My first OC sketch

[Star_Shine 9]

this my very first attempt to draw my oc, as you can see it's not that good so any constructive criticism would be helpful so feel free to be honest about it.

 

*brohoof*

[Descant 1,898]

It's... Not that bad. It looks like you tried to freehand it, in any case. If that is the case, then I'm  reasonably impressed. Also, looks like MS Paint. Please forgive me if I'm wrong. 

My first attempt at an OC drawing was horrible, beeteedubs. You should be proud of that.

[Super Derpy 535]

Good job! For a first try that's really good. The only thing bad thing I have to say is that it is really rough but if you smoothed it up it would look really good.

[Star_Shine 9]

Good job! For a first try that's really good. The only thing bad thing I have to say is that it is really rough but if you smoothed it up it would look really good.

umm yeah I know it's rough but I have no idea how to make it smooth could you pls help me? and if you know any other good drawing programs I could use that would be helpful thx!

[Level3rd 128]

I'm not an artist of the visual kind, but I do have one constructive comment.

In the tail region, if you follow the tail stem, it eventually comes out of his right leg.  Try adjusting the tail to better align with the base of his spine.  That's really the only thing I could suggest properly.

[RobberBrony 12]

Yeah the lines are super wobbly, if you use MSPaint you can use the line and curved line tool to make it look cleaner. But if you want a good program, I suggest Paint.NET, it's easier to edit something you've already done, you can use layers, effects, lots of tools to play around with, etc etc