )


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http-~~-//soundcloud.com/zylomafoni/where-are-your-friends

will maybe this change your mind?

(i've made alot more horrendous tracks than this btw.)

but yeah i didn't excactly mean it like literally.

 

Dude, I was just joking XD. And as for your song...Mi amigo (my friend), as they say in my good ol' country of Argentina, after hearing Nine Inch Nails and Lightning Bolt, trust me, your composition is NOT weird to me XD. Besides, the last 40 seconds or so are perfect for a scene in a criminal/detectivesque type of show after a very horrible death and a grim mood sets in.
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Dude, I was just joking XD. And as for your song...Mi amigo (my friend), as they say in my good ol' country of Argentina, after hearing Nine Inch Nails and Lightning Bolt, trust me, your composition is NOT weird to me XD. Besides, the last 40 seconds or so are perfect for a scene in a criminal/detectivesque type of show after a very horrible death and a grim mood sets in.

 

*snickersnickersnicker* *snicker snisker* lol yeh we did that to. well that's strange. i show this to other people and they say i'm crazy. i finally fouin somewrhere i belong#!

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*snickersnickersnicker* *snicker snisker* lol yeh we did that to. well that's strange. i show this to other people and they say i'm crazy. i finally fouin somewrhere i belong#!

 

Eh, I don't think it's the most normal thing in the world, but hey, wach one with their own composition. Otherwise, "EXPERIMENTING" would not exist in the music world XD. Plus, whenever someone says crazy, I remind people of this truth ( in my opinion): The WHOLE world is crazy. There just different level of crazyness =).
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Finally the moment is at hand

For me to go to Disneyland

Oh, Space Mountain we won't make

We'll end up riding on a fake

The best rides will be...

Mine, all mine.

 

(I know it should be Disney World, but just to make it rhyme.)

 

No, I do not love Pizza Hut

In my stomach there is no room

But I still want Domino's to be all mine

 

We must vote before it's too late

Find a way to save the day

The election? I'll be lying if I say

I don't fear the country may lose it

To one who wants to use it

Not comfort it and cherish it each day

 

For I oh so love the President

All my thoughts he does consume

Oh Barack Obama

I'll vote for you very soon

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Finally the moment is at hand

For me to go to Disneyland

Oh, Space Mountain we won't make

We'll end up riding on a fake

The best rides will be...

Mine, all mine.

 

(I know it should be Disney World, but just to make it rhyme.)

 

No, I do not love Pizza Hut

In my stomach there is no room

But I still want Domino's to be all mine

 

We must vote before it's too late

Find a way to save the day

The election? I'll be lying if I say

I don't fear the country may lose it

To one who wants to use it

Not comfort it and cherish it each day

 

For I oh so love the President

All my thoughts he does consume

Oh Barack Obama

I'll vote for you very soon

 

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Also, rides of DisneyLand...GAH I want to goooooooo! Also, Domino's may be your favorite, but at least Pizza Hut can give you ponies =). And the president thing was awesome XD. I'm Argentinian, but with how my country is, and how I'll vote for the first time next year...I know that feel bro XD. Also, I would like to say I have a candidate I could vote...but...

 

NO I don't like candidates

they allll are too corrupt

they all ultimately SUUUUUUUUCK!

 

This, is Argentina's politics, in short XD.

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I'm gonna be singing his all day when episode one of season three is released~

 

 

This day is going to be perfect,

the kind of day of which I've dreamed since season two~

Everybrony will gather 'round,

TVs and Streams with surround sound,

to watch the premier of MLP Season 3~!

 

This day is going to be perfect,

the kind of day of which I've dreamed since the wedding~

The time is finally here come on everybrony give a cheer,

it's time to watch the premier of MLP Season 3~!

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I'm gonna be singing his all day when episode one of season three is released~

 

 

This day is going to be perfect,

the kind of day of which I've dreamed since season two~

Everybrony will gather 'round,

TVs and Streams with surround sound,

to watch the premier of MLP Season 3~!

 

This day is going to be perfect,

the kind of day of which I've dreamed since the wedding~

The time is finally here come on everybrony give a cheer,

it's time to watch the premier of MLP Season 3~!

 

...I'm saving this SO badly. Because, indeed, this will be sung by many...in the whole world XD. And indeed, it will be sung all day...pestering those eho do not understand like hell...and it will be GLORIOUS!
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This day is going to be perfect

The kind of day where I just play my videogames

I'll leave that essay for Tuesday

Another speech? Screw it, I say

What they don't know is I haven't done them all.

 

This day was going to be perfect

The kind of day where I'd get all my homework done

But instead of doing work

All I have done is simply shirk

And level up in Elder Scrolls 43 times.

 

History won't interest me

And English class can kiss my ass

I won't finish that dumb project!

I'll play games till I'm deranged

And what about my awful grades?

The truth is I don't care for them at all!

 

No, I will not graduate

Inevitably my fate

But I still want you to do my work!

 

Better write before it's too late

Find a way, type that essay

Done? I'll be lying if I say

That I don't fear failing class

And I won't care if I don't pass

Just fail and never get a proper job

For I really want more cash

And buy for my gaming stash

Oh, my diploma

I'll get it very soon

 

Finally the moment has arrived

To ensure that Alduin has died

Oh, the grade I will not make

I'll serve burgers and a milkshake

No, my future will be --

 

Screwed, you're screwed. Muahaha~

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This day is going to be perfect

The kind of day where I just play my videogames

I'll leave that essay for Tuesday

Another speech? Screw it, I say

What they don't know is I haven't done them all.

 

This day was going to be perfect

The kind of day where I'd get all my homework done

But instead of doing work

All I have done is simply shirk

And level up in Elder Scrolls 43 times.

 

History won't interest me

And English class can kiss my ass

I won't finish that dumb project!

I'll play games till I'm deranged

And what about my awful grades?

The truth is I don't care for them at all!

 

No, I will not graduate

Inevitably my fate

But I still want you to do my work!

 

Better write before it's too late

Find a way, type that essay

Done? I'll be lying if I say

That I don't fear failing class

And I won't care if I don't pass

Just fail and never get a proper job

For I really want more cash

And buy for my gaming stash

Oh, my diploma

I'll get it very soon

 

Finally the moment has arrived

To ensure that Alduin has died

Oh, the grade I will not make

I'll serve burgers and a milkshake

No, my future will be --

 

Screwed, you're screwed. Muahaha~

 

...This...All of my this...all of my this multiplied to the whatever number. The genius that is found in this pretty much speaks levels of "I CARE NOT!" speaking of college and stuff. Dude, you just simplified my school life XD. I do hope to pass college however XD.
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I looked up a random word online, what came up was "town", so here are a few lines with that word inserted.

 

This town is going to be perfect

The kind of town of which I dreamed since I was small

Everypony will gather round

Say I look lovely in my town

What they don't know is that I have fooled them town

 

No, I do not love the town

In my town there is no room

But I still want town to be all mine

 

Finally the town has arrived

For me to be one lucky town

Oh, the town we won't make

He'll end up marrying a town

Shining Town will be...

Mine, all mine.

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I looked up a random word online, what came up was "town", so here are a few lines with that word inserted.

 

This town is going to be perfect

The kind of town of which I dreamed since I was small

Everypony will gather round

Say I look lovely in my town

What they don't know is that I have fooled them town

 

No, I do not love the town

In my town there is no room

But I still want town to be all mine

 

Finally the town has arrived

For me to be one lucky town

Oh, the town we won't make

He'll end up marrying a town

Shining Town will be...

Mine, all mine.

 

The creepy part is, most of the sentences actually make sense...yeah, I was right. This Day Aria IS the most tweakable song EVER! (or at least from MLP XD).
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This day was going to be perfect

The kind of day I thought that nothing could go wrong

But instead of staying up late

With all my friends and celebrate

My whole life ruined, well it never suited me at all

I don't give a thing about living

I won't partake in any games

Friends? You're just liars, go away

That through any kind of weather

I want you to leave forever

Truth is I don't care for you at all

No I do not love you guys

For my heart is dead inside

And I think you knew this all the time.

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The Killers version:

 

This day has been so surplus

The kinda of day of which I found about a cake

But since I don't know what for

And everyone is poor

My freaking hells may not make it on the floor

 

This day was going to be surplus

When I rode on a seven hurricane

But since I never got the bill

And Pwn-3 got the final kill

I'm searching for a way to always get a door

 

Note: I love The Killers. I just think that their lyrics are extremely random and hard to get at times.


 

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This day is nothing to be perfect

The kind of day witch I creamed since I had balls

Everypony will gather pounds

Saying I look lovely in my frown

What they don't throw is that I have pooped them aaaaaall.

 

This day used to be perfect

The kind of day with a glitch in the fall

But instead of eating pancakes

With all my brands to sell a brait

My wedding balls they may not play for me at aaaaaall.

 

I could care less about the fest

I wont payday in any cake

Bowls will be laying when I say

That through any kind of pepper

I'll want us to be to gather

The truth is I don't fare for him at all

No I do not love the broom in my heart there is no plume

But I still want him to be all might

 

That's all got for now.


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NHL lockout version:

 

Gary Bettman:

This day is going to be perfect

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small

Every hockey fan will gather round

Thinking the hockey season is around

What they don't know is that I have fooled them all

 

Fans:

This day was going to perfect

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small

But instead of watching games

With all the fans to celebrate

The hockey season I fear may not start at all

 

I could care less about the fans

I won't partake in any games

The league? I'll be lying if I say

That through any kind of weather

I want it to stay together

The truth is I don't care for it at all

 

No, I do not love the game

In my heart there is no room

But I still want the money to be all mine

 

We must negotiate before it's too late

Find a way to save the day

The season? I'll be lying if I say

I don't fear that we will lose it

To one who wants to use it

Not cherish it and watch it every day

 

For I oh so love the game

All my thoughts it does consume

Oh, Boston Bruins :)

I'll be there very soon

 

Finally the moment has arrived

For me to be one rich commissioner

Oh, the season we won't make

We'll end up watching a fake

The NHL will be...

 

Mine, all mine.


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This day was going to be perfect

The kind of day I thought that nothing could go wrong

But instead of staying up late

With all my friends and celebrate

My whole life ruined, well it never suited me at all

I don't give a thing about living

I won't partake in any games

Friends? You're just liars, go away

That through any kind of weather

I want you to leave forever

Truth is I don't care for you at all

No I do not love you guys

For my heart is dead inside

And I think you knew this all the time.

 

Sad tweak is sad :( ...and while it totally fits the rhythm, get over here and let me give you a hug! :)

 

The Killers version:

 

This day has been so surplus

The kinda of day of which I found about a cake

But since I don't know what for

And everyone is poor

My freaking hells may not make it on the floor

 

This day was going to be surplus

When I rode on a seven hurricane

But since I never got the bill

And Pwn-3 got the final kill

I'm searching for a way to always get a door

 

Note: I love The Killers. I just think that their lyrics are extremely random and hard to get at times.

 

To be honest I haven't heard a The Killers song in a long time, and that was either Mr. Brightside or When You Were Young, so yeah, I don't exactly get it, but it made laugh so much I can't even complain :lol: .

 

This day is nothing to be perfect

The kind of day witch I creamed since I had balls

Everypony will gather pounds

Saying I look lovely in my frown

What they don't throw is that I have pooped them aaaaaall.

 

This day used to be perfect

The kind of day with a glitch in the fall

But instead of eating pancakes

With all my brands to sell a brait

My wedding balls they may not play for me at aaaaaall.

 

I could care less about the fest

I wont payday in any cake

Bowls will be laying when I say

That through any kind of pepper

I'll want us to be to gather

The truth is I don't fare for him at all

No I do not love the broom in my heart there is no plume

But I still want him to be all might

 

That's all got for now.

 

Is my brain supposed to process this? Hmm, I'd like to try, but apparently, it left on a vacation trip with a one-way ticket to Shangri-La, so sad to say, I don't think I'll ever be able to process this :lol: .

 

NHL lockout version:

 

Gary Bettman:

This day is going to be perfect

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small

Every hockey fan will gather round

Thinking the hockey season is around

What they don't know is that I have fooled them all

 

Fans:

This day was going to perfect

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small

But instead of watching games

With all the fans to celebrate

The hockey season I fear may not start at all

 

I could care less about the fans

I won't partake in any games

The league? I'll be lying if I say

That through any kind of weather

I want it to stay together

The truth is I don't care for it at all

 

No, I do not love the game

In my heart there is no room

But I still want the money to be all mine

 

We must negotiate before it's too late

Find a way to save the day

The season? I'll be lying if I say

I don't fear that we will lose it

To one who wants to use it

Not cherish it and watch it every day

 

For I oh so love the game

All my thoughts it does consume

Oh, Boston Bruins :)

I'll be there very soon

 

Finally the moment has arrived

For me to be one rich commissioner

Oh, the season we won't make

We'll end up watching a fake

The NHL will be...

 

Mine, all mine.

 

I'm not a fan of hockey of any kind, but I'm sure that's how I'd feel if what you said is true ^_^ . Luckily for us, the guys over at Hasbro or DHX Studio aren't like that Gary Bettman or whoever it is, because otherwise, Season 3 would never come :o .

 

Anyway, I think I have one on my wishes for Spyro The Dragon and Crash Bandicoot series.

 

"I hope the news are perfect,

the kind of news of which I dreamed since I was small.

That Insommiac has come back

to take over Spyro once more

but I sadly don't know anything at all

 

I wish the news were perfect,

the kind of news of which I dreamed since I was small.

but instead of knowing something,

truth is that I know nothing,

Naughty Dog where are you to take Crash Bandicoot once more.

 

I couldn't care more about them both,

I will partake in every game,

vows? It'll be the truth when I say.

That through any kind of weather,

I'll want them to be in charge

the truth is that I care for them too much...

 

YES I do lo both series,

In MY HEART there is a room,

that I''ll replay them AGAAAAAAIN!

 

We must take note before it's too late,

find the way to save the games,

hope? I'll be lying if I say...

I don't fear they'll never come,

to never take part in all the games,

not cherish and love them like the old days...

 

For I oh so love both series,

in my heart there's a big room.

Oh, Crash and Spyro,

where are the old youuuuuu?!

 

I wonder when the moment will arrive.

For me, to be one lucky man.

 

Oh old them we won't see,

trapped in the past will be,

Crash and Spyro will never...

 

Come. Never come...MUAHAHAHAHAHAH!"

 

Don't get me wrong, I loved the other games of Crash and Spyro that happened for them, more specifically the ones Sierra Entertainment did, and I enjoyed thsoe more adventure style games a lot (although I have no idea on Activision's Spyro: Skylanders, since I haven't been able to play that game, but it doesn look like fun), but the classic ones will ALWAYS be bigger in my heart. :D

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