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[Flicker 141]

So immediately after Dreamscapers aired I began sketching this scene. It turned out so well that I decided to make a full color version. After about a week of almost nonstop work, I wound up with this. I really don't know about it, there's too much or too little, or something, I don't know what. It just seems a little off.

[Zygen 6,066]

I know nothing about dreamscape frankly, but overall it looks good.

 

I think that maybe the detail level between the background and your drawing of Discord don't match exactly. Discord has this more realistic look it seems, while the backgrounds more cartoony. Well not totally, but to an extent.

 

I don't know what the pyramid thing is, but it doesn't seem to fit the background or Discords art style i think personally.

 

Other then that its pretty good though.

[Flicker 141]

Yeah, Bill Cypher isn't supposed to fit in. Even in Gravity Falls, he's bizzare, given the fact that he's two dimensional. He's a dream demon who is actually a lot like Discord. The background is probably what feels so weird about it. Thanks!

[RosemaryPetal 112]

Hmm, seems legit for the most part, discord's body should be a bit longer though.

And then.. there's the pyramid

...Why?...

Oh well, cool, but i wouldn't do the outlines next time~~

[Fhaolan 4,484]

Yeah, I'd say the main bit is discord's body seeming a bit short, but that might be because most of the fan-art I see of Discord really emphasize the 'Chinese dragon' look he has.