"The Subordinate Six" Pre-Reader Request

[Legendary Emerald 622]

PHEW!

It's taken longer than expect, but today I wrapped up the first episode (read: storyline) in the ponyfic I started for National Pony Writing Month, "The Subordinate Six".



As such, this is a call for pre-readers to read what I've currently written and give their advice and opinions. I already have an editor on hand for taking care of my grammatical and spelling errors, but he tends to think so highly of my writing that he's can't provide much constructive criticism.

Title: The Subordinate Six (Tentative)
Genre: Comedy, Episode-like
Summary: Spin-off to the highly popular My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic television show! Lyra and Bon Bon travel to Las Pegasus to start a new life and discover that the ponies of Las Pegasus are no less crazy than the ones they'd left behind in Ponyville. Co-staring Derpy Hooves, Octavia, Vinyl Scratch, and The Great and Powerful Trixie. Saturdays at 10am. Only on the BUB!

If you want to be a pre-reader, message me in private, or just reply to this post, and I'll send you a link to the google docs. Edited February 1, 2013 by Legendyay Emerald