Another Drawing

[GSCGolden 18]

Heres a drawing of Twilight; would appreciate some constructive criticism. This is also probably one of my best drawings I have done

 

 

 

 

EDIT: I fixed it up a little bit; i rounded her ears, made her fore legs thinner near the joint, and made her legs longer

Edited November 19, 2012 by GSCGolden

[Throwaway19573639385 764]

It looks wonderful, there isn't really anything wrong with it but if I had to point out a few things uhmm...

 

Alright, the front legs aren't quite right, the part at the body is actually a bit thinner than the end, or the hooves for a better word. The hind legs are a bit thin, at least, the left one (the front one for us) is. Also, the hind legs are a bit out of proportion, it looks like the front one is a bit shorter than the other one.

 

Other than those 3 small points it looks great!

[Reversalx 129]

Looking nice! and yea, other then the front legs (should be a bit more slender, going narrow towards the top), nothing else really bothers me. Though you could've gone with a better background.

hmm to be REALLY picky, the curve over her back leg could be moved up a bit, and pony ears are, i believe, never pointy.

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

It really looks absolutely wonderful, other than, as pointed out, the front legs. Which I think are too short, and are suppose to narrow towards the top, and be more slender.

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

I think that all of the legs are just about a centimeter too short. But other than that, this is the best fanmade picture of Twilight I have seen.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Wow..

Nicely done friend!

 

It looks really good! i do see a few errors, but those are very minor(and already pointed out) other than that, it looks awesome!

Keep drawing friend! and i would love to see your work in the future (: