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oh my, sounds interesting!

wait, if snapp is a pegasus, how come she has magic?

Well, I'm not the one who looks at r34

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,292]

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every question would be answered in the story, so that is all, you need to know first XD

 

i DO! Uhm, I mean, if it's okay for you

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oh ok then, can't wait to see it

of vourse it's ok with me, silly

if you like it, and it causes me no harm, I have no reason to prevent you from doing that

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yay   XD

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[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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I'd like to read it when it's finished!

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Yeah, me too

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FIRST of all, I have to ask Snapp, but he is back sunday afternoon(Aka midnight for me)

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what do you have to ask him?

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That's not TOO far away...

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mayby he not want, that I show it

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but aren't you doing this whole RP thing just for the fanfic?

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We start it for fun, doing a Fic about that just came out in my mind few days ago

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Oh, but I'm sure he'll be ok with it

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,292]

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I'm sure to, but better to ask ... I think, chapter 1 is okay, mostly from that was in this thread here anyway XD

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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This thread sat for an entire hour without getting new posts? Nooo!

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FINALLY! Should I post Chapter 1?

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Sure! But only if Snapp is okay with it

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about 95%+ from chapter 1 is that, what we wrote in this thread, so technically, everypony can read it XD

 

chapter 1: First meeting

"I'm here!"

Rising, still looking, where she, Snapp, could be, here somepony screaming. He turn around and see a smaller mare, screaming to him. Of course, he already know, how she looks like, afterall, it's his target. But ... when see her in person, he get a feeling inside, he never had something before. She looks so friendly and enjoyable. Something, he never feel before ... but he has to concentrate, finishing his mission.

"Good, hehehe ... uhm, I mean, good, you must be Snappy, right? Hey, I know a good place."

She is smiling to him. Rising don't know much about her, but she feel really comfortable with him, even when she meet him the first time. Rising still feeling strange. Rising smiling back, then heading to the bar. Of course, most of the ponies there, are from the company, everything is already planned. They went in and sitting on a desk.

"Sooo... hows the fanfic going?"

The FanFic. Rising write her, that he write a FanFic, for his cover and because, he is good in that, he start extra, writing a FanFic and send every chapter to her.

"Uhm ... fine. Got already 11 chapters."

"WOW! I missed alot!"

"How many chapters, I send you, do you read already?"

"Only 9."

Snapp start to look upset. Rising feel with her ... more then he should do ... can it be, that he ... have an ... crush on her? He look surprise.

 "Then read 10 and 11 now! I got it with me, here, Snappy"

Rising take two letters, with chapter 10 and 11, out and give it to Snapp.

"I would prefer to be called Snapp, thanks. I would love to read them! Order and I will read them while the food is cooked!"

Rising realized, that he called her the whole time Snappy. He really start to think, he like her really.

"Oh, Okay, I'm right back"

Rising went to the bar. Time for the next step. Snapp start reading the two chapters, Rising give her. After short time, he comes back.

"What did you order?"

"Some hayburger, if it's okay. And hot chocolate."

From what Rising knows, she loves hayburger.

"Lovely, my favourite! Very good fanfic by the way, I just finished chapter 11!"

That smile on her! He really start to feel bad because of that, he has to do with her ...

"Thanks to hear that, Snapp. Oh, here it comes, thanks ... uhm ...

The bar manager comes, with the hayburgers and hot chocolate. But Rising feeling worse. She don't even know, that poison is in her hot chocolate ... should he tell her?
"Should I tell her about the plan, before she drinks?"

"Tell who what?"

"Wha ... you can read my minds?"

"No, but I heard you mutter something about telling somepony something."

Rising realized, that he mutter his sentence a bit too loud. But then, Rising can't hold it anymore ... he can't do that to hear, not now, not in the future ..

"I'm ... here are too many ponies ... I have something to tell you, can we go to the toilets? I will tell you everything, okay? It is really important."

"Sure..."

Snapp start to make worry. Why can't he tell her that here? Unsure, if this is right, both going to the toilet. When Rising see, that nopony is in there, he start talking.

"So ... it should be save here. Listen ... I working for somepony, who trying to overtake Equestria ... and it looks like, that YOU have magic in you, he need to overtake. My mission was to befriend with you. To meet you. In your hot chocolate is poison, that let you fall asleep for 24 hours. Enough time, to bring you to him. But ... you are so friendly to me ... so I decided to help you. The ponies in the bar ... they all on my side. We have to escape through the window here ... you have to trust me, Snapp."

Snapp don't know, how to react about that, what Rising told her right now ...

"Uhhhh, but what about the hayburgers?"

She look upset.

"No time for them ... I buy you some later, I know a safe place. Do you trust me?"

"I suppose."

Rising is happy, that she trust him.  

"Good ... I think, somepony is coming, go to the window, now!"

"Ok then."

Snapp try to climb through the window, but because of her clumsiness, she don't make it. Rising get worried, the hoofsteps come closer ...

"Come on, before ..."

Hey ... hey, stop her, Rising!"

Now it's time for a final decision ... a decision, that could change his completly live ... help her or catch her? Rising decided ... to help the small mare.

"Sorry, but I'm not working for you guys anymore!"

To help her, he kick Snapp through the window and jump through the window.

"Snapp, run!"

"But what about you?"

She start to fly. Rising tell her an adress.

"We met us there, I promise, now, fly away, meet you later, I can handle this!"

"Meet you there!"

She flying away.

"We will ... argh ...!"

Rising falls down, somepony shoot his hoof.

"Why do you let her escape!"

Rising try to find a lie.

"I ... she use some magic ... even with no horn ... to control me ..."

"Hmmmm ... okay, but be careful now, looks like, she knows about us ... be careful!"

"I will"

Rising is happy ... they believe him. He start flying, making his way to the adress, he gave Snapp.
Snapp reach the adress.

"It would of be helpful if Rising told me when to come here. Where is Rising ...?"

Rising see Snapp waiting by the house.

"I'm here! Argh ...!"

Rising landing on the ground, but he forgot about his hurted hoof.

"Oh no! What happened to your hoof?"

"It's okay ... they have to stop me afterall ... I'm lucky, they think, that you controlled me ... if they had known, that I really help you, then you would never see me again ..."

Rising start to walk, but the pain is really high.

"Argh ... the key is hidden there, had no time to tell you that."

"What is the key for?"

Rising think, that she is kidding him ...

"To open the door from the house ... argh ... can you open it?"

"I'll try, its a little stuck!"

She have some trouble to open the door. But after few minutes, she open it finally.
 "Got it! Lets go in!"

That smile again ...

"Thanks ... argh!"

Rising is falling down from the pain.

"Ouch ...!"

Snapp really making worry about him.

"Whoah! easy there! Be careful on that hoof. Here I have some bandage. Is that better?"

Snapp take some bandages from her saddlebag and do it on Rising's hurted hoof. Rising feeling a bit better now.

"Yeah ... thanks."

Rising smile to her. She is really caring about him, even after he tell her the truth.

"Ok, let's go in!"

Rising slowly walking with Snapp in. It's not the best house, but better then nothing.

"Hope you like it here, that will be your home for a longer time."

Snapp turning back to Rising. She just need to ask.

"I have questions.
1. How long will I stay here for?
2. What do these ponies want with me?
3. This is VERY important, where can I get a hayburger I'm starving!"

After the third question, she stretch her tongue out.  Rising ignoring that.

"1.I don't know ...
2.Didn't I told you that?
3.Oh yeah ... look in my saddlebag."

She open the saddlebag from Rising and searching.

"What do these ponies want with me? Yay hayburgers my favourite!"

She found the hayburgers.

"It looks like, they need your magic inside of you. He need that, to overtake Equestria ... with your magic ... he could beat the princesses easily ... and I saw the machine, where they want put you in ... I think, you wouldn't survive that ... but for now, you are save, don't worry, I protect you."

Rising trying to make her feeling safe by him, so she don't have to make so much worry about the situation.

"Why me? why do I have magic, why do they want to rule equestria? And most important.....  why isn't there enough lettuce on this hayburger?"

This time, she is serious.

"I don't know. That's all I know. I don't get everything. About the hayburger, didn't know, that you want more lettuce, I think about that next time."

Rising try again to make it more comfortable.

"What will you do? And thanks about the hayburger."

She smiles to Rising, but he didn't recognize it ... he thinking about his past, what he have done.

"All the ponies I killed ... what have I done ... I'm a idiot ... I don't deserve anything ..."

"So i'll just stay here for a while. Alright then bye see you later, I hope."

"Huh, what? Sorry, I didn't hear you."

Rising recognize her.

"Nothing."

Snapp feeling neglected from Rising. Rising try to feel her better.

"Sorry ... I didn't want to ignore you ... you help me a lot ... thinking about things I done in the past for them ... bad things ... REALLY bad things ... you show me the good side from Equestria ... thanks."

Without a warning, he hug her. But she didn't react to that.

"Bye Rising, Good luck."

"Huh? Where are you going?"

Go, to find more food. If I am going to live here, I need supplies."

She is right. Rising didn't think about that, but he can't let her go out.

"I do! It's too dangerous for you outside!"

"Are you sure? You could use some help with that hurted hoof. I am sure I can defend myself."

"I ... no ... if something happening ... there everywhere ... I do ... argh!! Okay, mayby you right ... There are clothes, mayby they don't spot you with those clothes ... but hurry, okay?"

His hoof is still hurted too much. Unsure, he let allowing her to go out for food. She goes to the clothes and put them on her.

"Ok. How's this?"

"Yep, that should work ... come back as fast as you can, okay?"

She nod with her head and went out of the house. A forest is nearby, so she start looking there for food.

"Ooh those berries look fine. What was that?"

Snapp heard something cracking.

"Hmm probably nothing, I hope. Ooh nuts, yummy! Huh! what was that?"

Again a noise nearby. She start continue looking.

"Ooh a cabbage bush! Ok I have Berries, Nuts and some cabbages!"

She put the food on her saddlebags, when she heard again something.

"What was that?!"

 Full with fear, she start to run. The noises going louder and coming closer, until something hit her.

"Aagh! Somethings got my tail!"

Full of panic, she let the saddlebag falling and try to fly away. But whatever she got on her tail, it don't go away. Unsure, what too do, she seeing Rising in the house.

"HELP ME!!"

"What are those noises outside?"

Rising slowly walks to the window.

"SNAPP!"

He start to run out, but fall down again, because of his hoof.

"Argh, my stupid hoof! I coming!"

Rising start to fly to Snapp. Snapp is thinking, saying to her self, that she is fault for this.

"Rising, what is on my tail?!"

Rising don't take long to recognize the thing, that is hanging on her tail.

"Oh no ... one of his magical drones! Come on ... yes!"

Rising try to get the drone away from Snapp's tail. He did it. and kick the drone away.

"Are you okay?"

"Yeah I thi ..."

But suddenly, she fainted and stop flying, start to fall to the ground.

"SNAPP!"

Rising catch her, before she shmashed the ground.

"Oh no ... I hope, the drone didn't see the house!"

He flying with her back to the house and lay her on the ground ...

After few minutes, she wakes up.

"Uugh what happened? Did you get the food from my bag?"

"Finally, you wake up, thanks Celestia. You suddenly fainted and falling, I catch you ... food?"

"Yeah I collected berries, nuts and Cabbages!"

In the bags, right? Yeah, I went back and bring them here."

"Good, so me going out wasn't a complete waste of time."

"Nope ... but I'm not sure anymore, if we are save ... the forest is next to the house ... what, if the drone see the house?"

"I don't know, I'm sorry I was just trying to help but I guess I'm just as useless as everypony always told me!"

She really think, Rising hate her now, like everypony in her past ... Rising try to cheer her up.

"Hey, you are not ... I'm happy, that you want to help me. Don't make your self upset ... hey look at me, you are not useless."

Rising smile to her ... and get an hug from her.

"Thank you Rising."

"No problem, Snapps."

Rising is still smiling, but when he look to her, he recognized, that Snapp is looking to his wing.

"Wait a minute. What is that in your wing? it looks metal like it came of that drone thing. How would it break so easily?"

Rising open his wing to see, what Snapp is meaning.

"Looks definitly from that drone. Can you pull it out?"

"Hold still!"

 Snapp put it out from Rising's wing.

"Strange it looks like its still functioning. Why does it have lens? Oh no! It fell off because it was supposed to, it's a camera! And It's still functioning!"

"What?! A trap! We better go out of here ... or better flying, with my hoof!"

Rising try to fly, but his wing don't even move anymore.

"Don't work ... oh no, that thing stunned my wing, I can't fly, so long the effect works!"

"Oh no! What will we do!?"

 Snapp start too put food in the bag.

"Look around for any sort of transport! I could pull and you could sit in, quick!"

Rising is looking around ...

"I don't see anything to transport! It's all my fault ..."

"No! It's mine. I shouldn't of gone to get food, I was feeling daring but this is what I caused."

"No, it's my fault ... they didn't know, where you living, if we didn't met, you will be save ... you can still flying, right? Go ..."

Rising decided, that she should fly away ... afterall, they want her, not him.

"It doesn't matter whose fault it is, we need to get out of here. Hold onto me, hope these wings work!"

 Rising climb on here and hold tight on here.

"I hope, I'm not to heavy ... thanks."

"I need help, can you flap your working wing a bit?"

"Sure! Like this?"

Rising start to flap his working wing.

"Great! Just one question, where should we go?"

Rising didn't think about that.

"We should ... uhm ... so tired ... Can't ... ponyville ..."

Suddenly, Rising fall asleep, falling from Snapp's back.

"RISING!"

 Snapp start to scream. She flying fast, to catch him and landing on the ground.

"Got Ya! Oh no my scream caused a rockslide! ... It stopped, good. Ow! My wing, its stuck under a rock oh no!"

A bigger piece of a rock is on her wing, she can't pull it out. Rising is still sleeping.

"So.... Hungry..."

 She take out berries from the bag and start eating them. Rising is still sleeping.

"Rising! Rising, wake up, I need help!"

 She take a little stone and throw it on Rising. Finally, Rising wakes up.

"Uhm ... what ... what happening?"

"You fell off, after falling asleep. I screamed and chased after you, I caught you put you on the ground, my earlier scream caused a land slide and now my wing is stuck under this big rock!"

Rising realized the rock on her wing.

"Oh no! Wait, I try to get the rock away from you ... nghhhh ... ah, my hoof ... forget ... the ... pain ... come on! Just a little more .... argh, got it! AHHHHHHHrghhhhhhhhh ....!!! ahhh ... my hoof ..."

Rising managed to put the rock away, but thanks to his hurted hoof, it wasn't painless.

"Great we have a immobile pegasus and a pegasus with a wounded hoof and stunned wing, what are we going to do?"

Rising realized, that his wing isn't stunned anymore.

"Hey, it's not stunned anymore ... argh ... my hoof hurt a lot more then before."

"Good! See if you can move the rock with your wings!"

What?! Rising looking surprised. The rock is already away ...

"You already free ... that's why my hoof hurt that much ... bad sign, if you can't feel your wing!"

"So now I can't fly. Can you fly us to Fillydelphia I have some friends there who could help."

Again, WHAT?!

"Didn't we escaped from Fillydelphia? I hope, you know, what you doing ..."

Rising take Snapp on his back.

"Hold on tight!"

Rising start to fly, but get stopped fast from Snapp.

"Rising, stop! I got hit in the head when the landslide happened and I can't really remember anything! I need to rest."

"Wha -!"

Rising stop and seeing a cave nearby.

"Sure ... there is a cave, mayby we are save here for a while."

He flying to the cave. When they reach the cave, he laying her down.

"Safe from what?"

"Oh no ... uhm ... what is the last thing, you have done?"

"Aagh! I've been ponynapped! Stay back ponynapper!"

He didn't expect that reaction.

"I see .. hey, Snapp, calm down! I'm not your enemy ... anymore. Hey, calm down, please. Hey ... calm down ..."

"Why are you doing this! I am just a regular pony?!"

 And then, she fainted.

"Oh no, she really forgot anything! Hey ... easy ... sleep a while, mayby it help, I will stay awake and watch you, don't worry. I hope she feel better, when she wake up ..."

Snapp is still fainted and sleeping.

 

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That's great, Rising! I'm looking forward to more, it's got me curious

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thanks^^ It's lot of work, writng from simple

 

No*Fainted and fall to the ground*

 

 

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"No!"

 

She fainted and start falling to the ground.

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