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Hello, everypony. And welcome to my new fanfic, Hearthfire Ember. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Good day everypony!

 

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Befor I start this fan-fic, I would like to announce to all the people out their who sent me their OC for my last fan-fic. Unfortunately, the fan-fic file on my desktop was deleted somehow. Im sorry. Im Hearthfire Flitter, and I hope you enjoy. Thanks. And also, im pretty sure that Cloud Chaser is Flitter's sister.

 

*PLEASE READ*

I am aware that there are various mistakes In here, but as time goes on I got better and better at writing fanfics. This is an old fan fiction that I hope you will enjoy.

 

The Hearthfire Ember (Genre: Fantasy, Humor)

 

Chapter 1

 

 

Legend has it that one day, the gates to Hearthfire and all of its horrors, will

one day, be forced open due to the forces of the clashing, raging gods that lived

above and beyond both Equestria, and the lands of Hearthfire. Of which the

grand gods shall smite upon the world in blame of thy world and battle for it.

Especially, the Lands of Hearthfire. Only one may stop these Enraged gods.

Only may he or she have help from four friends. Once their souls have been

purified of anger and hate, will everypony have peace. Until then, thy gods

shall fill the world of hate, and thy souls will be enraged. To escaped is to surpass

God vein's vine. into the halls of the Hearthfire facility, of all horrors in possibility

 

 

Flitter flew through the sky, always looking at her surroundings. It was a beautiful day. You could see the delight in Flitter's eyes. But when Flitter looked one way, she noticed a big, purple, glowing orb. Flitter rubbed her eyes as if she were hallucinating. She turned the other way. "I need to go to sleep."

 

Flitter came outside the next day. The sun was still shining bright. Flitter went the exact same way she had went, observing all the wildlife and nature. She came back around toward the orb. This time, it had grown bigger. Flitter became confused. She did not think she was hallucinating anymore. Flitter observed the orb closely and noting little tiny particles floating around inside the orb.

 

"Maybe I should ask somepony about this..." Flitter hurried to Twilight's treehouse. "Twilight" Flitter breathed heavily. Flitter took a deep breath. "I was just flying through the air, when suddenly a big purple orb came out the corner of my eye." "Really?" Twilight asked. "Ooooh yeah." Flitter replied. "I'll see what I can find." Twilight said.

 

Flitter flew by the orb the next day. It became bigger over the night. Flitter flew back to Twilight's treehouse. "Got anything yet?" Flitter asked. "Yes." Twilight said. "The Lands of Hearthfire. It says that the orb is caused by two great gods enraged into a battle for Equestria and The Land Of Hearthfire. The Orb will open the gates to Hearthfire and it also says that only five ponies can go in.

 

"Well, the orb is about 5/10 away from the size of one foot." Flitter said. " "well the orb needs to be only seven inches. Which means only one day before it happens!" Twilight exclaimed. Flitter went to bed while Twilight did more research. In the morn, they wondered about what the princess' would do about this event.

 

Suddenly, Princess Celestia broke through Twilight's roof. "There is a door you know." Twilight said. "Flitter, You and 4 others must enter the gates to Hearthfire. Flitter, you must go because every other pony backed out." Princess Celestia said. "I dont know..." Flitter replied. "You must go! we need you Flitter. Oh yeah btw there are only 5 ponies left in Ponyville so yeah." Princess Celestia explained.

Princess Celestia, regardless of what the 5 said, picked them up and dragged them to the orb. The other four included: Cloud Chaser, Sassaflash, Twilight, and Lyra. The orb sucked them in and the orb shut before it could pull in Princess Celestia.

 

 

Chapter 2

 

 

 

One by one, the four ponies fell into The Lands Of Hearthfire. The Lands of Hearthfire have a light red shade, and had low hills and barely any grass. Few trees weren't bare. After about two hours later, all five of the ponies woke up after passing out due to the hypnotising swirl of time-space continuum. Flitter and all of the others were dazed, and dizzy for about 20 minutes after.

 

The first thing they decided to do in this new area was to explore. There were few caves around. Barely any grass, but a lot of trees. The trees had a dark red shade to them. In any way of survival, there is always the step of exploring and figuring out your surroundings. Flitter searched the nearest cave for useful materials, or someplace to set up for the night. Sassaflash and Cloud Chaser went to the tallest hill they could find.

 

Twilight and Lyra focused on gathering plants and materials like Wood, Lettuce, Cabbage etc.. It was a long day of work. Inside the cave, Flitter found a square shaped shelter, fit for all five to be able to squeeze in for the night. That night, they ate 1/5 of their cabbage, split between the five.

 

In the morning, the day darkened. It was like after each day in the Lands of Hearthfire, the day grew darker. Flitter infered that it was just something that occured randomly and continued on with her work. However, Twilight noticed this and read more about these clashing gods. She read that the day darkens when time is running out.

 

Twilight warned the others about this occurance. Twilight guessed because of logic, that this means that when the day gets to be as dark as midnight, then all hell breaks lose. The world becomes corrupted in the eyes of demons and spirits. That is, until the gods stop fighting. That night, the team explored more in Hearthfire. We're they found refuge, in the next area, was deep underground, runes carved on the wall and hyroglyphics scattered acrossed the wall.

 

Chapter 3

 

Flitter and the others observed their surroundings in this cave very closely. They we're persistent to find something, anything. Cloud Chaser found a shovel on the floor half-way broken due to excavation. The floor was all stone, runes covered on the floor also. Except for one spot. Lyra was the only one to notice. She took the shovel, and dug into the dirt in the ground. It was obvious something was there. The ground was spotless of dirt except for that one spot.

 

Lyra dug up the dirt, and found a treasure chest. The treasure chest contained five of each piece of armory and weaponry. A coincidence, maybe. Or just plane luck. These weren't the greedy type of armor like gold plated or anything. They were all studded leather. This wasn't the most efficient armor, but it works.

 

Once everypony got their armor on, they were set. Lyra had found hope for these ponies. Lyra felt proud of herself as everypony congratulated her and thanked her. Suddenly, a loud click whistled throughout the room. The exit was blocked. No way out.

 

 

Chapter 4

"Hey!" Flitter shouted. "Let us out! I am the dovahkiin! Fus Ro Dah!" Flitter blew down the exit. No this isnt really how it goes. its ok story reader. let me fix this for you to make the experience much better for you :D.

 

FIXED: "Hey!" Flitter shouted. "Let us out!" A faint laugh filled out the room. "Ponies. Ponies from Equestria!" The random figure said. "I am God Vein. Your protecter didn't give me this land of Equestria. Blame it on God Sandstorm." God Vein teleported away without giving the ponies any time to speak. After all, they we're speechless anyway.

 

Flitter's mouth hung open. It didn't close until the next day. "Well, everpony. Maybe there is some way to get out of here." Lyra acknowledged. "Your right, Lyra." Flitter trusted Lyra completely, and looked around once more. Across walls, on the floor, on the ceiling, on the exit. Nothing. They all gave up, except for Cloud Chaser and Flitter. Yes, even Lyra. Cloud Chaser looked closely at something she had found on the ground. It said in very tiny letters:

Legend has it that one day, the gates to Hearthfire and all of its horrors, will

one day, be forced open the two world that once lived in peace. due to the forces of the clashing, raging gods that lived

above and beyond both Equestria, and the lands of Hearthfire. Of which the

grand gods shall smite upon the world in blame of thy world and battle for it.

Especially, the Lands of Hearthfire. Only one may stop these Enraged gods.

Only may he or she have help from four friends. Once their souls have been

purified of anger and hate, will everypony have peace. Until then, thy gods

shall fill the world of hate, and thy souls will be enraged. To escaped is to surpass

God vein's vine. into the halls of the Hearthfire facility, of all horrors in possibility

 

Cloud Chaser showed the others. It was obviously a riddle. The team sat down for about two hours thinking about this riddle. Flitter found a lever on the wall, above it said "HINT." Flitter pulled the lever. A voice echoed throughout the room. "Vine. No more hints available." "Wait a minute, it was that simple?" Sassaflash said. There was a vine leading up the wall into a hallway on the wall. "Oh come on!" Lyra yelled. know."

 

 

Chapter 5

The team peaked out the hole into the hallway. The guards were on duty. "Hey, you wanna party?" one said to the other. "Hooker time!" the other one replied. As they walked away, the guards yelled "Teach me how to duggy, teach me, teach me how to duggy!" Cloud Chaser laughed extremely hard at this. Im not gonna lie, I laughed too when I put this in here.

 

The team dropped down into the hall and followed the sign to the Hearthfire Facility. The team entered the Facility, and got access to a bunch of cool weapons. One named "Hearthfire Debilitator." It was a kitana. Flitter picked this up. "Oooh... This one is... the Hearthfire Death Wish." Sassaflash said to her self as she picked this dagger up. Cloud Chaser looked at the "Roaster." A bow with a fire effect to it. Lyra picked up "Departicalizer." A weapon capable of departicalizing anything with a 50% chance. Twilight weld the "I dont even know." a furious sword.

 

All of a sudden, a Blue teleporter with green particles floating around it appeared. The team debated on whether they should step inside, and winded up going in. Inside was God Vein waiting for them. God vein laughed in their face. Vein held him arm up in the air, and teleported their beloved god in his hand. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! he laughed. "Petty little ponies. atleast I know you aren't a pussy like your cats hahahah! but seriously.

 

Lyra used the departicalizer and won. the end. NOPE!

FIXED: Lyra used the departicalizer, and failed. It has a 10 minute cooldown. Flitter went at Vein, and got knocked away instantly. "Is this a challenge?" Vein laughed. "Yes?" Sassaflash replied. Sassaflash started to converse with him. Distracted, not paying attention, shot in the eye with a burning arrow. Vein Screamed. "You little..." Vein said. Cloud Chaser shot another arrow at his eye. "Kid, please." Cloud Chaser said. Ffffffuuuu! Vein screamed. Lyra had the departicalizer recharged, and instantly vaporized Vein. "You got no wood, Vein." Flitter laughed. you know xD. The portal to Equestria opened. The world was restored to peace and harmony. When the killer of the god is killed, the god killed first returns. So everything turned back to normal. "There is an ember of hatred in that place." Flitter said.

 

 

Hope you enjoyed, Everypony! Flitter Flyer signing off. Cya next time!

Edited by Flitter Flyer

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