I'll Never Let You Go

[Smitty91 57]

I'll Never Let You Go

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9129249/1/I-ll-Never-Let-You-Go

 

Synopsis: She told him she loved him. She told him she would never send him away. So why does he feel like she's leaving him behind as she heads off into her new life as a royal princess?

 

Edited May 31, 2013 by Smitty91

[Nature's Spell 526]

It's a very nice story. I've never been a good proofreader, so I can't help you with that, but I really enjoyed the story. My one thought is that you place the story some place else and just post a link to it so the thread isn't so long. Maybe you'll consider reading my story.

 

http://naturespellstories.tumblr.com/

[Smitty91 57]

It's a very nice story. I've never been a good proofreader, so I can't help you with that, but I really enjoyed the story. My one thought is that you place the story some place else and just post a link to it so the thread isn't so long. Maybe you'll consider reading my story.

 

http://naturespellstories.tumblr.com/

 

I have posted it on fanfiction.net. That would probably be a good idea. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love when a story is able to tug at one's heartstrings like it did for one reader who was 26 and admitted that the story actually made him cry. I'll take a look at your story and get back to you about how I feel about it.

 

Well, I've read your story and Twilight's having trouble with flying has inspired me to write a story where she and Rainbow Dash are having a one-on-one session about flying after Spike ends up spilling the beans about what a horrible flier she is. Might as well add Scootaloo in there too. I look forward to reading the rest and seeing where this story goes.  

Edited April 3, 2013 by Smitty91

[The Swedish Brony 153]

That was one real heart-warming story  

 

It made me feel all fuzzy inside

I haven't read many fanfics yet but I think it was really good. One of those feel-good stories  

 

Keep up the good work