[Revised] Lonely Ocean

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Hey guys! I finally got around to thoroughly editing and revising the first chapter of this story and I'm getting started on a second. Let me know your thoughts!

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/64330/lonely-ocean

 

Synopsis:

 

Rainbow Dash isn't exactly looking forward to having Pinkie Pie tag along as she trains in preparation to impress the Wonderbolts. She begins to appreciate her friend's efforts, however, during a jaunt through the Everfree Forest. Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle's observations reveal a disturbing threat to Equestria.

Edited January 6, 2013 by Crystal Slave