writing Your Spirit is Beauty

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

This is a love poem about no one in particular. Most of my poetry is kind of sad, but I'm actually a pretty romantic person, though I never really act on it. I don't know exactly why I wrote this exactly, but I hope you like it. Comments are greatly appreciated.

 

 

"Your Spirit is Beauty"

 

Your spirit is beauty
Even more than your eyes,
Which shine with more wonder
Than the crystal blue skies.

You're as gentle as a feather
Falling down through the air,
Which is as soft and fine
As your auburn-brown hair.

Yet you're courageous too,
A spirit unpaired!
You've brought excitement daily
To this life that we've shared.

Your voice is like music,
Bell chimes from your tongue.
How I love to hear
All those songs that you've sung.

And your words tell me stories
And you speak with such grace
In conversation we'd journey,
Even off into space!

The warmth of your body 
In a tender embrace 
Compares only to
That smile on your face.

Oh, I love you!
I love you!
I just have to say

I love you!
I love you!
So don't go away.

[The Stranger 812]

I loved this. Your poem is very elegant and loving. I understood the feeling it was trying to convey immediately. I loved how the words flowed together so smoothly. You have talent.

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

I loved this. Your poem is very elegant and loving. I understood the feeling it was trying to convey immediately. I loved how the words flowed together so smoothly. You have talent.

Thank you very much! It means a lot coming from a talented writer like yourself.

 

To be perfectly honest, I don't fully understand the feeling I was trying to convey myself.