Count to a million

[PoisonClaw 8,157]

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[equerio 6,153]

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I just wanna make everypony happy

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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Well, you did a superb job, Equerio! *hugs*

[equerio 6,153]

38155

Um... I did?

Thanks Red! *hugs back*

[SparklingSwirls 21,274]

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Hugs from equerio always cheer me up

 

*jumps into equerio's arms*

[gameangel147 5,915]

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"Good morning!" he said looking at all the pages he had to catch up on. 

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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Hey there, Angel!

[gameangel147 5,915]

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Salutation Red, Swirly, and Equerio. 

 

How are you guys. 

[equerio 6,153]

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Yay, I cheered everypony up!

*group hug*

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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Well, today hasn't been the best of days on this thread...

 

That is, until Equerio cheered us all up! *prepares party*

Edited April 16, 2014 by Blue Eclipse

[equerio 6,153]

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I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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*is obese for some reason*

[gameangel147 5,915]

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Quick Red! 

 

To the treadmill!! 

[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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[gameangel147 5,915]

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Hi Rising!! 

[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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Hey gameangel   how far are you?

[PinkiePieJr 122]

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[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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I dunno how far you are, but in this sentence in chapter 1

 

Sky put the book in her saddlebag and then turn her attention back to Light.

 

Change it to

 

Sky put the book in her saddlebag and then turn her attention back to me.

 

 

afterall it is written from his view^^

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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*naps on wooden plank*

[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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[gameangel147 5,915]

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*wooden plank breaks*

 

I'm good thanks.  Just eating breakfast. 

 

And alright then, I'll make sure to keep in eye out for view changes.  Already seen some changes in tense.

Edited April 16, 2014 by gameangel147

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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*wooden plank is magically fixed*

 

*belly lands on other end of plank*

Edited April 16, 2014 by Blue Eclipse

[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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well, I read both chapters already again, that was the only one I saw so far, but better keep looking^^ And thanky for doing this^^

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,926]

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Thanks, Rising!

 

*is catapulted through the air*

[Deae Rising Shine~ 53,097]

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I mean gameangel XD *Hug Blue*