searching The High Vanguard of Equestria (Adventure)

[Ampharos 1,009]

Hey everyone, Ampharos here! I haven't really made an adventure RP before and the last one I made got no responses so I decided to try again. Here goes...

 

In the distance future, the Elements of Harmony met the end of the their times long ago and a new threat has arose in Equestria. While Princess Twilight and the Alicorn Princesses are still alive, the threat is too great for even the four of them. They have decided to create a team of 5 to 7 ponies who will be able to destroy this threat once and for all. 

 

The pony I'll be using is named Forgefire, a fairly old pony who was assigned to be a sort of leader to the High Vanguard. He is an auburn coated unicorn with a somewhat long and messy orange mane. He essentially doesn't have any other magical abilities aside from basic levitation and a very small amount of other things. He uses this levitation to carry his trusty war hammer. He is a veteran of the royal guard who retired, but was so honored that he was called back by the princesses to lead the Vanguard. He is immensely powerful, but due to his old age has low stamina.

 

General forum rules apply, i.e no alicorns (I hope that was obvious), no godmodding, etc. I guess I'll allow romance stuff but no NSFW. Nobody wants to see that 

 

So yea! Don't think I have much else to say other than to have fun!

 

Members of the Great Celestial Vanguard of Equestria (or simply the High Vanuard):

1. Forgefire the Honored- Ampharos

 

2. Eclipse Scribe the Loyal- Cinderscribe

 

3. Gold Icharus the Healer- Commander Tangent 

 

 

Since this seems to be a common problem so far, your OC must be someone who would join and be useful in an elite team of fighters, but not somepony who's OP and silly. Also, I will be harsh about whether or not I think your character can join. I won't just accept you cause you posted a link.

Edited December 31, 2013 by Ampharos

[Nomadic 210]

@@Ampharos

 

Quick question, is this RP going to include higher-end technology, or is it going to be more based around the Medieval-ish setting of the show still?

[Moonbacon 384]

WHY ALWAYS NO GOT DAM ALICORNS SCREW CANNON RPS ARENT CANNON

[The Blades Shadow 445]

Um... Is there any rule against changelings?

*Points at Pacific* Hint hint...

Pacific: Are you talking about me again?!

What? No, no... Maybe.

[Horsy 193]

Can  I be one of the bad guys

Since I have this OC http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/evilena-rich-r5439

[Ampharos 1,009]

 

@@Ampharos

 

Quick question, is this RP going to include higher-end technology, or is it going to be more based around the Medieval-ish setting of the show still?

 

More medieval-ish stuff. I'll be including some things not currently seen in the show, such as ships and stuff. Nothing to techy though.

 

 

Um... Is there any rule against changelings?

*Points at Pacific* Hint hint...

Pacific: Are you talking about me again?!

What? No, no... Maybe.

 

I'm not really sure Pacific is really fit for this RP. He's a hardcore pacifist and in this RP he's supposed to be in an elite group of fighters? Doesn't really make sense And I just realized Pacific's name is a play on pacifist/passive *facepalm*

 

 

Can  I be one of the bad guys

Since I have this OC http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/evilena-rich-r5439

 

Sorry, but no. There aren't really going to be any other villains besides the main one. And even if I allowed your OC in as a side villain, which I don't really want to do, she would only be there for a very short period of time. You also might want to work on the back story and stuff of that OC, it kinda of makes her unappealing to be honest. I'm sure after some editing she'll be better

Edited December 30, 2013 by Ampharos

[Horsy 193]

 

 

Sorry, but no. There aren't really going to be any other villains besides the main one. And even if I allowed your OC in as a side villain, which I don't really want to do, she would only be there for a very short period of time. You also might want to work on the back story and stuff of that OC, it kinda of makes her unappealing to be honest. I'm sure after some editing she'll be better

 

you are right

[Geek0zoid 1,468]

Can I join into this one with Blasted Nova?
Link's in my sig 

[Ampharos 1,009]

Can I join into this one with Blasted Nova?

Link's in my sig 

 

No offense, but your OC's kind of ridiculous. First, I'm not really a fan of the whole human-to-pony thing but I can overlook it if it's a good OC. But an earth pony that can run at 770 miles per hour is so incredibly OP that I can't accept. If he can move that fast, there's honestly just no point in having anything fight him because he can dodge anything. And even if you come up with a way that he gets hit sometimes, Blast is still pretty silly in my mind. Sorry if it's too harsh, just want to help make your OC more appealing to picky asses like me 

[Geek0zoid 1,468]

No offense, but your OC's kind of ridiculous. First, I'm not really a fan of the whole human-to-pony thing but I can overlook it if it's a good OC. But an earth pony that can run at 770 miles per hour is so incredibly OP that I can't accept. If he can move that fast, there's honestly just no point in having anything fight him because he can dodge anything. And even if you come up with a way that he gets hit sometimes, Blast is still pretty silly in my mind. Sorry if it's too harsh, just want to help make your OC more appealing to picky asses like me 

Yeah, I've been meaning to tone it down a bit. I just haven't found the opportunity to do so.

Could you check it again, now that I've edited it?

Oh, and I barely mention human stuff in RP's anyways. I think that'd be a bit much.

[Ampharos 1,009]

Yeah, I've been meaning to tone it down a bit. I just haven't found the opportunity to do so.

Could you check it again, now that I've edited it?

Oh, and I barely mention human stuff in RP's anyways. I think that'd be a bit much.

 

550 is still really ridiculous. If you really want to make your OC fast, I highly suggest you make it a pegasus. I think I know that you don't really want to do that, but it's honestly just too ridiculous for an earth pony to go that fast. It's too ridiculous for even a pegasus to go that fast! Sorry mate, but I don't think I can accept Blasted Nova

[The Blades Shadow 445]

 

I'm not really sure Pacific is really fit for this RP. He's a hardcore pacifist and in this RP he's supposed to be in an elite group of fighters? Doesn't really make sense And I just realized Pacific's name is a play on pacifist/passive *facepalm*

1.Really? *Slow clap* good job...

2. You haven't seen some of the other RP's he's been in have you? If he absolutely needs to, instict takes over and, well... Ponies are probably gonna die (Not literally, but you get the point...)

[Geek0zoid 1,468]

550 is still really ridiculous. If you really want to make your OC fast, I highly suggest you make it a pegasus. I think I know that you don't really want to do that, but it's honestly just too ridiculous for an earth pony to go that fast. It's too ridiculous for even a pegasus to go that fast! Sorry mate, but I don't think I can accept Blasted Nova

Ugh.

Could you at least check my other OC, White Eclipse? If you won't put Blast in, at least look at Eclipse.

[Ampharos 1,009]

1.Really? *Slow clap* good job...

2. You haven't seen some of the other RP's he's been in have you? If he absolutely needs to, instict takes over and, well... Ponies are probably gonna die (Not literally, but you get the point...)

 

Yea I'm a slow thinker. If given enough time I can work things out, just not short amounts of time. But ehh.... I still don't know. By the looks of it, it doesn't appear that he would even join the vanguard...

[The Blades Shadow 445]

Yea I'm a slow thinker. If given enough time I can work things out, just not short amounts of time. But ehh.... I still don't know. By the looks of it, it doesn't appear that he would even join the vanguard...

I could use Swinging then... He's a bit... Insane, so I'm pretty sure he would do something like that.

Either him or my newest OC (When he's finished that is)

Edited December 30, 2013 by Blazing Hoof

[The Elusive Cinder 1,328]

A vanguard? Say no more!

 

Eclipse Scribe - sure he was written for the Nightmare Moon era but it doesn't take too much imagination for him to fit in here: Battlemage, Bodyguard, Loyal to the point of stupidity... and a lot more serious and competent than Scribe Shield.

 

Here's his link:

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/eclipse-scribe-r3648

[Ampharos 1,009]

@,

 

Thank you Cinderscribe! This is the kind of OC I was looking for here! Accepted! 

 

 

I could use Swinging then... He's a bit... Insane, so I'm pretty sure he would do something like that.

Either him or my newest OC (When he's finished that is)

 

I guess I could think about Swinging, but I'll wait for your newer OC. Like I stated above I'd really prefer ponies like Eclipse who were/are either in the royal guard or are a seasoned fighter.

[Commander Tangent 861]

@Ampharos 

 

I like this, may I use Icarus?

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dr-icarus-gold-icarus-r4796

Edited December 31, 2013 by Commander Tangent

[The Elusive Cinder 1,328]

@@Commander Tangent,

 

I believe you may have @mentioned the wrong person instead of @@Ampharos

[Commander Tangent 861]

@,

 

It appears so xD. Man I need to sleep. 

[Ampharos 1,009]

@@Commander Tangent,

 

Awesome, another good OC. Accepted! I'm thinking of having your characters canon actually be an element in the story. But like I said, I'm still thinking.

[The Elusive Cinder 1,328]

Happens to all of us: I've mentioned folks in RP's who weren't even involved in them before...

[Commander Tangent 861]

@@Ampharos,

 

Alright thanks for accepting .