Elisa, her debut!

[Neikos 968]

So yeah, the past few weeks I have been preparing to draw a pony, making each part separately first. Today I tried to draw her whole. I suceeded... somewhat.

 

Either way, here she is:

 

I already saw a few errors in her design.

 

Her hind legs are too far to the bottom and her left hind has a weird posture. ( They are so hard to draw! )

 

Her snout which I made too rounded, it should be a bit sharper!

 

I also think her body is a bit too large ( In both ways ) for the head size.

 

 

 

Do you see anything else to improve? Or just your opinion on it. ^^ Would be awesome! Thanks.

[Shankveld 4,945]

she looks pretty good to me so far ~

[Apple Bloom 2,915]

Great job! She looks nice already but if you want to make her look more show accurate, I woud say make her legs curve a little more, especially the hind leg, and make them wider at the bottom. I think she would look nice colored too. Also, all those things you said. Is she supposed to have a cutie mark or is she still a blank flank?

Edited January 23, 2012 by Apple Bloom

[Neikos 968]

She will have a Cutie Mark once I find her purpose!

 

And now that you mention it, the hinds indeed need more work! I will try to focus on those next... ( The hardest part imo )

 

 

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[uPDATE 26/01]

 

 

 

 

Another pic of her!

 

 

I once again gave her stick forehooves... and her body is a bit too long ^^

 

What do you think?

Edited January 26, 2012 by Neikos

[Robojot 152]

looking good but i think the legs on the first one is a tiny bit misplaced / to small but its much better then anything i can do with pen and paper ^^

Edited January 27, 2012 by Robojot