Count to a million

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4 dislikes already

[Retro*Derpy 3,195]

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[gameangel147 5,915]

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For your second chapter?

Edited April 14, 2014 by gameangel147

[equerio 6,153]

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EEEEEEYUP

gaeangel is purposefully screwing up

Edited April 14, 2014 by equerio

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,982]

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I just started chapter 2, that is still chapter 1

[gameangel147 5,915]

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I don't know what you're talking about Equerio.

 

And what do the comments say?

Edited April 14, 2014 by gameangel147

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there are no comments for it yet

[gameangel147 5,915]

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I think the problem has less to do with the story and more to do with the grammar.  I see a lot of comments on stories with a lot of bad grammar.

[equerio 6,153]

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Suuuuure gameangel...

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,982]

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hmmm ...

[DubWolf 17,366]

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[gameangel147 5,915]

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[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,982]

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still the same feeling, no matter if story or grammar is bad ...

[gameangel147 5,915]

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I understand, but you use to do even better! 

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,982]

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do what better?

[gameangel147 5,915]

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Write of course. 

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,982]

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you think, I write already better then before?

[GhostPony750 959]

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Here in the UK the Cosworth is known affectionately is the 'Cosa.

Oh okay. I know it as "Cossie" around here lol.

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[SparklingSquirrels 21,354]

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Of course, Rising! Just keep at it, I'm sure you would have much fewer errors if you wrote in Deutsch

Edited April 14, 2014 by SparklingSwirls

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thanks, it means a lot. And I try extra to write so good as possible, so you all can understand it so good as possible. Sure, I'm not perfect, there are definitly grammar errors in my Fics, but nopony is perfect

[gameangel147 5,915]

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But then he couldn't post of FIMFiction in Deutsch. 

 

All you need is practice, and you can always have someone else proofread it.  A lot of writers have others proofread their stories.

Edited April 14, 2014 by gameangel147

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okay