writing Resignation to the end

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Here now unto the end.

This day, be it your last.

Graces scarce and not to be found.

Live this life, think upon it.

Know you have not been wronged.

All is an answer to what is seen.

The answer which lays hidden.

Find such in oneself, hiding.

Undermining a character.

Deepening a wound of hate.

Leaving the void you find yourself in.

Such were my words that I spoke.

Such is the world.

Find no others love.

Each other, the eternal lie.

Left nothing but the ravage of thought.

My own mind amongst yours.

Please, oh please, my own to yours.

Such is the world, my home I despise.

Such is this feeling,

Words shall surely be my demise.

 

 

-David Favret

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

I always enjoy your words, my friend. They make me happy, whether it be a happy poem or a sad one:3

I must say sir, this is an outstanding poem

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

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I always enjoy your words, my friend. They make me happy, whether it be a happy poem or a sad one:3

I must say sir, this is an outstanding poem

 

Thank you, it is a concludsion to my many self loathesome poems that make up my sixthcompilation.

 

It was an attempt to go back to the use of more simple language, and more short phrases that would contain the same message as a two line phrase. I am glad you liked it.

[CloudFyre 848]

Usually I'm not one for poetry...but I like it! I don't really know why, I just, sort of, well, do! (I don't really have a better description than that. )

Edited November 7, 2012 by CloudFyre

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Usually I'm not one for poetry...but I like it! I don't really know why, I just, sort of, well, do! (I don't really have a better description than that. )

 

Well i asm very VERY glad thatr you like it... I only write so that others may enjoy.

 

Well youu should definitely read more poetry, it is a great thing to get nto.