writing The Night (poem)

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

"Night"

 

There is a coolness in the air.
All the earth fades to grey.
But there is a kind of beauty there
As the stars begin to play
Amongst a field of darkness and the unknown
As I sit here, alone.

The moon glows eerily above
Reflecting the sun's rays,
Yet it is somehow more wondrous;
Independent from the day.

To others this is scary, but to me it seems
When I look into the night sky, it is like a dream.

Edited February 7, 2013 by MelancholicMemory

[The Stranger 812]

I liked this poem very much. It gave me an ominous yet beautiful mental image of what it was like for the person in the poem. I could picture myself in a place like the one you've discribed in your poem. 

 

Very nice. 

[ApexHunter 166]

I guess I'll have to visit your profile more often because I always miss your poems if I wait for them by checking the latest posts.
Anyway, you already know what I'm gonna say
But I don't really know what to say other than GREAT JOB! ^^