music Two songs I made

[HailthornX 47]

These are two instrumentals I made and I was hoping to get some feedback (positive or negative both appreciated).

 

"Bring It Back"

 

"Zim Zam Zango"

 

[~Rule 63~ Lyeco 527]

Hmmm seems pretty decent . What software or instrument you use to make those anyway? I just want you to make it 20% Cooler  by adding some speed and metal guitars in it. ( originally I like classical)

[Nobody Special 210]

It's okay for the most part, but there is too much repeating. It feels like I am listening to a 10 second segment 5 times over. There needs to be an intro, a climax, and an ending kind of like a book. You need to treat it as if you were trying to write a book, you need to catch the attention of the listener, get stronger throughout the song and subtly end it.

[Satsuki Kiryuin 1,155]

It sounds okay. You should work more on the relationship between the synths and the beat. You should also work on the melody somewhat, it's not too catchy. I do believe you should add more layers, because it sounds empty. You also need a lot more than just a bass to make it sound good. You're lacking transitions, but it's nothing vengeance samples can't fix. I do think you could improve by a lot more, and I think you should check out tutorials on Youtube for whatever DAW you're using.

 

- Otty~