Count to a million

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Thanks Basey. 

 

I ran my dehumidifier last night so I could dump the water in the toilet to flush but the problem we're having is drainage. So if I do flush it, I might actually make the problem worse. My landlord didn't tell me that last bit. He just told me we were having drainage problems. He was supposedly at Home Depot when I called him last night. 

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I mean, if this keeps happening, I'm about ready to move. Living in an old house is cool and all, but I need a fucking shower. I haven't showered since Thursday night. It's Sunday morning now. 

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That really sucks.

 

 I can go at most 2 days without showering before I start to feel gross and just have to have one.

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Hope your problem get's fixed soon

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Hey Bozzle!

Edited May 31, 2015 by BasementPoneh

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[Kawaii Besu 28,030]

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That sucks Woona. Hope the plumber dudes fix it and restore the supply ASAP.

Hey Bozzle!

Edited May 31, 2015 by Fillypino Pride

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YAY! I won the race and got the trophy for the fastest lap in all sessions buuut ...

 

to all whpo readed my first chapter, is the grammar really that bad to be not approved?

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@

I spotted a few mistakes, but it's not bad...

[Deae Rising Shine~ 57,413]

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For FimFiction it was bad enough to not get approved...

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[DasCapschen 7,775]

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hmm :/
 

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It's a lot better grammatically than most of your really old stuff Rising. And I've seen even worse than that on Fimfiction by a loooooong shot.

 

 Could still do with some work, but it's weird they wouldn't approve it.

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I asked the same person there, if there was aspecific part and why my older stories got approved

 

Your story Always there for you has failed moderation on FimFiction for the following reason: The level of grammar and/or lack of punctuation in this story is too severe for it to be approved. You may want to consider looking for a pre-reader. Try checking one of the groups on the site that deal with proofreading and see if anyone there would be willing to help you out.

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Maybe it's some new standard they've started or something?

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Mayby It was bad luck and the wrong stuff member readed it XD

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[BastementSparkle 20,335]

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Yeah, stuff members are always kinda mean. Too bad you didn't get any of the Staff members.

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3 Fics

3 different approver

and the one now was non of them, mayby really just got the wrong person

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Probably.

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Alright, next time have to look who from them is on XD