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(OOC: Welcome to the RP, thanks for participating.

Your first reply should be about finding the box&interacting with it.

Please, post to OOC [or pm me] your suggestions for relationships, or more like who of you are willing to have an enemy in one of you or who are willing to have a crush on one of you. Most of you will be friends and acquaintances, if someone wants to be an antisocial, you can have some unknown ones. ;))

 

@, @@Addem Up, @, @, @@Nightfall, @, @,@, @@Hex:

 

You're going through your daily lives. Everything seems the same... it is easy to overlook the small things. Especially those that could change all of your life. Or you can try to make a thing that could change the whole world yourself... You wouldn't be first...

There's a music box somewhere. It is obvious that it's not just a work of a precious clockworker. It's also a piece of art. But now, it's forsaken and forgotten. It silently cries soft melodies, hoping for someone to find him. But behind this mask of desperate cries is something more...

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(OOC: Welcome to the RP, thanks for participating.

Your first reply should be about finding the box&interacting with it.

Please, post to OOC [or pm me] your suggestions for relationships, or more like who of you are willing to have an enemy in one of you or who are willing to have a crush on one of you. Most of you will be friends and acquaintances, if someone wants to be an antisocial, you can have some unknown ones. ;))

 

@, @@Addem Up, @, @, @@Nightfall, @, @,@, @@Hex:

 

You're going through your daily lives. Everything seems the same... it is easy to overlook the small things. Especially those that could change all of your life. Or you can try to make a thing that could change the whole world yourself... You wouldn't be first...

There's a music box somewhere. It is obvious that it's not just a work of a precious clockworker. It's also a piece of art. But now, it's forsaken and forgotten. It silently cries soft melodies, hoping for someone to find him. But behind this mask of desperate cries is something more...

 

Nightfall moved about his shop. A few things were out of place since he had gone to his room last night, and it puzzled him; the bell on the door hadn't rung, and he hadn't been woken up by anyone teleporting in. He moved aside a pile of scrap metal and found what seemed to be a music box.

"Huh," he muttered. "I don't remember making this."

He toyed with it, but couldn't figure out how to make the music come out of it. He finally picked it up and tried pulling it open...

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"Rrrrgh..."

Red Alert was bothered. There was pretty music coming from someplace, and it was setting his teeth on edge. It had started when he got up, and it was following him around. Once he'd finally hunted down the source, he picked up the music box and started looking for a way to shut it off. "VERDAMMIT, schtupid device! Turn OFF!" He prised it open, and...

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Star was in the basement of her parents house shifting some of her old things around until she noticed a strange box. *Maybe mum know's something about it...I will have to ask her when her and dad get back from Canterlot.* She thought, turning the box over in her hooves.

After a moment of examining the box she flipped it right side up and, After a moments hesitation, She opened the box.

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Quip was currently working on fireworks for a show he was to do tomorrow. 500 fireworks. It was a very, very, tall order to fill. But Quip felt up to the challenge. Quip started to fill one of the shells up with powder, when he heard a strange; but familiar tune. He had no idea hat it was coming from though.

 

Quip stopped what he was doing and started to search for the source of the music. He heard it coming from outside the work shed, and when he opened the door, he heard the sound of wood scraping against wood. He looked around the corner of the door to see a music box laying on the ground.

 

Quip hesitantly picked it up with his hooves and examined it. "Hmm... how did you get here?" he pointlessly questioned the box. He walked back into his work shed with the music box and put it down on the counter. He couldn't explain why, but something compelled him to open it... and when he did, he knew he wasn't in Kansas anymore.

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Addem closes the door to his lab, sighing and relaxing his limbs slightly. He trots over to his bed, shedding his lab coat and placing his glasses on the side table. With a thwump, he plops down on his bed, only to leap back up as something hard pokes him in the ribs. "What in Celestia's name?" He roots around under the covers, pulling out a strange box. A soft tune floated through the air as he opened its cover...

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Ace closed the book as he fineshed it. "Wow even after reading it 100 times it still never gets old." Ace said without looking he reached with his hoof to the top of a pile to find..." A music box?" It was a music box a strange one too nothing Ace has ever seen before. "Where did you come from? I never bought a music box." Ace studied it carefully then shrugged. "Oh well can't hurt to opening it up and hear some realxing music." And with that Ace opened the box...

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Nightfall moved about his shop. A few things were out of place since he had gone to his room last night, and it puzzled him; the bell on the door hadn't rung, and he hadn't been woken up by anyone teleporting in. He moved aside a pile of scrap metal and found what seemed to be a music box.

"Huh," he muttered. "I don't remember making this."

He toyed with it, but couldn't figure out how to make the music come out of it. He finally picked it up and tried pulling it open...

The sound of music box's got more and more woeful with each second. It almost sounds like if it was crying for your help.

The melody seemed to change as you were trying to open the box. The sound got filled with strange hope.

You finally opened the box.

It took a second, maybe less. Your vision got blurry and your body started feeling strange. It could be described as a combination of tingling and flowing. And then, there was nothing. Just darkness

The last thing you saw was a detailed inside of the box. It was somehow... impossible to desrcibe what was inside. It seemed like with every second, it was changing a little. All you know is that it was detailed and... enchanting.

You woke up in a total darkness.

All you can see is a door... a wooden, ordinary one. What might find a little strange is the fact the door is standing all alone - no walls. The door shines with light. The feeling of light in the end of the tunnel...

 

 

"Rrrrgh..."

Red Alert was bothered. There was pretty music coming from someplace, and it was setting his teeth on edge. It had started when he got up, and it was following him around. Once he'd finally hunted down the source, he picked up the music box and started looking for a way to shut it off. "VERDAMMIT, schtupid device! Turn OFF!" He prised it open, and...

It might have been hard to hear the melody changes through your anger. Once you got close, the melody seemed to change into an uncomfortable, almost hostile sound. The music box didn't resist much - it seemed to have no reason to try.

The silence filled the place. So did the darkness.It felt your body being pushed into a little space. Or at least... it felt so. The last thing you remember was a short, evil melody.

You woke up in a misty, dark place. It seems empty.

Suddenly, the place fills with light. The reason seemes to be an old door floating above you.

 

Star was in the basement of her parents house shifting some of her old things around until she noticed a strange box. *Maybe mum know's something about it...I will have to ask her when her and dad get back from Canterlot.* She thought, turning the box over in her hooves.

After a moment of examining the box she flipped it right side up and, After a moments hesitation, She opened the box.

The melody got sweeter with every second. Opening the box, you feel suddenly enchanted, getting into a weird state of trance.

In this trance, you saw a nice, colourful fog filling the room. The fog was getting darker and darker..

You slipped out of the trance when the fog got completely black. But the darkness was still here.

Something was telling you it wasn't right. Suddenly, your hooves started to feel warm and your eyes got to see some light.

You find out that you're standing on a beautiful chocolate brown door, which is enlightening you.

 

 

Quip was currently working on fireworks for a show he was to do tomorrow. 500 fireworks. It was a very, very, tall order to fill. But Quip felt up to the challenge. Quip started to fill one of the shells up with powder, when he heard a strange; but familiar tune. He had no idea hat it was coming from though.

 

Quip stopped what he was doing and started to search for the source of the music. He heard it coming from outside the work shed, and when he opened the door, he heard the sound of wood scraping against wood. He looked around the corner of the door to see a music box laying on the ground.

 

Quip hesitantly picked it up with his hooves and examined it. "Hmm... how did you get here?" he pointlessly questioned the box. He walked back into his work shed with the music box and put it down on the counter. He couldn't explain why, but something compelled him to open it... and when he did, he knew he wasn't in Kansas anymore.

The melody got mysterious. The time seemed to stop as the melody was filling your ears.

You got a strange feeling. It felt like the sound is making you blind. Your eyes got filled with the melody, just like your ears. You could see the melody. You were unable to describe it, but you knew that what you see is the sound of the box.

It felt your body dividing into a million of little pieces. It was.. strangely relaxing. Then your body started getting into one piece again. You knew that you are again in one piece, when the sound stopped. It disappeared from your eyes and ears. You could see again... the question is, what you could see. The darkness was the only thing you saw.

You knew that you "teleported" somehow. How?

Your eyes catched a small light in the distance. You realised it's a rounded door in the middle of nothing.

 

Addem closes the door to his lab, sighing and relaxing his limbs slightly. He trots over to his bed, shedding his lab coat and placing his glasses on the side table. With a thwump, he plops down on his bed, only to leap back up as something hard pokes him in the ribs. "What in Celestia's name?" He roots around under the covers, pulling out a strange box. A soft tune floated through the air as he opened its cover...

The melody was calming and nice. A lullaby. Your eyelids were getting heavier and heavier...

You could feel the melody getting into your bones. Then, you felt your body in the air. The melody seemed to carry you. You felt your body chaning into a fog. Or at least, it felt like that...

The melody stopped and you woke up. Your mind felt confused. You suddenly got to know a reason why..

You are lying in the air. If feels like if there was something invisible. You can see a heavy door on the bottom of the room. You can see the light is shining though the keyhole. You can see that the door stands all alone.

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The melody got sweeter with every second. Opening the box, you feel suddenly enchanted, getting into a weird state of trance. In this trance, you saw a nice, colourful fog filling the room. The fog was getting darker and darker.. You slipped out of the trance when the fog got completely black. But the darkness was still here. Something was telling you it wasn't right. Suddenly, your hooves started to feel warm and your eyes got to see some light. You find out that you're standing on a beautiful chocolate brown door, which is enlightening you.  

 

Star's eyes widened slightly as the room around her started to disappear in a swirl of fog, but she didn't feel scared...maybe a little but not as much as you would think. She gulped and slowly approached the door. Without a second thought, she slowly pushed it open.

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Ace closed the book as he fineshed it. "Wow even after reading it 100 times it still never gets old." Ace said without looking he reached with his hoof to the top of a pile to find..." A music box?" It was a music box a strange one too nothing Ace has ever seen before. "Where did you come from? I never bought a music box." Ace studied it carefully then shrugged. "Oh well can't hurt to opening it up and hear some realxing music." And with that Ace opened the box...

The sound was relaxing at first, but as you opened the box, it got a seducing vibe. You fetl a need to hear more.. But you got to hear the music just for a second. Before you were able to realise it, it felt like two soft hooves held you and grabbed you inside.. inside of what?

You woke up as soon as you felt the hooves disappear. The place was surrounded by darkness. And doors.

There was an enormous number of doors... different ones, standing alone. But your attention catched a door that seemes to be just drawn with light in the darkness.

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*snip*

 

 

Quip would have taken a quick look around, but... he didn't see anything but blackness, and that strange door that just seemed to sit there. He felt rather strange, and violated in a way. Some force of nature; or force of something else, had just taken him apart and put him back together, like he was some sort of puzzle. Quip was hesitant to go towards the door, but it was oddly compelling. Like a moth to the flame as they always said.

 

Quip started to walk towards the door, unsure of what might be out that door. All he knew, was it had to be better than this black place.

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The sound of music box's got more and more woeful with each second. It almost sounds like if it was crying for your help.

The melody seemed to change as you were trying to open the box. The sound got filled with strange hope.

You finally opened the box.

It took a second, maybe less. Your vision got blurry and your body started feeling strange. It could be described as a combination of tingling and flowing. And then, there was nothing. Just darkness

The last thing you saw was a detailed inside of the box. It was somehow... impossible to desrcibe what was inside. It seemed like with every second, it was changing a little. All you know is that it was detailed and... enchanting.

You woke up in a total darkness.

All you can see is a door... a wooden, ordinary one. What might find a little strange is the fact the door is standing all alone - no walls. The door shines with light. The feeling of light in the end of the tunnel...

 

Nightfall blinked, trying to wake up. But he never did. He still couldn't figure out what had happened exactly.

"That's... frustrating..."

He made a movement towards the door, but it was still and not moving. He finally approached it and cautiously opened it.

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  The sound reached Whisper's ears as she snuffed out the fire in her camp. Her ears swiveled back and forth as she lifted her head straight into the air,  trying to identify where it was coming from. She stepped carefully towards her belongings and shifted through a few blankets uncovering the mysterious box.

 

"I do not remember buying this...or packing it..." she mumbed to herself. With her nose she gently nudged it open...

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The melody was calming and nice. A lullaby. Your eyelids were getting heavier and heavier...

You could feel the melody getting into your bones. Then, you felt your body in the air. The melody seemed to carry you. You felt your body chaning into a fog. Or at least, it felt like that...

The melody stopped and you woke up. Your mind felt confused. You suddenly got to know a reason why..

You are lying in the air. If feels like if there was something invisible. You can see a heavy door on the bottom of the room. You can see the light is shining though the keyhole. You can see that the door stands all alone.

 

Addem groaned, opening his eyes and groggily looking about. "What the... this isn't my lab..." Despite his unfamiliar surroundings, he wasn't frightened; no, as a matter of fact, he was intrigued. He looked down at the door below him, placing a hoof to his glasses and murmuring. With a mechanical whirr, his lenses zoomed in, and he attempted to peer through the keyhole.

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The sound was relaxing at first, but as you opened the box, it got a seducing vibe. You fetl a need to hear more.. But you got to hear the music just for a second. Before you were able to realise it, it felt like two soft hooves held you and grabbed you inside.. inside of what?

You woke up as soon as you felt the hooves disappear. The place was surrounded by darkness. And doors.

There was an enormous number of doors... different ones, standing alone. But your attention catched a door that seemes to be just drawn with light in the darkness.

" Wha? What happened?! Where am I?!" Ace looked around in the dark place no walls but their were doors, thousands of them, some big, some small yet the only one that caught Ace's attention was a door seemed to be drawn with light. "Ok, I just need to calm down, I have to figer out a way out of where I am." Ace went to the door to try and open it but wouldn't budge, Ace having no other option looked though the keyhole.

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"Mmmphrrrg."

Bugger. Why do I always end up with the stupid thing that just so happens to transport me to an alternate dimension? I can do that on my own!

Red took stock of the situation. There was no horizon, so he assumed he was in a void. The door above him was giving off light, which could either be some sort of half-baked guardian angel or a clever ploy. It was low enough to jump to and get a hold of, though. Red hopped and caught the base of the door. He scrambled up and opened it, hooves at the ready...

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Autumn was running through ponyville, it was a typical day.

She stopped at her favorite store, of coarse, a thrift shop.

"Hmmm..." Autumn murmured as she searched through the shop.

"OOOOOO..." Autumn said, stopping in front of a music box.

"Hey! Star Strike! is this new?" Autumn asked, not taking her eyes off the music box."

Yeah! just came in today!" a voice called from behind the front desk.

 

Autumn became infatuated by the beautiful music box, the details were so precise... she had to have it!

"I wonder what song it plays..." Autumn murmured, taking the music box off the shelf and attempting to open it.

"ugh! its stuck shut!" she grumbled as she struggled to pry it open.

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( Okay guys, some of you have their replies, some replies are in progress.. please don't be angry at me, but it's 3 in the morning and i have to get up in 2 hours so...
The lack of time is killing me.. I'll make it up for you tommorow. I hope.
P.S. Your first song is non of what you've suggested. I have to take a look on the lyrics and It was 2 in the morning now. I have to use songs I know so I can make the replies quickly.)


Edit: I finished your replies, @, @,@@Addem Up and @.
Sorry for the "delay".


~Flame Dancer~, on 21 Feb 2013 - 22:52, said:
Star's eyes widened slightly as the room around her started to disappear in a swirl of fog, but she didn't feel scared...maybe a little but not as much as you would think. She gulped and slowly approached the door. Without a second thought, she slowly pushed it open.

The door creaked and opened, but withint a second fell down. It was lying on the ground now, but you could see there was something behind it. A different place.
You felt something grabbing you by your mane, pulling you down the door. You were falling down, seeing a lot of different places...
You saw a city made of clouds, but you feel that it's not Cloudsdale. Then a city full of bubbles, a city made of trees and flowers...
Suddenly you landed on your head. If felt weird, but it didn't hurt.. but
it caused you to wake up.
You're lying in an unknown room. It's probably a flat, or..?
There is a bed, an empty table, some pictures on the walls... There are also some stairs leading down.

The Original PWD, on 21 Feb 2013 - 23:00, said:
Quip would have taken a quick look around, but... he didn't see anything but blackness, and that strange door that just seemed to sit there. He felt rather strange, and violated in a way. Some force of nature; or force of something else, had just taken him apart and put him back together, like he was some sort of puzzle. Quip was hesitant to go towards the door, but it was oddly compelling. Like a moth to the flame as they always said.

Quip started to walk towards the door, unsure of what might be out that door. All he knew, was it had to be better than this black place.

The door quickly opened and turned into a fog. The fog was spreading all around the place. When it faded, you realised that you were not in the darkness anymore.
There is a light room. It seems very modern. There is a lot of machines scattered around you. One of them is really big, with open doors in them.

Nightfall, on 21 Feb 2013 - 23:04, said:
Nightfall blinked, trying to wake up. But he never did. He still couldn't figure out what had happened exactly.
"That's... frustrating..."
He made a movement towards the door, but it was still and not moving. He finally approached it and cautiously opened it.

The door disappeared under your hoof. Your stare-direction was the same, but.. it was different.
You appeared in a middle of a city made of city. You can see that all around you are posters and billboards. Those are saying "YOU ARE LOOSER", "YOU WILL NEVER ACHIEVE ANYTHING", "YOU SCREWED IT UP AGAIN", "YOU WILL NEVER GET OUT OF THERE". You feel the need to fly away, but your will tells you to stay. You also want to go home. And somehow, you know where your home is, though you've never been there before.

Hex, on 21 Feb 2013 - 23:26, said:
The sound reached Whisper's ears as she snuffed out the fire in her camp. Her ears swiveled back and forth as she lifted her head straight into the air, trying to identify where it was coming from. She stepped carefully towards her belongings and shifted through a few blankets uncovering the mysterious box.

"I do not remember buying this...or packing it..." she mumbed to herself. With her nose she gently nudged it open...

The sound got a feeling of the wind whispering in the leaves. Then, the box opened. You could feel and see the melody flowing around you. Everything around has dissapeared. The melody started to forming itself into leaves, filling up the place, blocking off the light... Suddenly, you found yourself drowning in these leaves...
You woke up. There was still darkness, but this time, it wasn't caused by the leaves. The place was empty..
Suddenly, a source of light. Behind you stands a carved shining door. It looks like a piece of art.

Addem Up, on 22 Feb 2013 - 00:02, said:
Addem groaned, opening his eyes and groggily looking about. "What the... this isn't my lab..." Despite his unfamiliar surroundings, he wasn't frightened; no, as a matter of fact, he was intrigued. He looked down at the door below him, placing a hoof to his glasses and murmuring. With a mechanical whirr, his lenses zoomed in, and he attempted to peer through the keyhole.

What you saw was rather weird. You saw yourself looking through the keyhole, just like you did. It seemed to be your reflection.. or maybe..
Suddenly, your reflection gave you a grin. You felt two hooves around your shoulders, pulling you to the door. You recognised that those hooves were exactly the same as yours...
The door disappeared in a moment when you touched the door. It disappeared, but set you out of the darkness - you weren't in the void anymore.
You feel like if you've just woken up. You thought that it all was just a dream. The room looks just like yours. You look around, seeing that there's somepony else in a room. A young colt, staring at the TV screen. He seems not to percieve anything, but you can see that he's clicking his tongue.

~Chaotic Flying Ace~, on 22 Feb 2013 - 00:29, said:
" Wha? What happened?! Where am I?!" Ace looked around in the dark place no walls but their were doors, thousands of them, some big, some small yet the only one that caught Ace's attention was a door seemed to be drawn with light. "Ok, I just need to calm down, I have to figer out a way out of where I am." Ace went to the door to try and open it but wouldn't budge, Ace having no other option looked though the keyhole.

The light shone brightly in your eyes. You closed your eyes and rubbed them for a while. Then you opened your eyes, and...
You saw a world of blue and gray colours. It seemed to be slowed down.. There were some ponies running to you in a slow motion.
You realised you are holding a map. The ponies are looking at you with a despair in their eyes.
"You are a scout, find the way out, please!" they cry.

acualy is dolan, on 22 Feb 2013 - 01:06, said:
"Mmmphrrrg."
Bugger. Why do I always end up with the stupid thing that just so happens to transport me to an alternate dimension? I can do that on my own!
Red took stock of the situation. There was no horizon, so he assumed he was in a void. The door above him was giving off light, which could either be some sort of half-baked guardian angel or a clever ploy. It was low enough to jump to and get a hold of, though. Red hopped and caught the base of the door. He scrambled up and opened it, hooves at the ready...

The door disappeared and you fell down. But there was no darkness anymore..
You landed on the ground. You could see that there's not a total darkness. But.. there was nothing light about this place at all.
You realised that you were lying in a line of dead bodies. Suddenly, you see pony soldiers in the distance, falling down and suddenly disappearing.
There's a helmet and a gun lying on the ground near you.

Autumn Dream, on 22 Feb 2013 - 01:42, said:
Autumn was running through ponyville, it was a typical day.
She stopped at her favorite store, of coarse, a thrift shop.
"Hmmm..." Autumn murmured as she searched through the shop.
"OOOOOO..." Autumn said, stopping in front of a music box.
"Hey! Star Strike! is this new?" Autumn asked, not taking her eyes off the music box."
Yeah! just came in today!" a voice called from behind the front desk.

Autumn became infatuated by the beautiful music box, the details were so precise... she had to have it!
"I wonder what song it plays..." Autumn murmured, taking the music box off the shelf and attempting to open it."ug
h! its stuck shut!" she grumbled as she struggled to pry it open.

The sound got a feeling of nostalgia and melancholy. It slowly opened and filled the area with a sweet scent. It feels weird, but somehow, you knew that what you smell is the scent of that melody. Breathing more and bore of it, you felt like if you were becoming addicted to that scent. The melody filled you and your body started to becoming one with it. Flowing in the air with those sweet, but sad tones, you realised that everything about you had disappeared. There was no shop anymore. Just a darkness.
You woke up, realising you are falling. Falling into the eternity. There was nothing - just darkness.
Suddenly, a door appears in front of you, falling with you. It's an old, heavy door, shining with light. Edited by Suntouched Coco
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The door disappeared under your hoof. Your stare-direction was the same, but.. it was different.

You appeared in a middle of a city made of city. You can see that all around you are posters and billboards. Those are saying "YOU ARE LOOSER", "YOU WILL NEVER ACHIEVE ANYTHING", "YOU SCREWED IT UP AGAIN", "YOU WILL NEVER GET OUT OF THERE". You feel the need to fly away, but your will tells you to stay. You also want to go home. And somehow, you know where your home is, though you've never been there before.

 

Nightfall got the chills. He didn't like the vibe the city was giving him.

"I... I gotta go..."

He looked around, but couldn't find a way to get out. He started getting nervous and started hyperventilating. He moved towards his room, but couldn't put his finger on where this was, what he was doing, and who else was here.

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The sound got a feeling of nostalgia and melancholy. It slowly opened and filled the area with a sweet scent. It feels weird, but somehow, you knew that what you smell is the scent of that melody. Breathing more and bore of it, you felt like if you were becoming addicted to that scent. The melody filled you and your body started to becoming one with it. Flowing in the air with those sweet, but sad tones, you realised that everything about you had disappeared. There was no shop anymore. Just a darkness. You woke up, realising you are falling. Falling into the eternity. There was nothing - just darkness. Suddenly, a door appears in front of you, falling with you. It's an old, heavy door, shining with light.

 

Autumn felt helpless as she fell through the abyss. She stretched out for the door, grabbing onto the handle of the door, not letting go.

She felt completely helpless in the darkness she was now tumbling through. She tried to turn the door knob and open the door.

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She was startled and hopped back a bit. Whispers ears swiveled as she took in the door. Seeing as there was no other place but to go through the door, she took small steps forward and nudged the door open with her hoof.

 

"Hello...?" she asked with some fright.

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The door creaked and opened, but withint a second fell down. It was lying on the ground now, but you could see there was something behind it. A different place. You felt something grabbing you by your mane, pulling you down the door. You were falling down, seeing a lot of different places... You saw a city made of clouds, but you feel that it's not Cloudsdale. Then a city full of bubbles, a city made of trees and flowers... Suddenly you landed on your head. If felt weird, but it didn't hurt.. but it caused you to wake up. You're lying in an unknown room. It's probably a flat, or..? There is a bed, an empty table, some pictures on the walls...  There are also some stairs leading down.

 

Star squeaked slightly as she landed on the ground. She stood up and looked around the room. *A bed a table and some pictures ? Where am I...what's happened ?* She asked herself, slowly approaching the stairs that led down to...somewhere. "H-Hello ?" She said, peaking down the stairs.

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Nightfall got the chills. He didn't like the vibe the city was giving him.

"I... I gotta go..."

He looked around, but couldn't find a way to get out. He started getting nervous and started hyperventilating. He moved towards his room, but couldn't put his finger on where this was, what he was doing, and who else was here.

You can hear the familiar melody leading you somewhere.

 

Autumn felt helpless as she fell through the abyss. She stretched out for the door, grabbing onto the handle of the door, not letting go.

She felt completely helpless in the darkness she was now tumbling through. She tried to turn the door knob and open the door.

The knob disappeared under your hooves. It left a hole in the door. The hole started to suck. At first it seemed like nothing, but in a moment, the flow got strong enough to pull you. The hole got bigger and sucked you in.

You appeared in a desert. You can see that there's someone in front of you, walking as fast as you do.

 

She was startled and hopped back a bit. Whispers ears swiveled as she took in the door. Seeing as there was no other place but to go through the door, she took small steps forward and nudged the door open with her hoof.

 

"Hello...?" she asked with some fright.

It seemed like there is nothing behind the door. A familiar melody replied. Your sound obviously catched the doors attention. It fell on you with the emply space...

You looked around. You are in the middle of a meadow. A green meadow, full of flowers. There's noone.. except..

You see a small pony, he is just about 2 feets tall. He looks very self-confident.

 

 

 

Star squeaked slightly as she landed on the ground. She stood up and looked around the room. *A bed a table and some pictures ? Where am I...what's happened ?* She asked herself, slowly approaching the stairs that led down to...somewhere. "H-Hello ?" She said, peaking down the stairs.

"Hi!" answered a voice. It was a happy and cheerful voice, but you could feel a scent of bitter irony out of it. "What about a game of chess?"

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( Okay guys, some of you have their replies, some replies are in progress.. please don't be angry at me, but it's 3 in the morning and i have to get up in 2 hours so...

The lack of time is killing me.. I'll make it up for you tommorow. I hope.

P.S. Your first song is non of what you've suggested. I have to take a look on the lyrics and It was 2 in the morning now. I have to use songs I know so I can make the replies quickly.)

 

Edit: I finished your replies, @, @,@@Addem Up and @.

Sorry for the "delay".

 

The door creaked and opened, but withint a second fell down. It was lying on the ground now, but you could see there was something behind it. A different place.

You felt something grabbing you by your mane, pulling you down the door. You were falling down, seeing a lot of different places...

You saw a city made of clouds, but you feel that it's not Cloudsdale. Then a city full of bubbles, a city made of trees and flowers...

Suddenly you landed on your head. If felt weird, but it didn't hurt.. but

it caused you to wake up.

You're lying in an unknown room. It's probably a flat, or..?

There is a bed, an empty table, some pictures on the walls... There are also some stairs leading down.

The door quickly opened and turned into a fog. The fog was spreading all around the place. When it faded, you realised that you were not in the darkness anymore.

There is a light room. It seems very modern. There is a lot of machines scattered around you. One of them is really big, with open doors in them.

 

The door disappeared under your hoof. Your stare-direction was the same, but.. it was different.

You appeared in a middle of a city made of city. You can see that all around you are posters and billboards. Those are saying "YOU ARE LOOSER", "YOU WILL NEVER ACHIEVE ANYTHING", "YOU SCREWED IT UP AGAIN", "YOU WILL NEVER GET OUT OF THERE". You feel the need to fly away, but your will tells you to stay. You also want to go home. And somehow, you know where your home is, though you've never been there before.

 

The sound got a feeling of the wind whispering in the leaves. Then, the box opened. You could feel and see the melody flowing around you. Everything around has dissapeared. The melody started to forming itself into leaves, filling up the place, blocking off the light... Suddenly, you found yourself drowning in these leaves...

You woke up. There was still darkness, but this time, it wasn't caused by the leaves. The place was empty..

Suddenly, a source of light. Behind you stands a carved shining door. It looks like a piece of art.

What you saw was rather weird. You saw yourself looking through the keyhole, just like you did. It seemed to be your reflection.. or maybe..

Suddenly, your reflection gave you a grin. You felt two hooves around your shoulders, pulling you to the door. You recognised that those hooves were exactly the same as yours...

The door disappeared in a moment when you touched the door. It disappeared, but set you out of the darkness - you weren't in the void anymore.

You feel like if you've just woken up. You thought that it all was just a dream. The room looks just like yours. You look around, seeing that there's somepony else in a room. A young colt, staring at the TV screen. He seems not to percieve anything, but you can see that he's clicking his tongue.

 

The light shone brightly in your eyes. You closed your eyes and rubbed them for a while. Then you opened your eyes, and...

You saw a world of blue and gray colours. It seemed to be slowed down.. There were some ponies running to you in a slow motion.

You realised you are holding a map. The ponies are looking at you with a despair in their eyes.

"You are a scout, find the way out, please!" they cry.

The door disappeared and you fell down. But there was no darkness anymore..

You landed on the ground. You could see that there's not a total darkness. But.. there was nothing light about this place at all.

You realised that you were lying in a line of dead bodies. Suddenly, you see pony soldiers in the distance, falling down and suddenly disappearing.

There's a helmet and a gun lying on the ground near you.

The sound got a feeling of nostalgia and melancholy. It slowly opened and filled the area with a sweet scent. It feels weird, but somehow, you knew that what you smell is the scent of that melody. Breathing more and bore of it, you felt like if you were becoming addicted to that scent. The melody filled you and your body started to becoming one with it. Flowing in the air with those sweet, but sad tones, you realised that everything about you had disappeared. There was no shop anymore. Just a darkness.

You woke up, realising you are falling. Falling into the eternity. There was nothing - just darkness.

Suddenly, a door appears in front of you, falling with you. It's an old, heavy door, shining with light.

"Ack! My eyes!" Ace said covering his eyes from the bright flash when he lowled his hoof he saw that the world was now blue and gray, everything seemed to slow down even the ponies who were running towards him were slow...wait what?! "Who are you guys?! What?!" He looked down to see he was holding a map. "Wait i'm no scout! i can't even read this!"

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The door quickly opened and turned into a fog. The fog was spreading all around the place. When it faded, you realised that you were not in the darkness anymore. There is a light room. It seems very modern. There is a lot of machines scattered around you. One of them is really big, with open doors in them.

 

Quip looked towards the machine that had the open doors. He didn't know what else to do but get into the machine. Maybe he could learn something, or bring something back to Equestria to study. But top priority was actually getting back to Equestria.

 

It was rather strange inside the machine, he had no idea how to work the thing. 

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