my first Fluttershy

[imlizyeah 56]

 Hello bronies. I'm new and I thought I should share my first real fanart for MLP. It's not as high quality as some of those amazing artists out there but I was kind of happy with how it turned out.

What do you guys think?

 

[Abstract 831]

Very beautiful!   I like how some of your edges aren't clearly defined, it gives the picture a "softer" feel; perfect for Fluttershy.

[repsol rave 2,963]

looks awesome!

only thing you could improve on would be the proportions of the hindlegs, but for the rest it's a very cool drawing. especially for a first one of fluttershy!

also, i really like the way you did the eyes, they look amazing.

Edited October 20, 2013 by repsol rave

[Star-Gazer 202]

Wow, that's beautiful. Truly amazing, awe inspiring. I wish my first Fluttershy were like that... Mine turned out well, but surely not as well as yours did.

[Legacy Dash 438]

That is awesome! 

Better than anything I could ever do - for sure!

It looks like her mouth is missing though - unless that is intentional (I'm no art critic).

Edited June 13, 2019 by Legacy Dash

[imlizyeah 56]

That is awesome! 

Better than anything I could ever do - for sure!

It looks like her mouth is missing though - unless that is intentional (I'm no art critic).

 

Here, have a stamp of approval...

 

I actually don't think I realized I forgot to add a mouth. I guess I felt like it looked good without? XD

btw: It might be just me; but I read "that is awesome" in Rainbow Dash's voice. =P XD

[raspymanic 36]

Really nice picture of her, i like your style, we need more hand draw artists its always good to just sit and doodle sometimes too

[Wingnut 6,738]

An unusual pose and there are fine points that could use some work.  But I like the coloring and the tenderness this drawing exudes. 

 

Great job for a first Fluttershy! 

[Sig Hoovestrong 837]

I say you nail it pretty good, all proportions seems to be in the right places and also, is cute looking. *squee*

 

Love it, if you have DaviantArt account you should post it there on your own MLP art group. It will fit right in there with other art works.

 

Sig, out. *Squee*

[FNGRpony 655]

I don't say nice things just to be polite,

 

it's good.  I eye balled it to find out what stands out,

and no joke intended you did a bang up job on the eyes.

 

their piercing well done.

[Troblems 5,610]

It's darling, keep at it. Wish I had your drawing skill, or any for that matter. Maybe you should draw yourself a signature, and use it on the forums.

[Virulence 254]

Wow that's fantastic. Keep up the drawing. I really love the colors too. For your first?? That's great. I'd love to see more creations soon.

[deletedaccount0000 216]

Wow this fluttershy is soo adorable! The feeling of shyness just wraps around the picture and just makes her look even cuter!

[Dsanders 5,742]

Wow. For a very first sketch of Fluttershy, this is pretty good. I'm impressed. Though some parts of it look a little off, especially with her almost 'invisible' mouth. 

 

But overall, great job. Keep up the good work.

[SkyBound 825]

Very well done, even more so considering that this your first attempt at fan art.  It is quite simple but I think that simply adds more charm to the picture itself.  My only suggestion would be to work on proportions of the legs but otherwise I see very little else that needs pointed out.

 

Regardless, so long as you had fun making this and you feel it was time well spent, that is what truly matters.  And I do hope to see more in the future so I can see you improve.  Once again, great job!

[Frith is Magick 1,471]

I must say that is really good for a first try. It's much better than anything I've ever done. I also like the pose you used for the drawing.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Looks good mate,

 

but one question.. Why does she look fat? o.o

Things I see.

1) Hindlegs too skinny.

2) I don't see a nose or a mouth here

3) The spacing of her hindlegs are odd.

 

that's all I got..

But overall 7/10.

 

Did a good job here.. love the mane too!