OC ART REQUEST

[Astral Blitzen 469]

Looking for someone who can draw an 17 panel comic. (They don't have to be one panel per page).

 

Characters:

Astral Blitzen (just have her wearing the top hat in this comic and her tail touches the ground in length Another image of her (the chair and whip is her cutie mark, not the one in this image)

 

Sage Leaf (the green maned pony)

 

 

 

Here is the comic story

 

Sorry for any spelling and grammar errors. The time of day is in the afternoon and the house in general is treehouse-ish or like a cabin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Panel 1 "Welcome ladies snickering, and CAULIFLOWERS to this faaaaaaaaan-bucking-tabulous event, where I will make sweet, hot love to this potato!", 

 

Panel 2 She turned around and pried open a cabinet behind her and reached in for a potato, but the cabinet was empty.

 

Panel 3 She turned back around, "Well it looks like she finally left me. She said I was too crazy or something; I had no idea… what… she… was talking about". 

 

Panel 4 The mare reached for a wooden stool, pulled it up to her and sat down crossing her legs.

 

Panel 5"I’m just kidding, hah! I got you and you and all of you with that joke, didn’t I?", she smiled cheekily, "I peeled her skin, then immersed her in hot scalding water! Oh! What fun it was. Any questions?"

 

Panel 6 She turned her attention to a kettle on the stove. "Yes, you, ma’am."

 

Panel 7 "…" "Oh, well I didn’t eat her, she would’ve tasted like, blech." "…" (the '...' indicates the kettle talking XD)

 

Panel 8 "Where’d I hide the body, oh you know, the ground." The mare smiled to herself, twitching and rocking back and forth. 

 

Panel 9 A green-maned mare entered the kitchen and the crazed mare caught sight of her.

 

Panel 10"Well, it looks like we have an unexpected, special guest.", she grinned, "come here".

 

Panel 11 "Um, Astral, are you having another episode?", she said with slight concern.

 

Panel 12 "Wow, what a card! And what is your name, miss?", she gave her a wolf whistle and stared her up and down.

 

Panel 13 She placed a hoof on Astral’s shoulder and whispered into her ear, "If you don’t cut it out, I will get the straitjacket, babe".

 

Panel 14 "The only thing strait about a straitjacket, is the lampshade, isn’t that right folks?"

 

Panel 15 The green maned pony grimaced. "That’s it! You’re coming with me.".

 

Panel 16 She took Astral by the hoof and yanked her off the chair onto the ground and then began to drag her out of the kitchen.

 

Panel 17 "You’ve been a wonderful audience, thanks, and goodnight, everything!", she exclaimed before she was completely out of the kitchen.

If you have any questions, post them here or message me

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Edited March 22, 2014 by Astral Blitzen