Twi

[L-Ring 165]

I don't always Twilight, but when I do...

 

This happens.

 

 

[Onylex 2,837]

lol nice, although her neck dose look a little thick... 

[L-Ring 165]

lol nice, although her neck dose look a little thick... 

Hm ಠ_ಠ you're right. I seem to have issues with neck thickness XD

[SkyBound 829]

You did a lovely job with this one.  Though the neck is slightly thick, I do not see anything starkly out of place.  I was never particularly fond of eyebrows and such clipping through hair, but that is more of a preference rather than a criticism and detracts nothing from your work.

 

The only thing I would suggest is to experiement more on the colors used for backgrounds, even if it a simple one as you have right here.  Though this one works given the smeared nature of the colors, it is often best not to use the same or similar colors that were used for your focal point, as it tends to distract the eye and blend together.

 

Again, great job and keep it up!

[L-Ring 165]

You did a lovely job with this one.  Though the neck is slightly thick, I do not see anything starkly out of place.  I was never particularly fond of eyebrows and such clipping through hair, but that is more of a preference rather than a criticism and detracts nothing from your work.

 

The only thing I would suggest is to experiement more on the colors used for backgrounds, even if it a simple one as you have right here.  Though this one works given the smeared nature of the colors, it is often best not to use the same or similar colors that were used for your focal point, as it tends to distract the eye and blend together.

 

Again, great job and keep it up!

Hm, I can see what you mean about backgrounds o3o I'll have to keep that in mind the next time I get to doodling 83

 

Your suggestions were very helpful, thank you! 8D

[ReverseFaller 2,484]

That's some awesome artwork you made there. I love it!

[Casey 9]

I don't always Twilight, but when I do...

 

This happens.

 

 

This is really great! I especially like the face and how it fits well. 

 

I don't like to critique due to my low knowledge in art @~@ but I think this is just fine. Though yes, neck needs fixing and outlines needs some cleaning. 

[Silver Letter 1,832]

My only complaint is that Twiley has a curved horn like King Sombra. I would fix that. I like the art though. Please continue making more.

[Blue Parasprite 197]

Not too shabby! It's pretty good for a freehand drawing. The only issue I have with it is that you can see her eyebrows through her mane. That buggs me for some reason. :/ Other than that though, it's great!