An Adorable Little Pony

[Rivet Canterlot Mechanic 63]

This is just a simple drawing of a pony I made. It's nothing too special. I just sent it to a few friends and they said it was "adorable" I would like feedback if possible.

[Zygen 6,066]

it looks adorable to me as well I must say, not much of anything I can really critique personally, I mean theres some kinda slightly messy lines near the hooves like how the curve on the right one doesn't really curve gradual enough I don't think, but maybe I'm just seeing things, or being picky, or both.

 

I'm not really one to notice enough detail to critique I suppose .

 

But yeah you did a good job i think .

[Civil Sunset 54]

Yup, thats adorable alright. Now there needs to be more adorable! More adorable ponies in their adorableness doing adora le things for pony-kind! .. Right?

[Just some guy 1,070]

It's need to be about 20% more adorable.

 

Really though,your OC is quite adorable,especially in that drawing.Gah,she's so cute I could just eat her up!

[Rivet Canterlot Mechanic 63]

Took some of your advice and added some forgotten details. I fixed up the right front leg so it's a little more gradual and gave her a tail as well as cleaned up some of the lines. She's even blushing a little because that seemed like a good idea at the time.