Twilight doing what she can do best

[Neikos 968]

So here goes the first frame of a comic I am going to do:

 

 

It's going to be humoristic, but we will see if it's actually funny once I have finished it.

 

I'm not really looking for criticism but rather impressions.

 

( Or if you find something subtle you can tell me that as well. )

 

I probably won't color it but we will see.

 

So far what I see that is wrong:

 

Perspective with the stove: The stove is too inclined towards Twi

Twi's forehoof is too thin.

 

The whole picture( Can't do much against that )

 

 

Oh and not to forget, I never draw 3/4 ponies, so first time really there,

Edited December 3, 2012 by Neikos: Jr Website Creator

[Faceless 101]

Interesting. The monochrome would work quite well, it is something that hasn't really been done before... Just get the humour right and you should have a pretty damn decent comic!!