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It's pretty good! Nice, clean line work and solid coloring. Mind me going a little creative director on it? It's fine as is, I just had some ideas.

 

Also, why the eyepatch?

 

well its fan art, for someone on tumblr, i didnt make up spitfire like this, someone else did, i just made my own version of it, and please give me your creative criticism :3
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Gotcha! Only thing I was thinking was with the goggles (I'm assuming goggles because it's spitfire) Why not make them a little looser and give them some weight, like add some padding or a thicker strap, then have them dangle from her neck a little more. Just a thought. As a whole I love a lot about it!

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It looks good! I think maybe you should make the goggles a bit better next time, cause right now they look like glasses. Which reminds me of James Joyce, glasses over eyepatch.

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Pretty much awesome. I can see what people are saying about the goggles though...they do look a bit like glasses...Old people ones.. I love the style though, it's somewhat cooot too ^-^

 

Pretty much awesome. I can see what people are saying about the goggles though...they do look a bit like glasses...Old people ones.. I love the style though, it's somewhat cooot too ^-^

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