Help with music *would like some critics*

[Xan 22]

Ok well I have said before I wanted to make music and all. I am still only equipped with FL studios mobile anyways I'm not sure if its smart for me to post the first works of art I've made but I feel like I need some criticism. I don't just want to be told what to do I also need to be told how (I finally figured out a way I could use the reverb effect). Anyways I also plan to correctly post the link to my sound cloud account this time and I am close to posting some random little pieces of music soon just a random pile cause I really need help on how to make a intro and outro for my music. I felt like I exited the song well on my Walker Remix but on my first remix I just dropped it off with nothing to really properly exit. The reason it's just random bits of music is cause I don't really know how to continue the 30 second beat I've made. I don't really think I can add on to the 30 second beat without changing the way the whole song sounds. Also how long does it usually take for electronic musicians to become good cause I really want to be good but I wonder are there people out there who are really passionate for something but they seriously just can't do it even of they tried? I also hear arguments between which is better hardware or software I heard all about turn tables and stuff and if I could get them money i would look further into them but I am constantly told musicians who just use software suck and that electronic music is dying cause no body uses turntables any more (which I found pathetic I've already seen turntables used all over the place). Anyways here is the (hopefully) correct link to my sound cloud account http://m.soundcloud.com/xandael

[Collector(GameDev) 34]

I like your style, it's VERY better and unique then most of the dubstep that most people do now a days. I wouldn't mind having you on my team for some of my projects, but I think you need to know a bit more in how to make music before I start trying to hire. Good luck, mate!