Offering beta reading

[LeoPrism 25]

My fellow writers,

I am willing to beta read at least two or three MLP-fanfictions of any kind up to 5000 Words length each. If your story is longer an excerpt will do (if I like it and have the time I might as well decide to do the rest of it).

I will comment on general points as well as everything that strikes me, and answer specific questions if you have any. I will also abridge the text if you ask me or I feel there is a need to. The one thing I am sorry I cannot do is proper proofreading or stylistic analysis, since I am no native speaker.

I would be glad to be able to help some of you to improve your writing, as well as learning from it myself. If you have something that does not fit the forum rules I won't mind, just send me your email address in that case so we can handle it that way. Looking forward to your stories!

[RyanMagika 0]

I have a story about 800 word that id like to have beta read, here is the google docs link to the first chapter please reply with any mistakes ive made.i know it's short but it is mostly a filler chapter to get the ball rolling. Thank you if you agree to beta read this

 

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mpTQ3DL1i8_aoIZNnlfaewDdqXb8_l-NhaWKNlp5fdc/edit?usp=sharing

Edited July 5, 2013 by RyanMagika

[LeoPrism 25]

This is still a thing, although I will not have much time up till that nasty physics exam in a week. Not to mention myself struggeling with my own word count (non-pony), but that is two things...

Then again, your story is not too long, so I might even have a look at it this week.

[LeoPrism 25]

Okay, after everything got out of hoof for me this month (it still is when I think about it), I just managed to read it (comments are on its way via PM). Next, I am reading a text I was asked for via PM.

That is enough for me at the moment, especially since there is another, rather big thing I agreed to beta, not to mention everything I want to write myself; so I am not taking new beta requests for now.

[Dragor 0]

I don't know if you are still interested in beta reading, but I'm posting this anyway just in case you or anyone else is.

I've spent the last week revising this story, so there shoulden't be any major mistakes in it.

Nonetheless I would feel better if someone threw a glance at it. You can find the story here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y1I6tdbz9vOcIlpfRryC2Iv8lskIDLVLYlhxWISRdW8/edit

 

You are free to correct any mistakes you find.

 

 

PS. I shall publish this story today.