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Velnir was crying now, and he dropped the sickle. He turned away from the subject, letting him drop, and walked to the entrance, shaking. "L-l-let me out. I c-c-can't take it. Please..." He stood at the entrance staring at the ground. Tears ran down his face freely.

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In every breath, there is hope


In the end, what matters most?

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Fire Blade hit the ground, trying to fully regain his breath. He couldn't get up, despite trying hard to. The pain and pleasure swelled. He couldn't do magic, because when he tried, he felt blocked and the energy surged through his body and caused more pain. Yet only one thing came to his mind: home. He had heard of a priestess of some sort back at the Unicorn capital. Maybe, if he ever got back, he could get her help before he died.

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Surge opened the cell to let Velinr out. As he walked out he put his arm and whispered in his ear. I did not want you to have to relive this if it pained you. And Fatigue is setting up the different squads. Im sorry you had to go through this again old friend. Taps his shoulders and walks in the cell with Fire Blade. He sits in the chair looking at FB. Now...that was just a taste of what we can do. And i am much more heartless than he is. But i also am very forgiving. Ill heal you under one condition. Now you say you dont know why they are here. Very well. I want you to send a letter to you leader telling her to call off the attack.

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Velnir was visibly shaking, and there was blood on his body. He took a few shocked step outside the prison part of town hall, then sat in the bath tub without the water going. He had a blank look in his eyes, and his sickle sat in front of him ominously, as if he were fighting it.

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In the end, what matters most?

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Surge opened the cell to let Velinr out. As he walked out he put his arm and whispered in his ear. I did not want you to have to relive this if it pained you. And Fatigue is setting up the different squads. Im sorry you had to go through this again old friend. Taps his shoulders and walks in the cell with Fire Blade. He sits in the chair looking at FB. Now...that was just a taste of what we can do. And i am much more heartless than he is. But i also am very forgiving. Ill heal you under one condition. Now you say you dont know why they are here. Very well. I want you to send a letter to you leader telling her to call off the attack.

 

He coughed up more blood, lying in a pool of his own on the prison floor.

"I- I can't... I n-n-need magic, and I don't kn-know their... Location."

His breath grew shallow.

"If- if you send a m-message... Maybe it will g-g-get there soon..."

He prayed on the inside he would get at least to the Unicorn Empire alive.

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He coughed up more blood, lying in a pool of his own on the prison floor.

"I- I can't... I n-n-need magic, and I don't kn-know their... Location."

His breath grew shallow.

"If- if you send a m-message... Maybe it will g-g-get there soon..."

He prayed on the inside he would get at least to the Unicorn Empire alive.

 

Surge rolled his eyes as Fire Blade started to bleed out. Very well. Ill see what i can do. He walks out the cell and gets a med kit. This may hurt a bit. He puts Fire Blade on the bed. Looks like Velinr still got it. He did a number on you. Look into the wounds. He then cleans the wounds with a solution that burns and bubbles as it cleans. He washes some of the blood out of his coat to see how deep the cuts were. He got you real good. Now for the painful part. Pulls out a needle and thread. Puts gag in FB's mouth, and starts to sow the wounds shut. You got some tuff skin for a unicorn. After a few painful minuets of sowing the wounds shut he rubs an ointment over the stitches so they would heal faster and stay closed. There we are. Now if your breed would have sent that doctor we needed nun of this would have hurt so much. You should be fine, your a solider anyway. Your use to pain. Now as for that letter. I thought all you had to do was think of who you wanted to send it to and it happened?
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Surge rolled his eyes as Fire Blade started to bleed out. Very well. Ill see what i can do. He walks out the cell and gets a med kit. This may hurt a bit. He puts Fire Blade on the bed. Looks like Velinr still got it. He did a number on you. Look into the wounds. He then cleans the wounds with a solution that burns and bubbles as it cleans. He washes some of the blood out of his coat to see how deep the cuts were. He got you real good. Now for the painful part. Pulls out a needle and thread. Puts gag in FB's mouth, and starts to sow the wounds shut. You got some tuff skin for a unicorn. After a few painful minuets of sowing the wounds shut he rubs an ointment over the stitches so they would heal faster and stay closed. There we are. Now if your breed would have sent that doctor we needed nun of this would have hurt so much. You should be fine, your a solider anyway. Your use to pain. Now as for that letter. I thought all you had to do was think of who you wanted to send it to and it happened?

 

Fire Blade removed the gag.

"It requires magic stronger than I can do. I mean, it is upper med-level magic, but I never received that training."

He lay there, thinking about sitting up. But he didn't, after some thought, because he didn't want to reopen anything.

"Besides, I did not know you required a medic."

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Velnir's body started racking with tearless, voiceless sobs. He felt the blood drying on his pelt, and his sickle gleamed evilly at him. He cried out and through it across the room, where it curved into the door. He turned the water on and considered drowning himself.

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In every action, there is consequence


In every breath, there is hope


In the end, what matters most?

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Shelby was horrified at what had happened, and she had stood in the town hall to try to recover. She then realized Velnir would be at the house by himself, so she rushed off. When she arrived, she heard water running and assumed the worst. Only when she rushed into the bathroom was she relieved to find him alive.

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Velnir looked over at her, and seemed to look through her. His eyes were glazed, and he was shaking uncontrollably. Fortunately, anything other than the water that could be potentially dangerous was either stuck in the door (His sickle) or with his bags and knife in his room. He sunk deeper into the tub.

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In every breath, there is hope


In the end, what matters most?

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Velnir looked over at her, and seemed to look through her. His eyes were glazed, and he was shaking uncontrollably. Fortunately, anything other than the water that could be potentially dangerous was either stuck in the door (His sickle) or with his bags and knife in his room. He sunk deeper into the tub.

 

She ran over and pulled him up by his underarms.

"Velnir... please... don't do this... please..."

She considered getting in the tub with him to comfort him. She then turned off the water and did, holding Velnir close so he couldn't slip under the surface and kill himself.

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He couldn't look her in the eyes. "I did it again. I said I wouldn't do it again and I did it again. Why? Why did I do it again?" He asked it to her desperately, "Please, please tell me..." He looked as if he was already dead,though his body was perfectly healthy. It was generally known that when Velnir did this type of work, he came out of it hating life in general.

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In every heart, there is darkness


In every action, there is consequence


In every breath, there is hope


In the end, what matters most?

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He couldn't look her in the eyes. "I did it again. I said I wouldn't do it again and I did it again. Why? Why did I do it again?" He asked it to her desperately, "Please, please tell me..." He looked as if he was already dead,though his body was perfectly healthy. It was generally known that when Velnir did this type of work, he came out of it hating life in general.

 

She held him close to her, considering draining the water.

"I don't know... the only thing that matters is it's over and I'm here... I'm here..."

She laid her head on his chest, trying to comfort him and bring him out of the trance he had set himself in.

"You'll be fine, Velnir..."

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He hugged her head to her chest and cried into her mane, "I don't deserve you. I don't deserve what you do to me. I do not deserve this bath tub. I don't deserve this house," he began, rambling about all the things he didn't deserve, most of it related to her.

 

(It pains me to do this to you Velnir...)

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In the end, what matters most?

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He hugged her head to her chest and cried into her mane, "I don't deserve you. I don't deserve what you do to me. I do not deserve this bath tub. I don't deserve this house," he began, rambling about all the things he didn't deserve, most of it related to her.

 

(It pains me to do this to you Velnir...)

 

"No one deserves anything," she interrupted him. "I don't deserve you. I don't deserve to be alive. Fate just gives us these things, and we should take them as we get them. Otherwise, they may be lost forever..."

She kissed him for a moment.

"Velnir... just remember this: I love you, and I cannot love anypony but you."

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Velnir pulled her into the tub next to him, and hugged her while crying into her chest. "But why does fate have to be so cruel? Doesn't it understand that these things are- are... are wrong?" He held her tightly as he cried, the water having totally soaked through his pelt by now.

 

(This is proof: Nightfall has brohoofed every on of my Velnir comments in his suicidal form. He once told me he'd never brohoof something he didn't like. Nightfall likes Velnir's pain.)

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In every breath, there is hope


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Velnir pulled her into the tub next to him, and hugged her while crying into her chest. "But why does fate have to be so cruel? Doesn't it understand that these things are- are... are wrong?" He held her tightly as he cried, the water having totally soaked through his pelt by now.

 

"Sh... Sh... It's over... don't think about the past... Sh..."

She petted his mane. His sad state was beginning to take hold on her, and she found herself holding back tears.

"Velnir, forget about it... I'm here, and I'll always be here..."

The water made her feel a bit better, as it was still warm.

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He would've responded with some form of endearment, if he was awake. The combination of the comfort from her softness, the warmth of the water, and the scents in the room caused him to fall asleep on her, where he had strange dreams where nightmares turned out okay.

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Fire Blade removed the gag.

"It requires magic stronger than I can do. I mean, it is upper med-level magic, but I never received that training."

He lay there, thinking about sitting up. But he didn't, after some thought, because he didn't want to reopen anything.

"Besides, I did not know you required a medic."

 

Well yes we need one. We come to you guys for all our medical needs so we dont have to go back to these old methods. And if you would not have killed my guards you would have found that out. Also there are some ponies i want you to meet. I think they would be "happy" to see you. :ph34r:
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Well yes we need one. We come to you guys for all our medical needs so we dont have to go back to these old methods. And if you would not have killed my guards you would have found that out. Also there are some ponies i want you to meet. I think they would be "happy" to see you. :ph34r:

 

"You could have sent a messenger before..."

He sighed.

"Fine. If they want to meet me, maybe you should let them see me."

Fire Blade became his paranoid self again, but had to control himself. He didn't want to get hurt again or hurt anypony else that could potentially help him.

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"You could have sent a messenger before..."

He sighed.

"Fine. If they want to meet me, maybe you should let them see me."

Fire Blade became his paranoid self again, but had to control himself. He didn't want to get hurt again or hurt anypony else that could potentially help him.

 

We did send messengers. We sent letters, shot up flares, smoke signals, the whole nine yards. And you guys never came to help us. Thank the gods Velinr is just as good at healing as he is at hurting others. So hes been our village doctor for the past few months. So when you denied us weapons and doctors, we did the same to you with the food. But now aside from that the ponies that want to meet you. You took something from them. All of them. There was a knock on the door. And there they are. Fire Blade, meet the families of the colts you killed.

 

Windscar was at the overlook of the EPK. She could see the UPK as well. But there was no sign of the UPK forces just yet. She saw Fatigue and all the EPK's armed forces. What are they planing?

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Velnir woke up with his face pressed into his marefriend's chest. Momentarily forgetting he'd tortured a pony recently, he pressed his nose to her fur and gently breathed in her scent. He was extremely relaxed with her there. She was the only reason he hadn't killed himself.

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We did send messengers. We sent letters, shot up flares, smoke signals, the whole nine yards. And you guys never came to help us. Thank the gods Velinr is just as good at healing as he is at hurting others. So hes been our village doctor for the past few months. So when you denied us weapons and doctors, we did the same to you with the food. But now aside from that the ponies that want to meet you. You took something from them. All of them. There was a knock on the door. And there they are. Fire Blade, meet the families of the colts you killed.

Fire Blade's heart stopped. He crept up to the bars and whispered to his captor.

"Look, whatever you do, don't let them in here."

It was obvious he had fear in his voice.

 

Velnir woke up with his face pressed into his marefriend's chest. Momentarily forgetting he'd tortured a pony recently, he pressed his nose to her fur and gently breathed in her scent. He was extremely relaxed with her there. She was the only reason he hadn't killed himself.

She stirred, half awake, still dreaming about how she had met Velnir and how wonderful he was.

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Velnir kissed her gently on the cheek and got out of the tub. He stared at himself in the mirror. His eyes caught on a metal object in the wall, and he frowned. He turned to it and carefully pried it from the door. Placing it in a sheath on his bag, next to his knife and dried himself.

 

(For Vinyl)

 

Vinyl thought about the commander's order. "No, I'm not going to be sending an extraction team. It puts the lives of more ponies in danger and it would throw away any kind of element of surprise we have. Sapphire, fall into 1st Company, 1st Platoon. You're the platoon leader now."

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In the end, what matters most?

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Sapphire saluted Vinyl. "So there is no way of avoiding war with the earth ponies?" She asked the empress.

 

Algid just received the order, he sent several platoons of unicorn troops towards the border of the unicorns ready to attack the earth ponies.

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