Sketches of ponies

[flameflare 7]

 

Here are some sketches I just did for fun. Any constructive criticism? Thanks everypony!

 

~Flameflare

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Several pieces of advice for you.

 

First off, the body of one of the ponies should look like a bean when you draw them. You should elongate the body slightly and then fatten the legs (not by much, though). The mane and the ears are great, but I think that you are just a little bit off in the placement of your eyes. Also, mares' muzzles end in curves, not in points, so rounding off the end of Pinkie's nose would help improve the image.

 

Other than that, I think they look good.

[Star-Gazer 202]

I see improvement. Keep workin' at it!

Also... Dem snouts. Muzzles. Wuteva you wanna call 'em... Shorten them.   

 

Other than the rediculously long faces (Get it? Because they're ponies? Baby... Horses...? ...Kill me.), erase the guidelines and work on the positioning of the legs. Good work!
 

[Zyla Fae 5,411]

These are really good looking!

 

Other than the fact that they'd look better when the guidelines are removed, there is the fact that part of the length that you put on Pinkie Pie's legs should've been used to make a neck, and her body was just a bit too big height wise.

 

But other than that, these look really good ^^