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@@Aerodynas, (No way man. This is too good to stop. I'm just saying you worded the last post so good it would be a good ending to a good story. And the one you just did is really good as well.)

 

Shivty was putting everything she had into this kiss.  No words could ever express how much she was feeling towards Sunny. Not even if they were sad by the greatest  poets of all time. So she gave her this kiss, this kiss that showed more love, more care, more feeling then any poem, sentence or word could ever express. She wished she could make it last forever, but her lunges wouldn't lets her. As she slowly breaks the kiss she gives her a quick small one. Like adding a period to the last sentence to a beautiful story. Shivty looks back into Sunny's eyes and say only three words in her native language. "Unser geliebter alles."

 

((It mean '"our beloved everything" In German.))

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@@Gloomfury, (Heh, thanks, and I most agree. This is very cute)

 

 Sunny was about to suffocate from trying to hold onto the kiss so long. She never wanted to let it go but thank Celestia Shivty did or Sunny would have been passed out. The mare breathed heavily upon it's end but slowed after the follow up by Shivty, a smile creeping up upon her muzzle as she slowly opened her eyes lovingly towards the mare. The sapphires in them twinkled in the watery mist that hung in them. Even though she didn't understand the language, she could almost feel it's meaning, pulling herself closer to Shivty under the tree they had first met. Sunny sighed deeply as a slight breeze brushed through her mane while she grasped Shivty quietly, not dare wanting to let go as she fought to hold the tears in.


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas, (Indeed.))

Shivty slowly lies Sunny down by the tree like she was made of glass and lies down next to her. Like before she couldn't look away from Sunny's eyes. Nor could she think of anything else to say. So she starts stroking her mane like it was made from the finest silk ever crafted.

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@@Gloomfury,

 

Slowly, Sunny laid her face against Shivty's chest with a small sniff. Then, Shivty could feel the wet tears starting to come from Sunny's eyes against her, trickling down her fur. Sunny gave out a muffled whimper that sounded like that of a filly's as she gripped Shivty tightly. The mare was crying.


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas

Shivty sits up a little so she could put her hooves around her. She keeps stoking Sunny's mane to help her calm down a little. Shivty was getting a little worried that Sunny was crying but she didn't think it was a sad cry. "What's the matter, Sunny?" She asks while still stroking her mane.

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@@Gloomfury,

Sunny nuzzled into Shivty's fur more before speaking quietly between sobs, "I...don't have to be strong...anymore. I...can finally cry..." she whimpered, holding onto Shivty for dear life. Her whole life, Sunny was the one who had to care for others, had to cheer others up and encourage them to go far. She portrayed that through her music and dance, thus giving her a cutie mark. It was her purpose to put a smile on other ponies' faces...but there was never such comfort for herself. The barriers she had set up for so long were finally tumbling down in Shivty's arms as the tears poured from Sunny's sapphire eyes quietly. She finally had that shoulder to cry on. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas,

Shivty pulls her closer and starts rubbing her back.  She understands now why she's crying now. Bayonet had the same built up emotions. That's what made Shivty in the first place. But during one of their talks on her first yeah she awoke Bayonet opened up to her and let those emotions out. She keeps stroking her mane lovingly and starts speaking in a soothing tone. "That's it, let it all out. I'm hear for you. And Bany and I always will."

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@@Gloomfury,

 

It was as though Shivty unlocked the floodgates with her voice, causing Sunny to bawl against her chest. Shivty could feel her tense up and shake like a terrified filly as the mare gave Shivty her tears. Never had so much sorrow come from Sunny, but she had been holding it in for so very long as memories of sadness flashed through her mind...but then at the end of the chaos, there was a light. Sunny opened her eyes and saw the silk blades of fur that brushed up against her muzzle. She then looked up, seeing the face of the beautiful mare that was still there...for her. It was probably the happiest moment she had ever experienced, knowing that the mare would never leave her. Then, she quieted her sobs and lowered her eyes into a quiet whimper. Sunny placed her head against Shivty once more, but more gently this time. She shivered only slightly as her cries slowed. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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Shivty starts rocking Sunny a little while she rubs her back when she started to calm down a little. Shivty started to relax a bit when Sunny calmed down. She was also glad that she got it out of her. To help a little Shivty starts humming a song that Bayonets mother used to sing to her. Then she started to sing it.

                         

 

 

                                                                        " Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf. 

                                                                       Der Vater hüt't die Schaf. 
                                                               Die Mutter schüttelt's Bäumelein, 
                                                                 Da fällt herab ein Träumelein. 
                                                                      Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf! 

                                                                        Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf. 
                                                                     Am Himmel ziehn die Schaf. 
                                                                    Die Sternlein sind die Lämmerlein, 
                                                                    Der Mond, der ist das Schäferlein. 
                                                                    Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf! 

                                                                        Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf. 
                                                                       So schenk' ich dir ein Schaf. 
                                                                    Mit einer goldnen Schelle fein, 
                                                                    Das soll dein Spielgeselle sein. 
                                                                         Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf
. "

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@@Gloomfury,

 

It wasn't long before the whimpers ceased, followed by the long rise and fall of Sunny's lungs. Even though they had slept before, Sunny had exerted so much in her cries that it exausted the poor mare.  The song had knocked her out like a young filly in Shivty's arms, Sunny humming in her sleep as she always had.


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas,

After Sunny fell asleep Shivty drifted off as well. She pulls her closer and holds onto her like a lifesaver. During her time asleep she told Bayonet about everything that happened during her time. And just like Shivty told Sunny, Bayonet was really happen to hear that Shivty fell for her as well.

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@@Gloomfury,

 

This time, it was Sunny who woke first, finding that she rested upon the mare's chest whose hoof laid over her. Being extremely soft and quiet, Sunny was able to slip out without waking her and place her blanket she kept upon her. She smiled as she saw the mare sleep, very complacent with the joy she had found. Then, she trotted off back towards Ponyville with a purpose in mind for her soon waking companion. The birds chirped joyfully as the scuffles of Sunny's hooves faded into silence. It was quiet around their tree, with Bayonet lying alone. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas,

 After a bit a of sleep. Bayonet slowly wakes up and feels around for Sunny but she couldn't find her. "Sunny?" She opens her eyes and sees that she's gone. She started to get a little worried but calmed down when she saw the blanket on her. She gave it a quick sniff. From the sent of sugar she could tell it was sunny's. She folds the blanket and puts it in her back and heads toward the town to look for her.

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@@Gloomfury,

 

It wasn't long after Bay's arrival in town that she could see a wooden stage with Sunny and a stallion on top: Sunny with a guitar, the smaller stallion with a fiddle. Sunny and the stallion were wearing cowpony hats upon their heads and sat upon stools next to each other behind microphones. Sunny waved with a beaming smile to Bay as she stringed her guitar. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas,

Bayonet  was surprised and confused at the same time. 'How long was I asleep?' She thought as she walked up to the stage. When she got to the front she looks up to Sunny with a confused smile. "Sunny? When did this stage get built and why are you up there? Are you going to perform?"

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@@Gloomfury,

 

Sunny giggled a little before winking down to Bayonet. "You ain't been out too long," she nodded happily, "Me an' my brother are just experts at this sorta thing by now." The mare looked over to the stallion next to her who tipped his hat to Bayonet, "Pleasure to meet ya ma'am," he stated,"I was just in town when Sunny hit me with the news. The name's Twine Caramel...but I think Sunny has somethin' to give ya as an answer to your question." At that point, Sunny striked a small chord upon her lone guitar, looking at Bayonet preciously. Her voice sang out tenderly and beautifully, meaning every word she sung to Bay:

 

"One night when the moon rose and I laid alone,

You walked into my life and gave me a precious song.

You were oh so amazing, and a love for you I felt strong,

And now I've come to realize, making all your days brighter is where I belong.

 

I thought you should know,

I thank the stars that I can be with you.

 And all the world may beat you down but you'll see

Oh my precious love... I'll always be with you...my Bay.

 

 And even after all this time, there's not another purpose I might find,

In this world that will give love like you do.

Your love to me is so sublime that there are no words yet to describe,

The dream I'm living here along with you

 

And I thought you should know,

I thank the stars that I can be with you.

And all the world may beat you down but you'll see

Oh my precious love...I'll always be with you...my Bay.

 

And all the world may beat you down but you'll see

Oh my precious love...I'll always be with you

Yes I swear I'll always be there

Oh I promise...I'll be with you forever...my Bay."

 

Sunny's brother nodded to his sister who had choked up upon the last verse as she looked teary eyed at Bay with a warm smile spread across her muzzle. Twine then winked at Sunny, "Go on now...I'll let the fam know back home."

The mare, Sunny, needed no second bidding as she slowly placed her guitar on the stage and hopped off...proceeding with watery eyes towards Bay.


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas,(Wow, I got a tear in my eye.)

 Bayonet had tears in her eyes way before the song ended. Now one has ever made a song for her, let alone sing it in front of her, on stage, in the middle of town. With a big group of ponies behind her. When the song ended Bayonet quickly runs toward Sunny. She pulls her into a loving kiss. After a bit she breaks it. "Sunny, that was so beautiful."

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@@Gloomfury,

 

Sunny blushed as she smiled warmly to Bayonet, "Not as beautiful as you, Bay...not as beautiful as you." Amid the light applause, Sunny kissed Bay's cheek preciously before hugging her tightly to her heart. "You're sweeter than all the caramel in my name and I wouldn't trade a sec of my time with ya for anythin' in Equestria," she promised. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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@@Aerodynas

Bayonet sniffs a little and wipes away some tears. She hugs her back with tears still falling."I feel the same way. I love you, Sunny. I love you so much." Bayonet was so happy that she could't control herself. She just starts kissing Sunny like crazy. On her cheeks on her lips her nose and forehead.

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@@Gloomfury,

 

Sunny couldn't help but giggle at the tickling affection that Bay gave, smiling widely. "Haha, I love you too Bay," she reciprocated, squealing in laughter under the onslaught of kissing. Then, she looked deeply into Bay's eyes, nuzzling the tears away with her muzzle. "You are so beautiful...ya know that?" Sunny mentioned with a passionate smile.


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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Bayonets face turns scarlet. "Danke, Sunny. But I think your more beautiful then me. Your sunshine colored mane, your golden brown coat. Your ocean blue eyes. Not to mention the sweet sent of sugar on you." She places a caring hoof on Sunny's cheek. "Not even a princess can compare to you."

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@@Gloomfury,

 

Sunny rubbed her cheek against Bay's hoof comfortingly, kissing it in response. "Thank you Bay...but you'll never know how wonderful you are to me. Let's go do somethin'. I wanna make memories with you." She said entranced by her love for her dearest companion. 


"You have to establish the horizon. You have to mark the white. A simple enough act, you might say, but any act that re-makes the world is heroic. Or so I've come to believe."

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"Alright."Bayonet takes Sunny's hoof and starts leaning them to the sweet shop where they had there first kiss. To there luck it was open this time. Bayonet leads them in and ordered her German chocolate treat she wanted. She takes a seat in a booth without leaving Sunny's side.

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Applejack nodded to Soaring, smiling. 
"Yup, we're still open fer some time," she said, and turned to the timid ponies.
"There's nothin' ta be afraid of here, nopony'd ever think of hurtin' either of y'all or anythin'," she smiled warmly at the two of them.

Sunset timidly looked up at Dusk, her one visible eye begging him to go home with her. She hated asking him if he didn't want to leave, but she wouldn't go without him and she was already trembling from the fear of the other ponies. She didn't want to be rude, but the two of them had already eaten, and being around several ponies t once had a history of giving her panic attacks. 
@@The Time Pony,
(Lol, I must be really sick. I almost had "Sunset looked up at lask." xD)

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@@Mint Drop,

((Its fine, thanks for posting. Hope you get better))

 

Dusk tried to think of a tactical way to get them both out of this mess. He looked at his phone ((Assuming the technology allows)). "O-oh no, i have meeting to get to." He showed them his phone, and indeed it did say adoption meeting. "Sunset, i think we should go. Sorry everypony, you too AJ" He slowly turned and began to trot away with Sunset.


Ambrosehttp://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/ambrose-r4626 Lifes gears always go forward

Dusk Shadow:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-shadow-r4871Trying to fly high yet other keep bringing me down.

Shifted:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/crimson-shadowshifted-r5255 You think you have problems?

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