Thought on my first premise for a fanfic.

[Mr. Critical 434]

I want my first fanfic to have this premise and want to know if it has been done already or if its a good idea.

plot:

Twilight is at her entrance exam at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. As we all know, Rainbow Dash's sonic rainboom caused Twilight to have a magical surge and hatched her dragon egg with flying colors. But thats not all she does. At her feet is a creature she does not recognize, along with Celestia, and are at a loss for what young Twilight has brought. Turns out it is an orphaned boy she brought forth through space and time. With no knowledge of how to send him back, Twilight sees it as her responsibility to take him in along with her baby dragon. The two grow up next to each other and the boy has a family that wants him, and Twilight gains a second brother. From there, the fic will take place from the show and we see how he adapts to a world not his own.

 

Basically I want to do a human in equestrian, alternate universe, and maybe anthro. Don't see a lot of those. I need to know if this is a good idea and/of if its been done before.

[MLP Moth 224]

Anthro would be interesting for this. I have never thought of another creature besides spike being Twilight's pet.

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@MLP Moth

He's not as much as a pet, but more of an adopted brother.

[Elements of Power 12]

Seems good for an anthro. I normally don't like that genre, but this seems fairly good.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Okay then. I guess anthro it is.

[MLP Moth 224]

@@MLP Moth

He's not as much as a pet, but more of an adopted brother.

It can escalate really quickly if he was. Keep up this idea, there aren't any fanfics like this to my knowledge.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Excellent. Now I can avoid those pesky copyright problems.

[Moniker 93]

Just do well in description. Odds are there has been a fanfic for this. As a fanfic writer myself I know even if there is, just do well with character development or grammar. That's all I can say other than good luck!

[Mr. Critical 434]

Grammar's not a problem for me.