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"There were ever any of them? I don't think so..." answers the old pony.

"Sheeeeeeeeeee passssssssssssssssed ssssssssssssssssound assssssssssssssssssssleeeeeeeeeeeep wheeeeeeeeeeeen the blooooooooooooooooood issssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssstain buuuuuuuuut blooooooooooood isssssssss paaaaaaain..." whispers the voice, but then there is no light to whisper anymore.

 

He gulps, looking around wildly. "This... this doesn't make sense..." Flustered, he trots about, then stops, sighing. He takes a deep breath, calming down, then said, "All right. This is a dream. Or an alternate universe. Or a different timeline. But... This can't be The Real World. I don't believe it. I... I can't see the truth."

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The air around you starts to whisper. "I am you. And you are dead if fact." ... the wind continues to whisper as it swirls around you. You feel emptyness inside and then you feel like you can't breath anymore.

Autumn gasped and tumbled out  of the air, crashing into the sand.

"how *gasp* can you be *gasp* me?" Autumn said between gasps.

She tried to get up again but just collapsed.

i... i can't breath... why is this happening to me? I just...

Autumn couldn't even think anymore, she just gave up, laying in the sand.


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Unholy Sight


Autumn Dream


Fire Runner (Griffon)


Fire Runner (Pony)

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The second Quip ran to you. "Just look outside.." Inside of the playground machine the sun shone so bright that the whole room was lit with the light. You weren't sure, but you think you heard a scream out of the first machine. "Can you hear the screams?" asked the second Quip. The machine you're standing by started shining too.. but this light was somehow.. familiar.

 

Quip sighed, and then realized. Couldn't he imagine this old fart AWAY? Quip closed his eyes and thought of the current situation without his older self being there, when he started to open his eyes again, he was hoping it would actually work. If not, he would try again inside the machine. 


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Fierasil de Rosa Canter, the optimistic flyer.

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"You know me like forever. We live together in this house like.. all the time. What's wrong with you today?" he said and made his first move - he skipped with his pawn into the corner. It would be normally impossible but here.. it seemed about being right.

"You know that there is nothing more than this house, right..?"

 

The second Quip ran to you. "Just look outside.."

Inside of the playground machine the sun shone so bright that the whole room was lit with the light.

You weren't sure, but you think you heard a scream out of the first machine.

"Can you hear the screams?" asked the second Quip.

The machine you're standing by started shining too.. but this light was somehow.. familiar.

 

Your house has a calm, relaxing feel. You walk into one of the rooms and recognises a bathroom. As you pass by a mirror, you see that you look much older than before...

There is also a bunch of bottles around the mirror. The etiquette says: "Tired of being yourself? Go on and be somebody else! The Eytan Laboratory Elixirs."

 

"There were ever any of them? I don't think so..." answers the old pony.

"Sheeeeeeeeeee passssssssssssssssed ssssssssssssssssound assssssssssssssssssssleeeeeeeeeeeep wheeeeeeeeeeeen the blooooooooooooooooood issssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssstain buuuuuuuuut blooooooooooood isssssssss paaaaaaain..." whispers the voice, but then there is no light to whisper anymore.

 

"Yes! Rise up!" one of the ponies starts to cheer. You wish you were sinking down in the ocean..

All of the ponies start to cheer, seem to be happy. The map shows you a clear way out of the labyrinth.

A young mare comes to you. "I have to warn you. If they see that we have a scout so everyone can find the way out, they might catch us..." she says, but there is no mourning in that warning.

 

 

Suddenly, you're blown up to the air. As you fly high in the air, you realise that you have no injuries. You can see the souls of some ponies flying up to you. "Lead us to the heaven." they say.

 

The air around you starts to whisper. "I am you. And you are dead if fact." ... the wind continues to whisper as it swirls around you. You feel emptyness inside and then you feel like you can't breath anymore.

"No. Zere is no vay for zis box of madness to hurt me, und zerefore I have no reason to do anysing you say." Red had decided to call the box's bluff. he knew where he was, he knew what was happening, and he was tired of this weird, stupid realm's garbage. He had too much going on in his life already.


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Your house has a calm, relaxing feel. You walk into one of the rooms and recognises a bathroom. As you pass by a mirror, you see that you look much older than before...

There is also a bunch of bottles around the mirror. The etiquette says: "Tired of being yourself? Go on and be somebody else! The Eytan* Laboratory Elixirs."

 

"Wha- what? What- how...?"

He looked at the bottles.

"I'm not given enough proof... no data* to know what each one does."

He looked around.

"Is anyone out there who can help? Am I in some discontented world where no one lives anymore?"

 

(*Is that supposed to be a person, or actor?)

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"You know me like forever. We live together in this house like.. all the time. What's wrong with you today?" he said and made his first move - he skipped with his pawn into the corner. It would be normally impossible but here.. it seemed about being right.

"You know that there is nothing more than this house, right..?"

 

The second Quip ran to you. "Just look outside.."

Inside of the playground machine the sun shone so bright that the whole room was lit with the light.

You weren't sure, but you think you heard a scream out of the first machine.

"Can you hear the screams?" asked the second Quip.

The machine you're standing by started shining too.. but this light was somehow.. familiar.

 

Your house has a calm, relaxing feel. You walk into one of the rooms and recognises a bathroom. As you pass by a mirror, you see that you look much older than before...

There is also a bunch of bottles around the mirror. The etiquette says: "Tired of being yourself? Go on and be somebody else! The Eytan Laboratory Elixirs."

 

"There were ever any of them? I don't think so..." answers the old pony.

"Sheeeeeeeeeee passssssssssssssssed ssssssssssssssssound assssssssssssssssssssleeeeeeeeeeeep wheeeeeeeeeeeen the blooooooooooooooooood issssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssstain buuuuuuuuut blooooooooooood isssssssss paaaaaaain..." whispers the voice, but then there is no light to whisper anymore.

 

"Yes! Rise up!" one of the ponies starts to cheer. You wish you were sinking down in the ocean..

All of the ponies start to cheer, seem to be happy. The map shows you a clear way out of the labyrinth.

A young mare comes to you. "I have to warn you. If they see that we have a scout so everyone can find the way out, they might catch us..." she says, but there is no mourning in that warning.

 

 

Suddenly, you're blown up to the air. As you fly high in the air, you realise that you have no injuries. You can see the souls of some ponies flying up to you. "Lead us to the heaven." they say.

 

The air around you starts to whisper. "I am you. And you are dead if fact." ... the wind continues to whisper as it swirls around you. You feel emptyness inside and then you feel like you can't breath anymore.

Ace was walking though the labryinth as the ponies were cheering for him. I wish I can sink into that ocean. He thought as a young mare walks up to him to give him the warning. "They? Who's they?" And why would they want them to stay? Ace thought as they were making progress.

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"Wha...um...what do you mean ?" Star asked, picking up the weird castle piece and placing it in front of one of her pawns. *What am I doing...where am I...I just wanna go home.* She thought, holding back tears.

She sniffed and stared at the chessboard, unsure what else to do.

"Very well." said the colt, seeing your move. He grinned. You can see his pawn in the corner. "Go on." he added, sipping his tea. You don't know how, but suddenly, he has his hooves tied to the chair. "Just skip it. It's okay. I won't fall that way. I'll hold on tight."

 

He gulps, looking around wildly. "This... this doesn't make sense..." Flustered, he trots about, then stops, sighing. He takes a deep breath, calming down, then said, "All right. This is a dream. Or an alternate universe. Or a different timeline. But... This can't be The Real World. I don't believe it. I... I can't see the truth."

You can see a streak of light in the sky, which gives you a hope. You get the feeling that you are not all alone in this, as you say, "unreal world"..

 

Quip sighed, and then realized. Couldn't he imagine this old fart AWAY? Quip closed his eyes and thought of the current situation without his older self being there, when he started to open his eyes again, he was hoping it would actually work. If not, he would try again inside the machine. 

The other Quip was away. But something new appeared.

The familiar light formed itself into your old friend - the door.

 

(Congratulations. You are the first one to finish the first song. Here it is..)

 

Autumn gasped and tumbled out  of the air, crashing into the sand.

"how *gasp* can you be *gasp* me?" Autumn said between gasps.

She tried to get up again but just collapsed.

i... i can't breath... why is this happening to me? I just...

Autumn couldn't even think anymore, she just gave up, laying in the sand.

You get the thought you're going to die. Logic forces you to believe in it.

You can see your life running right before your eyes. You can see as you learned to.. see, but now..

You can hear the swirling wind whispering: "You can only say what you've seen and heard..".

But then..

You can feel a soft wind touching you skin again. But you feel like it's not that swirling wing.. it's cool and calming one.

"Choose... any choice is the right choise... choose to breath.." whispers the calming wind silently.

"As I said before... you can breath today... don't believe what he has to say.."

 

"No. Zere is no vay for zis box of madness to hurt me, und zerefore I have no reason to do anysing you say." Red had decided to call the box's bluff. he knew where he was, he knew what was happening, and he was tired of this weird, stupid realm's garbage. He had too much going on in his life already.

You slowly levitate, landing on the shore. The souls left you. And it seems like the enemies too.

The place is empty like if there's nothing left. There's just a piece of wall on which you're throwing a shadow. You're lying and waiting.

 

"Wha- what? What- how...?"

He looked at the bottles.

"I'm not given enough proof... no data* to know what each one does."

He looked around.

"Is anyone out there who can help? Am I in some discontented world where no one lives anymore?"

 

(*Is that supposed to be a person, or actor?)

(I don't understand the question)

 

You hear the voice. Following it, you discover it's just a TV.

"Good morning, world. The stars are still burning and the world's rotation is in the perfect condition!"

You can see that the TV keeps on chaning the colour, just like everything else in the house. Seems like these words made all of them change themselves.

 

Ace was walking though the labryinth as the ponies were cheering for him. I wish I can sink into that ocean. He thought as a young mare walks up to him to give him the warning. "They? Who's they?" And why would they want them to stay? Ace thought as they were making progress.

"They!" mare suddenly screamed and started to run, just like all of the other ponies. The cheers faded.

As you turned around, you could see another bunch of ponies, but... Somehow all of them were somehow familiar. "We warned you.. catch them!" said on of them. The group started chasing you.

Suddenly, a strange streak of light appeared in the distance... As you run closer to the light, you realise that it's the door. All the ponies disappear.

 

(Congratulations, you are the second one finishing the first song. Here it is:)

(The funny thing is that I see the videoclip for the first time today and there IS a labyrinth and a grayish-blue tones..)

Edited by Suntouched Coco
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To see yourself again from time to time.

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You hear the voice. Following it, you discover it's just a TV.

"Good morning, world. The stars are still burning and the world's rotation is in the perfect condition!"

You can see that the TV keeps on chaning the colour, just like everything else in the house. Seems like these words made all of them change themselves.

 

"UGH! What do you want me to do?! I have no clue how I got here, I have no clue where here is, and I don't know anything about... UGH!"

He threw his hooves up into the air, and sat down heavily on the ground.

"And there's no one here to help... Right, sure, let's get lonely Nightfall to fall into a trap where no one exists!"

He cursed himself.

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"Very well." said the colt, seeing your move. He grinned. You can see his pawn in the corner. "Go on." he added, sipping his tea. You don't know how, but suddenly, he has his hooves tied to the chair. "Just skip it. It's okay. I won't fall that way. I'll hold on tight."

 

(OOC: Am I allowed to use google ? Because I have no clue.)

 

Star stood up and backed away from the table. "What's...who are you ? What the buck is going on here ?" She asked. "I just wanna go home...how do I get out of this place ? why are you tied to the chair ? What's going on ?" She asked, backing against the wall.


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"Now, here's an idea." Red walked up to the stretch of wall. He looked around, taking in the emptiness. "Vell, I can't say it's been fun. I've been tryink my hardest to make you see I vant no part of zis. But you know vat? You vin. Just let me out." Sighing, Red lays his hoof on his shadow.


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OCs: Standoff and Red Alert, the luckless mercs

 

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You can see a streak of light in the sky, which gives you a hope. You get the feeling that you are not all alone in this, as you say, "unreal world"..

 

I slowly trot towards the light, ignoring the ponies around me. Adjusting my glasses and rubbing some of the dust off of them, I squint towards the light, trying to see what's inside it. "Hello? Is somepony there? Something?" A way out?

 

I approach the light, gulping. Here we go. 


And I dream of an absolution...

 

 

Addem Up: http://mlpforums.com.../addem-up-r1792

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The other Quip was away. But something new appeared. The familiar light formed itself into your old friend - the door.   (Congratulations. You are the first one to finish the first song. Here it is..)

 

 

Quip smiled and moved closer to the door. "Already back to Equestria? I would hate to leave this machinery behind..." he trailed off, looking back at the machines. "But that would mess up our tech pretty badly" he finished. He walked through the door, hoping to see his work shed when he emerged.


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Fierasil de Rosa Canter, the optimistic flyer.

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"Very well." said the colt, seeing your move. He grinned. You can see his pawn in the corner. "Go on." he added, sipping his tea. You don't know how, but suddenly, he has his hooves tied to the chair. "Just skip it. It's okay. I won't fall that way. I'll hold on tight."

 

You can see a streak of light in the sky, which gives you a hope. You get the feeling that you are not all alone in this, as you say, "unreal world"..

 

The other Quip was away. But something new appeared.

The familiar light formed itself into your old friend - the door.

 

(Congratulations. You are the first one to finish the first song. Here it is..)

 

You get the thought you're going to die. Logic forces you to believe in it.

You can see your life running right before your eyes. You can see as you learned to.. see, but now..

You can hear the swirling wind whispering: "You can only say what you've seen and heard..".

But then..

You can feel a soft wind touching you skin again. But you feel like it's not that swirling wing.. it's cool and calming one.

"Choose... any choice is the right choise... choose to breath.." whispers the calming wind silently.

"As I said before... you can breath today... don't believe what he has to say.."

 

You slowly levitate, landing on the shore. The souls left you. And it seems like the enemies too.

The place is empty like if there's nothing left. There's just a piece of wall on which you're throwing a shadow. You're lying and waiting.

 

(I don't understand the question)

 

You hear the voice. Following it, you discover it's just a TV.

"Good morning, world. The stars are still burning and the world's rotation is in the perfect condition!"

You can see that the TV keeps on chaning the colour, just like everything else in the house. Seems like these words made all of them change themselves.

 

"They!" mare suddenly screamed and started to run, just like all of the other ponies. The cheers faded.

As you turned around, you could see another bunch of ponies, but... Somehow all of them were somehow familiar. "We warned you.. catch them!" said on of them. The group started chasing you.

Suddenly, a strange streak of light appeared in the distance... As you run closer to the light, you realise that it's the door. All the ponies disappear.

 

(Congratulations, you are the second one finishing the first song. Here it is:)

(The funny thing is that I see the videoclip for the first time today and there IS a labyrinth and a grayish-blue tones..)

Ace watched as the group ran away, "wha?" Ace turned around to see a familiar group of ponies. "Uh, hello? I'm the scout." "We warned you.. catch them!" Then they gave chase. "Whoa, whoa I change my mind I'm not the scout!" Ace said dropping the map and running the oppesite direction. Soon he could see a streak of light upon getting closer Ace could see it was a door with quick speed he opened it and slemed it close once he was on the other side.

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You get the thought you're going to die. Logic forces you to believe in it. You can see your life running right before your eyes. You can see as you learned to.. see, but now.. You can hear the swirling wind whispering: "You can only say what you've seen and heard..". But then.. You can feel a soft wind touching you skin again. But you feel like it's not that swirling wing.. it's cool and calming one. "Choose... any choice is the right choise... choose to breath.." whispers the calming wind silently. "As I said before... you can breath today... don't believe what he has to say.."

Autumn was so confused, she wasn't sure what voice to listen to. She contemplated whether to give up and let her life slip through her hooves  or breath again and strive to live.

Autumn Gasped with all her might, it felt good to breath in the cool air.

Autumn took another breath, it was like her life had started again.


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Unholy Sight


Autumn Dream


Fire Runner (Griffon)


Fire Runner (Pony)

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(Let's listen together..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zHRm6yWHyNk

P.S. No non of you have a Syd Barrett nor Pink Floyd song. I just need to listen to it to keep myself calm while writing replies .. -.-)

"UGH! What do you want me to do?! I have no clue how I got here, I have no clue where here is, and I don't know anything about... UGH!"

He threw his hooves up into the air, and sat down heavily on the ground.

"And there's no one here to help... Right, sure, let's get lonely Nightfall to fall into a trap where no one exists!"

He cursed himself.

"How do you know there's noone... how do you know what's of this world and what's divine..."

You can see a lot of tools in the room and a lot of material - colours, stones, chemicals.. "Find yourself, find yourself!" the TV repeats all over again.

You think you are about to loose your mind.. but then, you hear some noise in a bathroom&see a strange light coming out of it.

 

 

(OOC: Am I allowed to use google ? Because I have no clue.)

 

Star stood up and backed away from the table. "What's...who are you ? What the buck is going on here ?" She asked. "I just wanna go home...how do I get out of this place ? why are you tied to the chair ? What's going on ?" She asked, backing against the wall.

(Well, it's up to you. But the point is not to do what you are supposed to do nor to guess the song.. )

"Look.. I'm really getting tired of your shit this. There is nothing but this place. And as I said, I tied my hooves up to the chair so I won't fall that way." he looked at the table. "Oh, great. The pawn is gone. Finally." You had no idea how or why, but yeah... it was gone. He smiled and yawned.

He was suddenly unstucked. "Today is the day B."

You appeared in your bed. Your joins are all stuck. You feel like staying in the bed all the time, getting lost in your mind. And your mind is the place where you can see a little streak of light.

 

"Now, here's an idea." Red walked up to the stretch of wall. He looked around, taking in the emptiness. "Vell, I can't say it's been fun. I've been tryink my hardest to make you see I vant no part of zis. But you know vat? You vin. Just let me out." Sighing, Red lays his hoof on his shadow.

Suddenly, a tidal wave caught you. It did nothing.. just got you wet. And also broke the wall. Your cover's blown.

The enemies appeared. You have nowhere to go. You know that you are all alone...

 

I slowly trot towards the light, ignoring the ponies around me. Adjusting my glasses and rubbing some of the dust off of them, I squint towards the light, trying to see what's inside it. "Hello? Is somepony there? Something?" A way out?

 

I approach the light, gulping. Here we go. 

You can see someone coming from the light... and fall down. He lands right before your hooves.

(Now you can interact with Quip)

 

Quip smiled and moved closer to the door. "Already back to Equestria? I would hate to leave this machinery behind..." he trailed off, looking back at the machines. "But that would mess up our tech pretty badly" he finished. He walked through the door, hoping to see his work shed when he emerged.

Instead of your shed, all you find is yourself falling from the sky and landing on the ground. It don't hurt much. Just a little.

You open your eyes, seein there's someone standing in front of you.

(Now you can interact with Addem Up)

 

Ace watched as the group ran away, "wha?" Ace turned around to see a familiar group of ponies. "Uh, hello? I'm the scout." "We warned you.. catch them!" Then they gave chase. "Whoa, whoa I change my mind I'm not the scout!" Ace said dropping the map and running the oppesite direction. Soon he could see a streak of light upon getting closer Ace could see it was a door with quick speed he opened it and slemed it close once he was on the other side.

You feel happy that you are away from the grayish world. This world was more colourful, nicer... And yeah, it was a bathroom.

(Now you can interact with Nightfall)

 

Autumn was so confused, she wasn't sure what voice to listen to. She contemplated whether to give up and let her life slip through her hooves  or breath again and strive to live.

Autumn Gasped with all her might, it felt good to breath in the cool air.

Autumn took another breath, it was like her life had started again.

"Breeeeath..... Breeeeeeeath..."

The light wind continued to cry these words. You can see the wind form itself into a little light. The light was brighter and brighter... Suddenly, you can see a well-known door.

(Congratulations, you are the 3th to finish your first song. Here it is:)

Edited by Suntouched Coco
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To see yourself again from time to time.

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@@Addem Up,

Instead of your shed, all you find is yourself falling from the sky and landing on the ground. It don't hurt much. Just a little. You open your eyes, seein there's someone standing in front of you. (Now you can interact with Addem Up)

 

 

Quip looked up at the pony, hoping he wasn't going to murder him or something. "Uh... hi" Quip said bluntly. Quip stood up and looked face to face with the pony. "Are you part of the machine as well? Or are you real somehow" he asked. Hopefully it was the latter, cause Quip wasn't looking forward to dealing with the machine again.


Cyril Coltefeller, the Head of Magical and Technological Development.

Fierasil de Rosa Canter, the optimistic flyer.

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(Let's listen together..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zHRm6yWHyNk

P.S. No non of you have a Syd Barrett nor Pink Floyd song. I just need to listen to it to keep myself calm while writing replies .. -.-)

"How do you know there's noone... how do you know what's of this world and what's divine..."

You can see a lot of tools in the room and a lot of material - colours, stones, chemicals.. "Find yourself, find yourself!" the TV repeats all over again.

You think you are about to loose your mind.. but then, you hear some noise in a bathroom&see a strange light coming out of it.

 

 

(Well, it's up to you. But the point is not to do what you are supposed to do nor to guess the song.. )

"Look.. I'm really getting tired of your shit this. There is nothing but this place. And as I said, I tied my hooves up to the chair so I won't fall that way." he looked at the table. "Oh, great. The pawn is gone. Finally." You had no idea how or why, but yeah... it was gone. He smiled and yawned.

He was suddenly unstucked. "Today is the day B."

You appeared in your bed. Your joins are all stuck. You feel like staying in the bed all the time, getting lost in your mind. And your mind is the place where you can see a little streak of light.

 

Suddenly, a tidal wave caught you. It did nothing.. just got you wet. And also broke the wall. Your cover's blown.

The enemies appeared. You have nowhere to go. You know that you are all alone...

 

You can see someone coming from the light... and fall down. He lands right before your hooves.

(Now you can interact with Quip)

 

Instead of your shed, all you find is yourself falling from the sky and landing on the ground. It don't hurt much. Just a little.

You open your eyes, seein there's someone standing in front of you.

(Now you can interact with Addem Up)

 

You feel happy that you are away from the grayish world. This world was more colourful, nicer... And yeah, it was a bathroom.

(Now you can interact with Nightfall)

 

"Breeeeath..... Breeeeeeeath..."

The light wind continued to cry these words. You can see the wind form itself into a little light. The light was brighter and brighter... Suddenly, you can see a well-known door.

(Congratulations, you are the 3th to finish your first song. Here it is:)

 

 

You know what? Fine. I'm done here. I don't know what this box wants me to do, and it's not doing a very good job of telling me. Maybe it's all just a dream. Maybe this is my personal hell. Who cares? "Okay, you schtupid ponies. Do your vorst." Red waded into the fray, snapping bones and ducking attackers, trying to figure out what was supposed to happen


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"How do you know there's noone... how do you know what's of this world and what's divine..."

You can see a lot of tools in the room and a lot of material - colours, stones, chemicals.. "Find yourself, find yourself!" the TV repeats all over again.

You think you are about to loose your mind.. but then, you hear some noise in a bathroom&see a strange light coming out of it.

 


 

You feel happy that you are away from the grayish world. This world was more colourful, nicer... And yeah, it was a bathroom.

(Now you can interact with Nightfall)

 

"What does that mean!"

Nightfall yelled in frustration. He looked over at the light, just about ready to kill or break something.

"I can't find myself when I'm full of this anger. It's killing me to be this way."

He stood up, forgetting caution and moving towards the bathroom.

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@@Addem Up,

 

 

Quip looked up at the pony, hoping he wasn't going to murder him or something. "Uh... hi" Quip said bluntly. Quip stood up and looked face to face with the pony. "Are you part of the machine as well? Or are you real somehow" he asked. Hopefully it was the latter, cause Quip wasn't looking forward to dealing with the machine again.

Addem frowned at the new pony, shaking his head. "The machine? What's that?" He paused, then said, "Wait a second. You talked to me. And you're not old, or creepy... Are you normal?" He chuckled. "I can't believe it. Another normal pony. I thought I was alone after opening that box."


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(Well, it's up to you. But the point is not to do what you are supposed to do nor to guess the song.. ) "Look.. I'm really getting tired of your shit this. There is nothing but this place. And as I said, I tied my hooves up to the chair so I won't fall that way." he looked at the table. "Oh, great. The pawn is gone. Finally." You had no idea how or why, but yeah... it was gone. He smiled and yawned. He was suddenly unstucked. "Today is the day B." You appeared in your bed. Your joins are all stuck. You feel like staying in the bed all the time, getting lost in your mind. And your mind is the place where you can see a little streak of light.  

 

Star was about to complain for the hundredth time...until...she was laying in bed (?)

"What the bu-" She stopped...she could see a light...no...she was only imagining it...but, what...what was it. She tried to move her foreleg...but it felt stiff. "What is...that light ?" She asked herself.

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"What does that mean!"

Nightfall yelled in frustration. He looked over at the light, just about ready to kill or break something.

"I can't find myself when I'm full of this anger. It's killing me to be this way."

He stood up, forgetting caution and moving towards the bathroom.

 Ace got in a defensive stance when he heard the angry voice "Stand back whoever you are! I've read many books about fighting and im not afried to hurt you." Ace said trying to not sound scared but failing. I just want to go home he thought getting ready for whoever to come in.

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 Ace got in a defensive stance when he heard the angry voice "Stand back whoever you are! I've read many books about fighting and im not afried to hurt you." Ace said trying to not sound scared but failing. I just want to go home he thought getting ready for whoever to come in.

 

"Finally! Fina-bucking-lee!"

Nightfall opened to bathroom door to see Ace.

"You don't know how happy I am to see a fellow pony, mate. This room and the TV in it... It's like I have to do something, but I have no idea what to do, and it's all so lonely here. I hate this place."

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Addem frowned at the new pony, shaking his head. "The machine? What's that?" He paused, then said, "Wait a second. You talked to me. And you're not old, or creepy... Are you normal?" He chuckled. "I can't believe it. Another normal pony. I thought I was alone after opening that box."

 

Quip smiled. "Good to know I'm not alone in here. But sad that you opened the music box just as I did. And yes, the machine. Its hard to explain though. Essentially to sum it up, I met future me. The end. And I had some pretty mouth watering hot chocolate..." he said, still able to remember the taste like it was minutes ago... oh wait, it was minutes ago.


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Fierasil de Rosa Canter, the optimistic flyer.

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"Breeeeath..... Breeeeeeeath..." The light wind continued to cry these words. You can see the wind form itself into a little light. The light was brighter and brighter... Suddenly, you can see a well-known door. (Congratulations, you are the 3th to finish your first song. Here it is:)

(OCC: I love that song :3 )

Autumn looked at the door.

Great! not you again! Autumn thought, letting out a deep sigh.

she walked up to the door and rested her head against the door.

well.. here goes nothing... she thought, reaching towards the door knob, hoping that it might lead home.


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"Finally! Fina-bucking-lee!"

Nightfall opened to bathroom door to see Ace.

"You don't know how happy I am to see a fellow pony, mate. This room and the TV in it... It's like I have to do something, but I have no idea what to do, and it's all so lonely here. I hate this place."

Ace let his guard down when he saw the pony "Oh, I thought you were a part of that group that was trying to get me all because I could read a map." Ace said extending his hoof. "The name is Flying Ace, what happened that lead you to this room? Maybe we can both figer out how to solve this crazy music box."

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