writing When eyes meet and hands join

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

A first glance is casual at best,

often it seems, that the first glance is overlooked.

The second glance is always noticed,

often it seems that this is where stories begin.

 

I wonder myself on these precarious glances.

Often I wonder just why it is you bothered to give them to me.

Me? not many words I can use to properly define.

You? oh how the dictionary bleeds when I speak of you.

 

Obviously I find myself undeserving.

How could I not?

To be blessed by the presence of such beauty.

Beauty not merely on the outside, but locked away in the furrows of that precious mind.

A mind and soul which I have come to love.

 

Its not often that I, as myself, can express my feelings.

But it seems wholeheartedly that you are able to bring out the best in me.

The best in one who thought his worth had long slipped away.

Yes, this is why I felt for you.

 

Yes, these are our glances that we shared,

I lost count at just how many we shared.

I suppose this is when our eyes met.

On the day where the shy man makes a bold move.

 

One month to that day, and so much seems to happen.

Im lost in the words we shared.

Im lost in your eyes.

And then we join hands.

And i will never regret the moment.

 

And to this luxury you provided me, i was content with life.

Nothing it would seem could possibly remove the joys bestowed by you.

Though, it seems that I was wrong, for they were removed by you .

My heart still aches.

 

I make my point now, to stay by your side and continue to join hands.

Let them never part.

I will wait through the fire for you, and I will endure your suffering as well.

Together we will walk the length of life's garden.

Hand in hand, smiles pronounced deftly on our faces,

a shadow arcs our length plus two more, and they join together.

Let this symbolize our feelings.

 

Once we reach the end of our walk, after we have endured so much,

that will be the time where I ask, where I declare.

 

Oh yes, I wait for that day.

Let it come sooner.

For now my heart aches.

 

 

-David

 

Throughout all these trials, big and small. I will continue to show you my affection. Let it continue to grow.

Edited September 30, 2012 by TheBronyHeart

[Cherry Blossom 864]

Now this is a poem that deserves a billion brohoofs. This was absolutely beautiful work you have done with this! It seems that you've put your heart, soul and emotions into this. Am I right or am I a parasprite?

 

My heart melted from this and I'm really sure your special somepony will totally love this!

Edited September 30, 2012 by Octavinyl

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Now this is a poem that deserves a billion brohoofs. This was absolutely beautiful work you have done with this! It seems that you've put your heart, soul and emotions into this. Am I right or am I a parasprite?

 

You are very right, this is one of my most emotional and event inspired pieces. Honestly, if it werent for the amount of tears that I expended last night (thats another story that you can find out about by checking the life advice column), I would have cried while I wrote this.

 

This is the first time I have ever really written a "love" poem, and I feel like I did not give it the justice it deserves. I am glad you enjoyed it however.

[Lifehax 81]

D:

 

This was so beautiful that I cried :'(

 

....BROHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOF!

Beautiful work.. a very, very great and well thought out poem imo I want moar plox! MOAR!

 

-Vinyl

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

I also feel as though I should explain something.

 

Our eyes meeting for the first time... it means that is when I asked her out

 

When we joined hands... it means that is when we first told each other that we loved each other

 

I encourage you to reread it with that in mind, it was intended to add to the power of the poem over all.

[Lightning Fluttershy 1,845]

You deserve every brohoof you get. I love it when you make a new poem. You're an amazing writer and you have talent. Keep up the good work! Amazing job on this one by the way!

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

You deserve every brohoof you get. I love it when you make a new poem. You're an amazing writer and you have talent. Keep up the good work! Amazing job on this one by the way!

 

I am happy to hear that you appreciate my work and find me to be a good writer. I will of course continue to write more.

keep an eye out.