Drawing my OCs, What you think of them?

[Ghost Panda 5]

Been out and trying to draw couple of my OCs. Would add more later if finish.

Liebestoter. My beloved Plague Doctor with his buddy, Puffin'.

 

Edited December 24, 2013 by Verruckt

[longgone 873]

I've always had a fascination with plague doctors, their masks always creep me out and stuff. I know some doctors had a cane, to which they would use to poke and examine the patient in a "safe" manner, I bet Liebestoter would look even more dashing with a cane xP

[Ghost Panda 5]

Perhaps Liebestoter would with a cane, Italy Cat. Thank you for I would add that to note.

[Ghost Panda 5]

Here my other OC. Who's name is the same as mine, Verruckt. You may can him a WIP pony and that he sort of a blank flank. But slowly but surely, this unicorn would be as grand like the others after few adjustments and tinkling around. 

[Slice0Pie 815]

The picture you just posted right now:

Some of the legs seem to sharp

The outline seems a bit messy

The mane has no outline, it sort of bothers me, but if its a certain style, then ok

Back leg, the bump seems to weird

Neck seems to fat

Oh and the horn has a different outline color

I give it a 8/10

Edited December 24, 2013 by NightmareCadence

[Ghost Panda 5]

Well thanks you for the tips, Nightmare Cadence (And that little score).I have kids pulling and running around me, so it just makes my shaking hands do even worst. I got lost with the 'skeleton', I was trying to aim in a slight mid run/bolt with a twist of the body. But we can all say that was a fail. I thought I outlined the mane and tail, but it seen I didn't. And sorry about the horn's color. It was blending in with his mane.

Overall, this one of Verruckt the pony was not as greatly drawn with care as the other one was. But I would take notes on what you said and let see if I could make a new and improve one.

[Commander Tangent 861]

Woo, Plague Doctor OCs for the win. 

 

Anyways, he looks quite nice.

[Ghost Panda 5]

I can see you're a lively fan of them, no?Chehe^^. Some Plague Ponies are pretty neat looking. You could put some much work into simple little designs that not so... Crazy.But it's all good until somepony decided to nip one's rear for having the 'same' idea as them.

But Thank-you, Trangent

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

As a German, I must point out that these names are a mess in terms of spelling and grammar. If you like, I could translate what you originally had in mind.

[Ghost Panda 5]

Thanks but no thanks, Silverwisp. They may be funky but that how I seemly like it. Beside, the names been grinded into paper so hard, it's impossible to ease them out. 'Liebestoter' was a mistake. It may read out weirdly or something when it was suppose to be "Love Dead". Short story, I meant to send the word 'Liebe Toten' but I didn't re-read my paper when I setting up for LARP. So for a while, the word "Liebestoter" is what I'm stuck with. But as you may tell, I'm not been hammer by bother, just a little annoyed thought. But it okay, for nothing but a name to play upon, for no one as yet been killed by it.  Thankfully.

For Verruckt, it simply mean "Crazy". Just I was both lazy to put in the proper 'U' and that the post slightly denied me on doing that. Even so, "Nutty" may not be the same word but it means the same terms as 'Crazy'. You know what, I may will change his name. Because it giving almost everyone a nasty wax off burn, since the pony has nothing to being 'Crazy' but skittish as a field mouse. So, the name may change to 'Jurgen' because there no way you can go wrong with it, unless someone here has that name.>>

So again, no thank-you. My duct-taped boat seem to be floating just fine. But if there's any case of holes/sinking, I be sure to find you for some help.

Edited December 27, 2013 by Verruckt